Kriyansh Reunion SS (part 10 pg74)(Completed) - Page 37

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sm: well yahi toh problem hai. Agar use bol diya toh woh vaapas nhi jayegi kyunki woh yahi sochegi ki woh Rey ko kaise face kregi. Use yeh thodi na pata hai ki Rey ko sab pata hai. Speaking of which Rey beta aapko kaise pata chala tha iske bare mein on the first place?

R: woh actually uske letter ke through..

Sm: Kya??? Matlab usne fir se jhuth bola main... (rey cuts in middle)


RLB bhi kriya ki tarah hyper ho jaati hai.


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Posted: 13 years ago
R: aunty puri baat sunlo.. Woh letter college ki filon ke saath mere paas aa gaya. I think so woh use kisi aur cheez mein rakhna chahti hogi but Galati se college ke documents mein rakha gaya hoga. Aunty plz iss baat ke liye maaf kar dena and plz mujhe reject mat karna plz (and he mumbles away apologies.)

Rey ki tho saans atak gayi hogi.kitna dartha hai yeh.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sm: shaant!!! Main aisa kuch nhi krungi. Use toh yeh bhi nhi pata ki letter tumhare paas hai. Pata nhi kitne dinon se use dhundh rhi hai. Har din ghar ka naksha bigaad deti hai use dhundhne ke chakkar mein. Abhi bhi i am sure agar ghar jaungi toh pura ghar aisa lagega maano tufaan aaya ho..

yeh hypewr active reaction kab khatam hoga.Dono bhilkul sahi hai..
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Sm: shaant!!! Main aisa kuch nhi krungi. Use toh yeh bhi nhi pata ki letter tumhare paas hai. Pata nhi kitne dinon se use dhundh rhi hai. Har din ghar ka naksha bigaad deti hai use dhundhne ke chakkar mein. Abhi bhi i am sure agar ghar jaungi toh pura ghar aisa lagega maano tufaan aaya ho...wah haan hum bhi pehele baar dekh ke dhar gaye the ise.

So: Chalo chodo yeh batao ki directly Rey use kyun nhi bol deta ki use sach pata hai. Problem solved!!!!

R: par fir woh guilty feel karegi ki usne mujhe woh sab bola and sochegi ki woh mujhe deserve nhi karti. (gets up and moves in opp. Direction with his back towards them) Pata nhi chhoti si cheez ko itna bada bana deti hai. Bade matters toh itne lightly leti hai lekin chhote matters ko itna bada bana deti hai. (he turns while saying) after all they are g... (but then sees them eyeing and he stops) ..i mean woh isse itne asaani se nhi bhulayegi..Wow Rey knows her so much.kitne ache se jaante hai yeh.

G: toh ab kya karega. Tu abhi apne dost se baat kar rha tha na...

R: haan swayam ne toh pehle yahi kaha ki use directly bata dun lekin jab maine use complications batayi then he said to apply the reverse psychology fir se but thoda change kar ke..nice idea

Sm: fir se matlab?? Isse pehle bhi use ki hai kya kisis aur pe..

R: kisi aur pen hi usi pe... (scratching his head)aur kis pe karega.

So: Rey thoda toh batao na apni lovestory ke bare mein i mean kab kaise kahan sab kuch. (eyeing smriti) zyada detail main nhi matlab..In short the best one

Sm: (senses every1's eyes on her) haan Rey kareeban thoda mujhe bhi toh pata chale tumhari lovestory ke bare mein ki kaise tumne uss jhalli ko thoda girlish behave krna sikha diya (smiles). I know ki use patina itna asaan nhi rha hoga but tum toh Reyaansh Singhania hona. Ladkiyan tumpe marti hain. Pata nhi tumhe usse kaise pyaar ho gaya. I mean am sure ki usse tumse pehle pyaar huya hoga but she resisted it. Hona bhi chahiye aakhir ho hi tum itne handsome, dashing, smart boy(laughs).damad ke liye nice complement.


Rey couldn't help just grin as he wasn't sure that it was a taunt or compliment. Every1 laughs seeing his expression.

G: sach mein batao na kaise pataya tune use ya usne tujhe as tum donon hi apne aap mein unique ho..

Rey the tells him how he fell in love, how they fought, slap, friends and more than friends. Then he stops. Every1 looks at him expectedly thinking he would continue further.Did he say the hai rama , dil se,radha kaise nah jale,fire exit nd all????


So: aur??????

R: kya aur!!!!! (confused)

Ra: hamara matlab hain ruk kyun gaye aage ki kahaani batao..yeh kahani nahi sachayi hai rey ke liye.


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Posted: 13 years ago

R: bas itna hi...

Every1: what?????? (and they start laughing)

Smriti was the one laughing hardly. She comes near him and pats on his head.

S: sahi mein tumhe jhuth bolne ki zarurat nhi. I mean u can tell apni lovestory. Maine tumhe acceptance dedi hai.dats the truth.

R: aunty bass itni hai...

S: common don't joke. Matlab tum the hottie, meri beti se pyaar karne lage woh bhi love at first sight and then tumne use pure saal pursue kiya and uske haan ke liye itna sab kiya and u didn't even look at other girls.yeh kaisa sawal hai.He is so true in love with ur gal.

R (scratching his head): haan!!!!cute

Smriti is flabbergasted. Why??? Becoz she thought just the opposite that Kriya was the one who fell in love first and she pursued him and not the vice-versa.

S: am really sorry Rey!!kitne baar bolna padega.but u'll come to know the true Rey soon. fully.


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Posted: 13 years ago

R: aunty ab kya huya...

S: I mean maine sahi mein tumhe samajhne mein galti kar di. I mean mujhe laga ki tum un college boys ki tarah ho jo har din ek nayi ladki ke saath dikhte. U know the typical Casanova. I mean sahi mein agar maine tumhe Casanova kaha toh yeh toh ya tumhari insult hogi ya fir iss word ko bahut bada promotion mil gaya.Yeh us word ka promotion hai.

R: what!!! Aap aisa samajhti thi. Baatcutter bhi yahi samajhti thi. Kitni mushkil se woh convince ho paayi thi ki main aisa nhi hun jaisa woh sochti hun.Akhir mu se nil gaya spl name which is his copy right.

G: Baatcutter???sab ko suprise tho hona hi tha.


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Posted: 13 years ago
😊wowww i loved it why do u thnk k we'll fell asleep bt it was awesome
finnally they met again wow
thats wat we were waiting for..
yo i m so happy now
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R: haan main use baatcutter bulata hun. Woh mujhe apni baat puri nhi krne deti and most of the time hyper-active mode pe chali jaati hai. And...

Smriti eyes him and he shuts up..kitna dartha hai rey😉

Sm: well sahi kaha woh bachpan se aisi hi hai.

Ra:Iss baat ko chodo par yeh batao "acche dost se zyada" yeh kaunsa status huya.the name which Kriya gave their relation.

😳😛

So: Haan I mean jis tarah se tum baat kar he the mujhe laga tum usse pyaar karte ho..S he does it truely.


R: yeh kaisi baat kr rhi ho di. Of course I love her.

Ra: toh bola kyun nhi..

R: agar seedhe-2 bol deta na jahan tak story aayi hai vahan tak bhi nhi pahuch paati. Pata hai kitni mehnat krni padi thi use convince krne mein. Hamesha apni feelings ko daba deti hai and..

hmmm s kria is expect in hiding her feelings.

Sm: apni baton se saamne walon ko chup karva deti hain kyunki woh use bolne ka mauka hi nhi deti hain. Haina?? (eyes Rey and he nods like a small kid. Pauses.) But fir bhi Rey ek cheez toh manni padegi tum logon ki lovestry bahut slow hain i mean agar main interrupt nhi bhi karti na toh pata nhi tum donon ek-dusre ko bolte kit um donon actually kya feel krte ho.


rey ka har ek expession itna cute kyu hai???

true agar aap nahi aaati tho yeh sdhayad confess karne mai bahut time le lete.



Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey plz dnt stop this...wel i know u dnt know me..bt m a silent reader of ur story...i just love the way u write...awesome 8 parts...
And wats better than converting into ff...(woww)
if u stop writing seriously i wil go into pain same as kriyansh did...
D3 CV's should realy approch u sumday if they want to bring kriyansh back...ur confession part was the best...and that letter was superb...
Plz dnt stop it...
And if u cont do pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago

N: shayad jb 30-35 ke ho jaate tab..

Every1 laughs and Rey has no idea what to do whether to laugh or be sad. After sometime he leaves the room and smriti follows him.my god rey is so nervous.


Sm: (puts her hand on his shoulder) dekho beta tum donon ek-dusre se pyaar krte ho. Jaake use keh do na. I mean not as this Rey. (rey confused) mera matlab hai tum ho toh cool dude na jispe ladkiyan marti hain. Just bring that form to make her confess. Swayam ne sahi kaha tumhe reverse psychology thoda alag tarah se lagaani padegi. Woh apne aap toh bolne se rhi and ab toh woh aur bhi kregi chahe ismein uski khushi kyun na ho.

R: aap sach mein yeh kehna chah rhe ho ki main apna woh avatar istemaal karun jispe ladkiyan marti hain. Lekin kriya kbhi nhi..

Sm: dekho woh ladki hai plus woh tumse pyaar krti hain. Just show her that if she lets u go she is committing the biggest mistake.



Wah smritti kya idea diya.

u r so sweet.


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