Kriyansh Reunion SS (part 10 pg74)(Completed) - Page 14

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Zehnaseeb. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
i wish they meet in the orphanage n solve all the problems
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww
it was really heart touching and made me cry... hope rey finds a solution to the problem soon...

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
" sorry, but ab main aur nhi likh paungi. Diary mein apni life ke bare mein likhti thi. Lekin jab meri life hi nhi rhi toh main kya likhun. Dance ke bina life incomplete hai lekin unke bina life hai hi nhi"
touched best lines ever i am noting des lines dey r percious for me
loved d update hope dey meet in
orphanage
thnx for d pm srry for d late comment exams r gng on so !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
*Unres* Now !

To begin with I would like to tell you. good choice for the topic. The hot new topic. Woh kehte hain na, strike the iron when it's hot. Really nice selection.

Firstly the beginning, man it was shattering. I mean I had tears in my eyes reading about Rey's condition and his actions. And the part when he thinks of getting rid of her belongings, that just made me think one thing - 'Is it that easy to forget everything ?'

Everyone working together and that too in terms of dance - wow, that was good to read. And Sharon taking the charge, good. And the more surprising part Weaklings specially Bharat accepting her. Well she's sweet. Hope they all get to know about that side to her.

Of course Rey would behave oddly only on hearing her name. He's standing in front of you alive that's a big thing in itself. It hurts to even imagine his condition.

Urgh !! Please someone get that Chee-vam to me - I swear I'll kill him. What does he think of himself ? He thinks he's smart, well he's just shit ! Moron !

How is that possible ? Does Rey not know his 'Baatcutter' well enough that he's not able to figure out the truth.

Love Swayam for talking to Rey and making him realise the truth which was not the real truth though.

It's all over from her side ?? Wake up Rey ! It's not true !

Am glad to see Swayam taking pains and helping his friends.

Finally someone picked up the phone.

Aw, the way Swayam ticked out everything from Kria. Love their friendship. I was so happy finally Kria shared her dil ki baatein with someone and that Swayam ko finally sab kuch pata chal gaya.

Oh god ! Why does she says to hide it from him ? I mean this will just increase the misunderunderstandings.

You know I was really wishing that uss mein se kuch aisa nikle joh Rey ko sab pata chal jaaye. And it did. I was so happy. Finally a happy moment for Kriyaansh. After so many days.

And then came the letter. Oh my god. I was crying on reading it. It was all true and so true. I mean it was heart-touching. I just loved it. Finally Rey ko sab kuch pata chal gaya. Ab toh kam - se - kam woh apni baatcutter ko maaf kar dega. But I was so angry on you for leaving us on the hang. Update waheen khatam karna tha kya di aapko ?

And then I got to know Rey's reaction. Aw, now he's blaming himself.

And the line - "Yeh apne pyar se Reyaansh Singhania ka vaada hai." and "Now no more of this drama. Tumne yeh toh bata diya ki tum mujhse kitna pyar krti ho lekin ab main tumhe bataunga ki main tumhe kitna pyar krta hun." - Just loved these lines. So true and touching.

And then Rey says Dehradun and he blurts out the coffee. Lol ! That was funny, I mean. I had a huge smile on my face reading the hole ReYam conversation.

I was so happpy. Donoin mileinge. But aapki woh hi bimaari - galat jagah khatam kar dia na. I wonder aapko humein tang karne mein kya maza aata hai. Well not only you, but saare writers ko.

And then the meadow. 😊
WOW. Just wow. 👏
It is the best part till now. Finaly Kriyaansh together, though not in the real sense.

Eagerly waiting for the next update. Jaldi se karna. 😛 It's a order from a friend ! 😉 😆

I just love your FF. It's fabulous. 👍🏼
Bas I want one thing from you.
Ab se you jaldi jaldi update karogi.
I know bahut jyada maang rahi hun. 😛
But I have full right.
Aakhir dost hun aapki.
So please update soon !
And I hope mujhe maaf kar dogi itni late comment karne ke liye. 😳
But exams the. Sorry.

Lots of love, hugs and kisses ! ❤️
Aditi !! 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Crying rey and crying Kriya .. nice update.. update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
It's reallly nice FF...such a lovely update...so pls Pm me whenever u update !😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wen r u going to update

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update. Loved it. I wish aise hi show mein bhi kria jaldi wapass aa jaye.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vaishali Di,,, Kab update karoge???🤔
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Posted: 13 years ago
That's the limit !
Waise toh am happy .. extremely happy with you.
And I love you.
But me gussa ho jaungi agar mujhe next part nahi mila next two days (max) mein !
Please di, update kar bhi do !
Kyun tadpa rahi ho hum bachoin ko ! 😛
We want update ! We want update ! We want update !
Please !!

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