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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Shariqa_here

Good job Shahid!

Can't believe this is your 1st OS!
I really wish Khushi was that bold but lets say even if she was, ASR would just pick her up and throw her on the couch saying,
'NOW YOU LISTEN TO ME DAMN IT! Ye kamra aur bistar tumse pehle mera tha, aur tumhen yahan main lekar aaya hun Khushi Singh Raizada. Toh tum kahan par sonewali ho, ye bhi main hi taye karoonga. DO U UNDERSTAND???' 'Agli baar apni had mein rehkar baat karna, varna yeh kamra bhi nahin naseeb hoga! SAMJHI TUM? NOW GET LOST!!'😡
& our Khushi will just shiver in fright!😭
Cheers,
Shariqa


Thanks so much 🤗. I can understand what you saying. They have to stretch the story too and more the torture, more will be Arnav's regret too. Khushi is still shown to be strong character than other tv heroines. I hope they show Khushi more strong that mere sitting in the corner and crying for everything. She is right now in the shock but I hope once she comes out of it. She hits everyone band on...We can just hope...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Thanks so much!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sreyashids

Hilarious, I was in splits. Please do continue.

Thanks so much 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashshhs

Go Khushi go!!! Lol, a very clever os, great writing :) :) :)

Thanks so much 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks so much!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: N33MA

OMG OMG OMG!!

that was too good. i was smiling the whole time and yelling out " YOu go girl " uff only if this happened in the show. 😍
PLease i hope you continue please please please
and add me in your pm list .


Thanks so much !!!!!! I know if will be such a treat to watch such a scene enacted by Sarun. Both will do perfectly justice to such a scene. I will definitely try to write something more and I hope you guys like that too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: jerry12

Ha ha ha tis is the first OS tat made me laugh so much..., it was very much relieving me from the current track... 😊 Thnq very much... Continue with ur writing... Was defi a pleasure in reading it...


Thanks so much!!!! I am so glad you liked it. I know current track is little depressing but it will pass too and we will see more passionate romance between Arhi...I will definitely try to write something more...Thanks again
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Onlooker

Just couldn't stop laughing out aloud...way to go Kushi Kumari Gupta...loved ur OS.

Thanks so much !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks so much !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A big big thank you to everyone who read the short scene and liked it and extra-extra thank you for the ones who took time to comment on it. I know I have not replied to all the comments yet because I was trying to reply them one by one and after some time, it says you have to wait because it thinks I am spamming. So guys bear with me I will try to reply slowly slowly to everyone. But I definitely have read all of them and I am so overwhelmed after reading all the comments. It was my first OS and I never thought people will like it. Seriously I am on cloud nine after receiving appreciation from all of you guys. Since everybody wanted me to continue I thought of dividing this story into 3-4 parts and then finish it. I hope I don't disappoint you this time and you guys enjoy reading this part too.

All of you will notice that my story is different from what shown in tv. I wanted to write something where Khushi is strong like all the girls in reality. See in the serial they have to show torture of Khushi by Arnav because more the torture more will be his regret. There will be more passion in that. His love for her will be more pure, intense and passionate once he realizes his mistake. So I understand if you guys not like my version that much because it's not close to reality'

Part 1 is on Page 1

Here is the Link for Part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2800138/ss-game-is-on-on-their-suhaagraat-pt2pg9-note-pg15

Back to story where I left.

It was next morning and the warm sun rays woke Khushi up. She turned around and saw Arnav sleeping peacefully on other side of the bed. She does not know why but she felt so much happiness inside and also smile formed on her lips on seeing him sleeping on the bed. She was thrilled that Arnav did not go out like last night, rather he stayed in. He looked like a Greek God sleeping serenely. Suddenly her hand moved forward to touch his forehead but he stopped herself on time in the fear of waking him up and having World War III on the bed itself in the early morning. She went to the bathroom and got ready. Luckily Anjali ji had given her one saree of her own to wear for today. She was sitting in the front of dressing table and getting ready when her eyes again fell on her Laad governor who was still sleeping without any worry in the world.

Khushi : (In thinking mode) She was recollecting the course of events happened day before yesterday. She may have told Arnavji that she does not care if he did not want her to tell the real reason of marriage but she is still very much confused on the behavior of Arnav. This very man came in the morning and helped me in serving the guests. He did not even react when my massiji called him waiter. He even helped me in choosing the saree and was so happy when I selected his saree over Nanheji. He even put bindi and wanted to say something to me and then he took 360 u turn. I thought he would say those three magical words that he loves me and ask me for marriage. I thought he would say "farak padta hai Khushi kyunki Kuch kuch hota hai thum nahin samajogi". Right he did asked me for marriage but like this? I thought he would ask like my dream man Salman Khan but instead he asked in totally angry young man Amitabh style. Oh Devi maiyaan, please help me in solving this puzzle. I am pretty sure something definitely have happened that prompted Arnavji to change so drastically but what Devi Mayiaan what? Brushing her thoughts she finally got ready quickly and went downstairs.

She got mandir ready for morning puja and went to kitchen to do breakfast preparations. After the puja was done everybody finally came and sat for breakfast on dining table. There was still an awkward silence and nobody even tried to cheer anyone and change the atmosphere.

Khushi sat beside Arnavji and Di and Shyam was sitting opposite them.

Khushi: She suddenly observed something. Instead of paying attention and giving those lusty looks to her, that ugly creature named Shyam was giving nasty and totally useless looks to her hubby and even Arnavji was reciprocating him by giving angry looks. There was some non verbal fight going on between them. Looked like Arnav ji (the lion) will pounce on this Shyam (the mouse) any minute and will beat the hell out of him. No doubt she herself wanted to do this. She wanted to become like Hitler Didi and beat that pervert with her sandals that he will remember for next all lifetimes, but Why Arnavji? According to Raizada family and Arnavji, Shyam is avatar of God and is only born to be respected and worshipped by his Rani Sahiba and all. Finally Khushi's mind tubelight was on and she realized that something was definitely wrong between Arnavji and Shyam and knowing the actual reason may give answers to her questions too. She thought of making a full proof plan if she wants to find something but first she concentrated on eating delicious breakfast that she made. She had not had anything close to real food for last 2 days and had shed liters of water from her eyes already. She needed to be strong if she wants to pass this storm successfully.

After having breakfast everyone went to their respective rooms including Arnav.

But Khushi's mind was still on the exchange of looks going on between Shyam and Arnav.

She looked upwards and said: Devi Maiyan "what is it"? She was newlywed and instead of exchanging lovely-dovely looks with her, Arnavji was busy giving Dabangg Salman Khan type looks to that scumbag. Khushi brushed these thoughts aside and decided to go on a shopping to buy some clothes as she cannot afford on wearing Anjali saris every day. So she proceeded towards her room. Arnav ji was as usual busy with his laptop.

Khushi: Look I need to buy some clothes

Arnav: So what should I do

Khushi: What do you mean by "what should I do"

Arnav: Look Khushi, I might own a fashion house but that does not mean I will go and buy clothes for you. Don't you expect me to go with you for shopping.

Khushi: Why do you think yourself to be so important Mr. Raizada. I don't need you to come with me. I just need your credit card. (khushi felt bad asking him for money but she did not have any other choice but she promised she would leave everything here when she will go after 6 months)

Arnav: "What the" You are asking me for my credit card?

Khushi: Offcourse If I need to buy something then I will need to pay for it. Is not it? You should know this Arnav

Arnav: Shut up Khushi. With that he handed her his credit card. You know Khushi you are such a gold digger.

Khushi: I know that Arnav. Tell me something that I don't know. You have mentioned this fact so many times that I remember it by heart now. By the way, Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada, you are such a powerful and successful business man, you should think of some new insults. Be little more creative since now you will be insulting Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada. I am so bored of hearing same insults again and again. Think something new hubby.

With that she ran from room as fast as she can because she knew if she stayed there for more, then no one could have saved her from Arnav's wrath.

Arnav: "Unbelievable" and continued to work on his laptop.

Okay guys. This is it for second part. I wanted to add some more but it had already become so long, So I ended up here. If you guys like the flow of the story then I can continue for 2 or so parts otherwise If you don't like it that much, I can end it up in a small part.

I have not pm anyone yet. I will do it tomorrow morning. since its very late right now.

Do leave your comments. Opinions are always welcomed.

Thanks again everyone

Edited by shahidrocks - 13 years ago

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