SS:Game is On on their SuhaagRaat Pt2pg9,note pg15

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This is first time I am writing a story on india -forums.This is one shot scene that I have penned down. Since we all know there is not gonna be any Suhaag raat so I thought of writing what I want to see. I hope you guys like it.


All the rasams were over and finally Anjali made Khushi sit on Arnav's bed and left the room. According to everyone, this night is going to be their Suhaagraat which is suppose to be very blissful and passionate night for husband and wife. After all this night marks the beginning of the new life of a married couple But Khushi knew that this was not the normal marriage and was more worried about Arnav's reaction when he finds her in his room like this. Suddenly the door clicked and without looking she knew who was on the door.

Arnav saw the beautiful girl sitting on the bed who was suppose to his bride. He was totally mesmerized how pretty khushi looked right now just like an angel. For a minute he wants to forget everything and make her own😳. He wants to show her the different layers of love. He wants to have her right there not just because he wants to satissify his need, also not because it was his right as a husband but because he want to show her his love. He wants to tell her what she meant to him. How she had crossed the wall and entered his heart which used to be no man's land. Many women have come in his life and gone but no one had brought the Arnav out of the mask of ASR. That Arnav wanted to live again, wanted to love and let himself loved but how can he forget that she is very person who pushed him back to same hell again by getting involve with his jijaji. Arnav had to somehow let this ackward moment pass before situation goes out of hand and he had to regret later like he is regretting falling in love with this maiden here.

So finally Arnav spoke

Arnav: Looks like you have forgotten what kind of marriage is this.

Khushi finally looked at him and wondered again what had happened to this man. Is he the same man who was so happy on realizing that I have worn the bangles that he brought for me. Thousands of thoughts going through her head and she was tired of asking him the reason for marrying her suddenly and becoming the same monster again that he was once when she met him in initial days.

She was brought back to reality with one of the another Arnav's insults😡

Arnav: Did you not hear what I said. Tell me Khushi why the facade. Why are you pretending. Speak up.

Khushi (thinking to herself): She was expecting this kind of reaction. She also knew that this Suhaag Raat was just for name. There was no way Arnav was going to behave as other husbands would behave on their Suhaag Raat. ( I wish he does😳😳)

Khushi: Anjali ji made me sit like this and told me to wait for you.

Arnav (In a mocking tone): Di told you and you just started following what she said. You are such an innocent soul right Khushi or should I say you also want to have fun with ASR. Many girls want to have me. But let me tell you, you are not of my standard Khushi Kumari Gupta.

This was the final nail in the coffin and Khushi finally thought that "that's it". There is always limit to anything and now he has crossed his limit and she won't tolerate more. She asked for some courage from Devi Maiyaan and stood up.

Khushi : Look Mr. Raizada , What do you think of yourself, I also don't have any interest in you and after what you did to me I don't want to be any time close to you. But I don't have enough courage to deny Anjali ji and other family members who think we are madly in love and all credit goes to you for that.

Arnav: Don't you dare to talk to me like that Khushi Kumari Gupta. Don't you dare to cross your limit and turned around.

Khushi stopped him by holding his hand and said : You are wrong Mr. Raizada . Khushi kumari Gupta cannot cross her limit but there is no KKG anymore. This girl standing in front of you is Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada and as you know Raizada's are famous for crossing limits. You yourself gave me this right. Did you forget. We have just been married for twice in 24hrs. This does not suit your personality Arnav.

Arnav was shocked and furious at the same time. He always knew Khushi was courageous who like to answer him back but today there was something else that he was observing in her.

He opened his mouth to speak but was cut off again by Khushi

Khushi: Look Arnav (again Arnav Shocked), you started this game and I don't know why and I am tired of asking you again and again. If this is like any business deal for you then let it be. We will play like the way you like and I know you are ASR and you don't like defeat but don't you dare to forget that this time there is no simple small town girl standing in front of you who has no aukad. This is Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada standing in front of you. So it is war of Raizada vs a Raizada. Bring it on Mr. Raizada

Arnav was shocked beyond imagination. He felt like all the universe is laughing on him. He married Khushi to take revenge from her and here instead he was seeing Khushi in all new light. Khushi was dropping atom bombs on him one by one and first time in life he did not have answer to give. Maybe this is the power women gets when they become wives.

Arnav thought that was it and then suddenly another blow came from khushi.

Khushi: Since you think I have gotten everything that I wanted after marrying you, So you are right. I am gonna enjoy every right and luxury that will be coming my way for coming 6 months. After all I'm Mrs. KASR and It is finally party time for me and let me start by taking the bed. If you want to share the bed then you are most welcome otherwise feel free to sleep on cough or more preferable on the floor. So hubby dear sweet dreams and I hope you have good night or should I say "Happy Suhaag Raat Pati dev"

With that she lied down on the bed and clutched her eyes tightly. Her heart beat was very fast and she could not believe she talked to Arnav ji like that but there was no other way. She has to talk to her Laad Governor in the language that he understands and only then she will be able to find the actual truth.

On the other side, Arnav stood rooted to the spot. How calmly she went and lied down on his bed. He was thinking did he took the right decision by marrying Khushi or this Jhansi ki Rani. This is just the first day and God knows what the next 6 months have in store for him. With that he retired for the night thinking lets see what tomorrow morning is going to bring.

Hope you guys like it. All comments are welcomed (good or bad)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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that made me laugh soo much lol awesome
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It was funny too bad kushie isn't that bold
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written for the first OS. I will be happy Khushi in the show is asked to mouth these dialogues, we will get to see ASR's reaction. That would be awesome.
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lolol - love it - if only..!
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wow yaar too good , tum ne to mujhe hala ke rakh dea , wow just wow !!!
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Very funny i had a good laugh. Too good
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if khushi says these dialogues instead of the usual rona-dhona,it would be awesome but will the cvs hear us?not possible
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Nice OS, but very hard to read such a large font.
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That was bloody hilarious!!! It cracked me up totally especially two marriages in 24hrs!!
Poor Arnav, he have no friggin idea who he had married!

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