OS: Touch Her Again (ArHi)

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Rupa

@voldemort

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

that was brilliant!!!! do continue...

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

way to go arnav! i so want ths to hapPen in show!
except that taBle part, that creEp disgust!
welL writTen dEar!
loveD it :)

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Madia

@kawkabon

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

that was fantastic and flowed really well.

beatifully written.

would love it if you continued.

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princessnida

@princessnida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Loved it!!! This neeeds to happen in the show!

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

very sweet...keep em coming ...the light at the end of th tunnel...

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Please give a second part to this.! Pretty please?

I felt sick imagining the scene between that a**h*le and Khushi. Gosh why doesn't get hit by a car and die?!

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Very real...i have a feeling we will see such scenes!!

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meemithai

@meemithai

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

👏...beautiful...superbly written...very much Arnav...loved it...

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Marci

@Marci

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Awww just love protective and possessive Arnav!!!

Ughhh Shyam makes me wanna puke...disgust foul creature!!

Yay Arnav beat him up!!! Please continue dear if u want to!!

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Tasnim

@3striix_zariah

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

first of all i want to say sorry for the late comment...really busy these days..i hope u understand.excellent OS again!! WOW!!! You maintained the villain's character perfectly...only shyam could do such a thing!I loved how Khushi gave her words a second thought and corrected herself to not create a misunderstanding between her and arnav.