OS: Touch Her Again (ArHi)

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nermic

@nermic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Very well written! Keep writing you are very good. X

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Very well written! Touch Her Again and I Won't Spare You!!!

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

I wanted to slap Shyam when he was touching Khushi at the table.. Couldn't Arnav get in a few more punches before Khushi stopped him?😭 Loved the last line, Khushi's ray of hope. 😊

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

@Krani: Awesum n fantastic Arhi OS!!!!😊

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arshimohabbat

@arshimohabbat

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

dat ws a nyc update 😊

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saru323

@saru323

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

He z a realy a b***** i hate that creep, well done arni what punch h wish i cud punch him lyk dat. snake u deserve mre than this. hw dare touch arni's kushi,

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

That was beautifully written..He still cares for her..the way he stilled when he heard her sniffle and her touch relaxing him when she said it is not worth..your narration of the incidents were very vivid and i could feel Kushi's disgust and revulsion on being violated and Arnav's fury and protectiveness for Kushi from his words and actions..and yes..even Shyam's lust and leering..

I don't know how i missed this work of yours!!