OS: Touch Her Again (ArHi)

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

The first parts made me *yuck* Shyam playing footsie with her *ewww*

But, lovely ending, specially his last words. Gorgeous!

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-monalisa-

@-monalisa-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Fabulous! Loved every word of it; please keep writing 👏

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Samana Dahar

@samana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Amazing and beautiful.
Poor Khushi. Even though Arnav is angry he is protactive towards Khushi

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

OMG another wonderful FF writer <3 <3 <3

Do pm me whenever u update something PLZ

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Shyam is disgusting. But loved arnav's reaction. Poor khushi. Thanks for the pm.

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Lekshmic7

@Lekshmic7

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Superb!! I just want to kill dat snake.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

all I have to say is "wow!"

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Thanx a ton for the pm...
I loved this OS..One because it srsly kind of fits into the situtation they are facing about at their house...
And Im damn sure Shyam is such a b*****d that he wouldn't mind doing any of this at all...
And man...I loved the ending more than anything else...
I sooo wish Khushi hadnt stopped Arnav for once...would have been nice..
Bt then the ending was perfect.neither to happy...neither to sad...Leaving a ray of hope...
Loved it thoroughly