OS: Tangled in bed (ArHi)

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

2+3 Dialgs yet perfctly etched in my memory

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Absolutely brilliant and mind blowing one shot,

Written exceptionally well xx

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Better late than never...

I just read it and loved it.

The best part about your writing is that I can imagine everything happening in front of my eyes.

I could so imagine them sleeping so close together, 'tangled in bed', how she woke up and the way she was affected and flustered, her attempts to wake him up and then his reaction...

This Arnav and Khushi are so easy to believe.

The MU is there but the attraction always simmers below the surface 😊

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

awesome!! 😊
loved the concept.. it's totally different from all the ArHi OS's I have read so far... 👏

Did you imagine this first and found the pic later or saw the pic first and then wrote it?

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Sweety

@Swty_arshionly

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Another brilliantly written work...👏👏👏👏

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Aww... Pretty good os...arnav and blushing OMG!!!

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Wow it's just awesome.

I really wish I could have seen this...

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DeepyDeo

@DeepyDeo

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

i've been reading your through your ffs after arranged marriage and just wanted to say that you write reaaally well! i love the detail you put into each of your stories! so thank you for sharing them !!