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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Wow amazin update luvd it
Cnt w8 4 da nxt part plzz cont soon x

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Nayab

@KaJen-amaZayn

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

heyy!! Vas Happenin' ... sorry for the very late comment.. i've been busy for a long time and its probably the first time i been on since 2 weeks :/ anyway great update!! i really wanna know whats up next... i love the way Khushi was trying to act strong and i love the concept of this story.. i love all your stories with badoys as the hero ... just had to say that.. :p... k im gonna read the update for Savage cuz i still havent done that yet... update soon and thanks for the PM... :D

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Hey nice update ,I have been waiting too long for this update.
Sorry for late reply , actually I continue my studies + my daughter her lesson , home chores , husband it,s really hectic for me. But don,t worry I will try my best to give u detail reply.
Today's update was amazing ,love ARSHI , I hope Arnav trust her.good job , thanks 4 pm, plz update soon.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

omg ...fanastic update ... wounde y khushiz so scare of her father other than the obvious reasons ...

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

I loved it. I loved the way you wrote this part. I could really see the whole scene playing out in my mind. It was amazing. I can't wait for the next part.

P.S. I don't know if you already know this but if you post this in the IPKKND forum, you will get more readers, because this is an awesome FF and you deserve more readers.

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gypsy

@gypsy

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

OKay so something's..missing here..and I don't know what??🤔 😕

This FF is getting the least response. Is it because of my lateness in posting the chapter? Or ..the only reason I could think off is that my writing is not up to the mark. If that's the case, I would really appreciate if as a reader you let me know where I am lacking so I can improve.

Cheers!!!

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gypsy

@gypsy

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Raadhni
interesting story

Thanks :D

Originally posted by: nazibah
Last line was AMAZING!!!!!!! I wonder what's going to happen next!!!!!

Thanks :D
Oh for that you'll have to wait for the next Chapter :D

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gypsy

@gypsy

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: lil_kuri
I loved the update
Can't wait to read more

Thanks :D
I'll post the new Chapter soon :D

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: gypsy
OKay so something's..missing here..and I don't know what??🤔 😕

This FF is getting the least response. Is it because of my lateness in posting the chapter? Or ..the only reason I could think off is that my writing is not up to the mark. If that's the case, I would really appreciate if as a reader you let me know where I am lacking so I can improve.

Cheers!!!

@Bold...Are u kidding me?😲...come on yaar...we all know that how perfect you write so don't u dare to think Like that🤔...This FF is as amazing as ur other work

And as far as less readers concern toh the only reason I can see is that its an ArHi FF and most of ur Buddy members are AR or DMG fan..So may be they are not ready to read any stuff other than AR😳...So stop thinking too much and update ASAP...I really want to read more...And just remember one thing...YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER YAAR

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gypsy

@gypsy

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: zyanah
yaaayyy
this is what i call back with a bang!!!!!!!!👏
okay sooo...u still end with cliffhanger and hav to w8 one whole week
not fair💔

Thanks Zyanah :D
Back with a bang?? Ah..I like it..😆
I am sorry 😳 but I'll be posting the part tomorrow..that's a lot better than not posting for a month...so yaaayyy...next Chapter tomorrow..😃.😆

Originally posted by: KaJen_addiction
very nice part!
read da prev chapter also! good 2 read Khushi's POV! so she is Sir's step-daughter!
felt so bad 4 her! really wanna know whats gonna happen now!
cont soon
thnx 4 pm

~Sunita~

Thanks Sunita :D
Yup! she's her step daughter :)
I'll post the new Chapter soon :D

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