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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

@Bold...Are u kidding me?😲...come on yaar...we all know that how perfect you write so don't u dare to think Like that🤔...This FF is as amazing as ur other work

And as far as less readers concern toh the only reason I can see is that its an ArHi FF and most of ur Buddy members are AR or DMG fan..So may be they are not ready to read any stuff other than AR😳...So stop thinking too much and update ASAP...I really want to read more...And just remember one thing...YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER YAAR

Aww...that's so sweet of you Geet but looking at the response I think there's definitely some locha in my writing..Readers are not replying so what should I presume?? think..think...😕
It could be one of the reason..let's see if along with readership and viewership the comments also increases..😃😳..

Great updte yar I am new here and I really like ur FF plz cont soon

I am so sorry for not updating on Friday, like I should have. I was caught up in some work and didn't get the time to write anything.
I have started with the part just now so hopefully I'll be able to post the part in few hours.

Thanks a ton for the patience guys. And once again My apologies for the delay.😳.

Cheers!!!

Originally posted by: vidu87

nice update 👏

Thanks Vidu :D

Originally posted by: saarah96

love the chapter

wonder why her step dad doing this to her

Thanks :D
And that you'll come to know later 😉..
Keep reading and commenting too :D

Originally posted by: sweetvanie

Interesting story and loved the update ...
can't wait to read the next chapter ...
Thanks for the PM ...
Please update soon ...

Thanks :D
I'll post the next Chapter soon :D

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update intense poor khushi and arnav realizing she is not lieing but want more answers about the boss glad he reached back in time awesome update thanks for the pm

Thanks :D
Looking at her Arnav knew she was telling the truth :D

Originally posted by: akshiankita

hey

nice update

Thanks :D

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Priii🤗... Finally you updated this one also...I am just loving this back to back updates😛...The chapter is written too beautifully...Love the way Khushi tried to behave strong in front of Arnav...Though she was failing miserably but still,I love her spirit...Arnav character is too dark and intense...But love Khushi's Effect on Arnav...waiting for more so do try to continue soon...Thanks for the PM...Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Hey Geet * hugs*
I finally got the chance to update this one.. :D
Glad to know you enjoyed the update :D Arnav's character is going to be a bit darker in this one. I hope it comes out nicely 😳
I'll post the new Chapter soon :D
You too 😃

Originally posted by: soni4eva

Wow amazin update luvd it
Cnt w8 4 da nxt part plzz cont soon x

Thanks Soni :D
I'll post the next Chapter soon :D

Originally posted by: KaJen-amaZayn

heyy!! Vas Happenin' ... sorry for the very late comment.. i've been busy for a long time and its probably the first time i been on since 2 weeks :/ anyway great update!! i really wanna know whats up next... i love the way Khushi was trying to act strong and i love the concept of this story.. i love all your stories with badoys as the hero ... just had to say that.. :p... k im gonna read the update for Savage cuz i still havent done that yet... update soon and thanks for the PM... :D

Hey Nayab :D
How are you?
Thanks a ton :D glad to know you liked the update :D
Bad boys huh??😛😆... Ah..I think you'll like Arnav more than Armaan because he's going to more evil than him..😉😆..
I'll post the new Chapter soon :D

Originally posted by: flowers4u

omg ...fanastic update ... wounde y khushiz so scare of her father other than the obvious reasons ...

Thanks :D
The reasons will be out soon 😉 keep reading and everything will be out..😃

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

Hey nice update ,I have been waiting too long for this update.
Sorry for late reply , actually I continue my studies + my daughter her lesson , home chores , husband it,s really hectic for me. But don,t worry I will try my best to give u detail reply.
Today's update was amazing ,love ARSHI , I hope Arnav trust her.good job , thanks 4 pm, plz update soon.

Thanks :D
I am very sorry for the delay but I was caught up with stuff and couldn't update it soon.😳
You took me by surprise here..you have a daughter..aww..how old is she? You must be so busy with everything.. but still take time out to read and comment...Thanks a ton for it...😳😃
I'll post the new Chapter soon :D

Originally posted by: rockinggirl5

I loved it. I loved the way you wrote this part. I could really see the whole scene playing out in my mind. It was amazing. I can't wait for the next part.

P.S. I don't know if you already know this but if you post this in the IPKKND forum, you will get more readers, because this is an awesome FF and you deserve more readers.

Thanks :D
I'll post the new Chapter soon :D
and thanks for the suggestion let me see. 😃 I have never been to this section and I think if the concept is good people are going to read and comment. Still let's see..Thanks a ton once again..😳

Originally posted by: vikramdey

Great updte yar I am new here and I really like ur FF plz cont soon

Thanks :D and welcome to this thread :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :D

Thanks everyone for LIKING the Chapter :)

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