IPKKND: One Halvai to Another Part 2: Page 19

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lovingangel

@lovingangel

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

this is really soothing after the heart wrenching episode of yesterday.

enough of my tragic comments...

seriously,i think khushi needs to meet suraj atleast once.

hopefully that will cheer her up..

loved it...

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Addie07

@Addie07

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

i loved it...i said this n i'll say this before.., u write the emotion of jealousy beautifully in fact u r d best at it...

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

lol i for one LOVED it!!!
it was cute!! Suraj really is a very uncomplicated man!! though Khushi best matches with Arnav, Suraj will deffa out her at ease..
vry sweet!! n lol i for one wouldn't mind knowing abt her 2nd day at the sweet shop!!

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Now why would we hate you? Right now, anything which shows Khushi giving them the brush off AND finding someone to lift her usually happy soul is seriously welcome! 😃 Your writing is sublime.

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ravenheart

@ravenheart

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Shuheda, I so liked it and you have no cause to hide...majority of women today think that Arnav doesn't deserve Khushi nor does her family deserve her. I would love to see KKG leaving them and moving on but sadly I know it is not going to happen. So reading FF's & OS's are our only way to fulfil our wish...good write up as always!

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

hey actually you know what i would want you continue this one thought... probably even Sandhya can meet Arnav and knock some sense into him!!!

Now guess even you will be angry with me!!!!!

well i loved your OS and yes they should meet in future sometime!!!!!

and well i loved the wasy you have described the relieved tension and the cliched way i am sure they are gonna show how Anjali and Payal or Aaksh or even Arnav is going to behave once the truth is out!!!

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Go and hide?
No, No, No! :l

I loved this, you know? ❤️
I know this doesn't even have Arhi, but I do!

Arnav in a three-piece even in that burning heat of Rajasthan?!
Hahaha! So 'ASR' ish! 😆

I loved the way she ignored him!
Yes! I'm surprising myself writing that! But I really did! :P

Brilliant OS! 👏