IPKKND: One Halvai to Another Part 2: Page 19

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

i like your crossover, the OS was cute but you should have included more of Arnav's reaction to it in the end!

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Piya dhaliwal

@Piya.D

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

well done

enjoyed reading

nice concept

arnav deserves that:)

and aww suraj was so kind:)

great os

thanks 4 the pm

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

I watch DABH so I'm familiar with Sweet Suraj 😆.

Just one message for Khushi though...go and have a cup of tea with Suraj's mom Bhabo...I think you'll start loving Arnav 😆.

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exoLarmy

@exoLarmy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

I really liked this OS i wanted to read something like this. aww Suraj is soo cute! i'm glad that the Raizada's weren't included. Thank you soo much.Now i can sleep peacefully.

much love,

Kiran xxx

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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

hahaha love it... i love arhi more thrn suhi... pls if u continue arhi... :D

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sRistee

@crazy44

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

haha!
it was cuTe.. buT nO arhi.. buT yes if you coNtinue id love to read mOre! to know whats goNNa hapPen next :P

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: reyabear
I dont watch diya aur baati but I do think Suraj is a wonderful piece of art that i'd love to get my hands on! *so fine* 🤣
Alright enough of my shameless comments!
This was great! I love how she ignored him/told him off. Like a boss 😎

Haha I don't really watch it either but when it started I did just because of Suraj lol!

Glad you liked it and don't want to kill me :P

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

U know what I love most about ur writing, KHUSHI.. They way u depict a dignified Khushi is awesome..
Loved those parts where she forgot all those things Raizada's tried to do for patch up,make up while frying Jalebi in Suraj's shop...
I dont watch DABH but from the promos i know that Suraj has much respect for his wife and supports her.
Loved ur crossover. really a sweet one.. 😳
pls do continue a second part where Arnav should eat a loads of humble pie and seethes with jealousy seeing Khushi-Suraj friendship...