SS-Mrs &Mr ASR-Until Death does us apart P7 PG 84

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

hey dear

i really loved this part

khushi should not forgive so easily

i so want this to happen in the show, except after a while she n arnav should come back together...

so please continue wid 1 more part, maybe a leap of 1 year or something...

btw its been a lovely ss, really enjoyed every part

thanks for the pm

take care

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DhwaniKS

@DhwaniKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Superb...luved d end,i never wanted khushi to forgive arnav and other family members...glad dat she dint...and dat buaji and garima toh(gud dey deserved it)...
Fantabulous

P.S. now dat dis one has ended..pls continue wid ur FF-shatterd dreams na..i simply adore it []

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Uswah

@uswah

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#523

Sad but beautiful end of this story...she remain in his heart forever like he remain in her heart forever...but sum stories never had happy endings i think so d tht story in one of them...but must say its such a beautiful piece of writing...!

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s2612

@s2612

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

OMG...khushi is leaving..it really brought tears in my eyes...and thanks for pm and pls update soon!!!!!

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nj123

@nj123

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#525

that was unexpected...she leaves everything behind😭. That was extremely sad.

beautifully written.👏

ps-please give it an epilogue if possible.😃

Edited by nj123 - 13 years ago

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#526

Anu..that was good.How much I want ASR to suffer..because of his doings.I can't let them be separated.They have to get together..they are meant to be...Happy ending Please!!! pretty Please😊

Ash.

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princessnida

@princessnida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

This broke my heart! Beautifully written though!!

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#528

Not all stories have to have a happy ending and I think what you've written is fitting for the emotions you've portrayed so well. Lovely update and beautifully written ending.