FF : I Feel Nothing. Updated Part 40

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

i love arnav's desperation here. very raw. at breaking point, but i also love khushi's stance. powerfully written.hope khushi doesnt give into him

p.s THANK YOU sooo MUCH for the PM!!! :D

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Loved the OS dear.. pl update soon and add me to ur PM list..

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Sarah

@Desi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

thankyou so much everyone for all the wonderful messages and comments! i will keep going! oh and i'm sorry if you haven't received a PM yet...this is my first OS and i'm still trying to work out how to do things 😊 but you're all so awesome! thanks for bearing with me 😃

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

poor arnav she has withdraw in to her self she realized in her head that he made a choice not to listen not to care so now she feels noting he has a long way to get her back awesome update she realized why she was punished even though she was innocent thanks for the pm

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

great update.continue soon😊

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Very nicely written...

Loved all 3 parts...

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Razz22

@Razz22

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

OMG! i couldnt not comment on this, so HAD to sign in! :P

AMAZING!!! PLS CONTINUE!!

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Sakshi Kaul

@sushi-la

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

no life in her eyes...i don't blame her...make him suffer!! why do men think that women are abla naaris and can't stand up for themselves?? make him suffer!! sorry..i sound a bit too sadistic and crazy...😆

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Strawberry_pie

@Strawberry_pie

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

OMG Desi...

Don't mind my typos right now... can't really read very clearly through tears u know... ur OS has left me crying!!!

Such pain and anguish, so beautifully portrayed!!! A lot of people have been writing OSs on this topic... but by far, this one stands out from the rest!!! Brilliant portrayal of Arnav's anguish...

A kind request and suggestion... don't let them "kiss and make up" in the literal sense... kind of defeats the depth of the emotions u have portrayed so beautifully so far... I would love to see how Arnav works his way back to bring Khushi back to life... I am wiling to wait for another few parts until that stage comes...

Beautiful my dear! God Bless U!! U should be on the creative team of IPKKND!!

Keep writing! And pm me whenever u update! I am adding u as a buddy right now!