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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

nice story...enjoyed reading it plzz pm when you next update

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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Fantastic update.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it. I hope Arnav is ok.

Continue soon. Thanks

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homebird

@homebird

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

lovely! i'd love to see this happening in the show.. please PM me for ur next update:)

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livy

@livy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

loved it. waiting for the next part.

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bismillah5985

@bismillah5985

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Ooh my this waz superb i jst read all 4 prts 2gethr plzzz pm wen u update as i cnt wait 4 th nxt prt keep up th good work n update very soon

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spurthi

@spoorthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

awesome updates,loved all ur parts
beautifully written,plz continue,can't wait for the next part
plz pm once written,looking forward to read them

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anjali

@rosette80

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Ohhh God!!! Spank me hard...Sach mein gal..who ever u are..u have creativity pouring within form u!!!👏

I am dumbstruck and just cant utter a single word!!! 😵I was sooo lost in the first part..so touchy..so breaking into pieces..asr ..no arnav crying again..uff..their confession to each other..

then came next the second part...omg omg omg..it was not a fiction..the best thing of ur os was..it was soo realisitc and can be really sachi mein put into the script!!👍🏼

Can u please forward this to the scritpwriter..for us! PLEASE! I MEAN IT!

Cvs have to take u on board...please atleast give to the mods!! Request to u...

WRITE MOREEE

LOVE U AND UR REAL STORY!!!🤗

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Siva

@siva2901

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Hi i read in one go

wooow its really Amazing & beautifully written 👏👏👏

really i love this os .

u r awesome writer 👏👏👏

i wish this to be happen in serial also

continue ASAP

Add me to ur pm list

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anjali

@rosette80

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Ohhh dear...now this is it...actually i didnt read the 3rd and 4th parts before this..now i did...where do u get this flow gal????🤪

R u some kind of novelist/??please tell..ur sooo absolutley gifted...i assure u..if u talk to the cvs..they will alllow u to write for them...👍🏼

please from my heart am saying..GIVE THIS UPDATED PIECE OF REALITY TO THEM!! LET THEM INCORPORATE INTO THE SHOW!!!

We wud love to see this in the show with some editing..no problems..but this is just magic!🤗

ONE THING only!! WRITE MORE AND THIS PM MEE...i am wrting in caps..coz ic cant exagerate my excitement and happiness in reading this!!

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Gurpreet1991

@Gurpreet1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

luv ur os, please update soon :-)

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