Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 3 pt 47 pg130 - Page 70

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Posted: 13 years ago
Please please ab nxt updt b kar do na

Luv Divzi
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 47
nice part...
finally Maan ki batti jali...
poor Suzeil...
oh no Geet has heard only the end convo not the entire one...
now what is she gonna do?
hope Maan confesses to her soon...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic. Mish U have written Maan's confused state of mind abt his love for Geet very well. 👏Suzeil Love U for making Maan understand that he loves Geet. But Nooo way Geet MU Maan!!!😲 Duhhh.. Girl. Poori baat toh sun liya karo..??? Can't wait for next update or double updates (If possible😉).
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey hi Mishty...
i;ve been away from this forum 4 such a long time due 2 my brother's wedding but now that um bk da very 1st ff i checked out was this 1 as it always has been 1 of my favourite nd i was so pleased 2 read each nd every part of it...
thnk u 4 all da beautiful updates nd hope 2 read da next part very soon
tc 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE
SUZEIL FINALLY MADE CONFESS HIS FEELINGS FOR GEET

BUT GEET CAME AT THE WRONG MOMENT AND MISUNDERSTOOD EVERYTHING
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Suzail such a sweet heart...feels sad for her
she make him realise he loves Geet
pre cap-that must be Dadima...
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Angel kya kahoo excellent update yaar ab takka dooriya ka why becoz atlast maan understood his feelings about geet finally
i very much glad ki suzeil ne is baat pe madat ki she is really a nice person
koi apne ooper ki pyaar ko ugal vane ko kuch karthe hi lekin suzeil great she loves maan alot fir bi maan ki feelings ko samaj ke use samjane ka ek moka nahi chodi ek pal keliye bi haar nahi maana kud maan se ladke maan ko yakeen dikaya ki he loves geet really its look like simple question but seems bigger through heart
"maan i vil ask u a simple question..vil u answer me honestly.."

"wat is it ??.."

and suzeil hit d hard " do u love GEET ?? ..."

WATT
suzeil played very well when maan not atall submitting and saying geet is best frnd but when she says sameer coming evening maan ka chera dekhne layak tha
suzeil smirked, "sameer is cuming in d evening..."

maan's blood boiled wid d name, "why.."

suzeil made casual face, "ofcorse for dinner maan...he is cuming along wid geet..."

dat angered maan 10 times more, "why cnt he just stay away from my geet..d chipku.."

"ur geet.." suzeil played well..."she is not ur geet maan...she is just ur BEST FRND...her name vil be tagged to d
person she vil love n marry..."
this was the real game played by suzeil
"ok i vil do 1 thing..i vil 1st ask sameer to kiss me on my lips..." she paused reading maan's expression which sa

same as b4...n den continued, "n den i vil ask him to kiss geet on her lips..."

Dat was it !!

"just shut d freak up ..."
by this maan had to understand that suzeil saw that maan kissed geet
angel i also wonder when she saw that
pics u used perfect for his emotions here now
i wonder maan when suzeil said sam kiss her u dont get any angry but when she said sam kiss geet ur blood boiled wow great emotion about geet
when he heard dose words..dat ba* sameer can not kiss his geet...she is mine...i rip appart dat sameer in peices if

he vil even dare to touch geet...
the highlight of part suzeil counters

"u feel pain when geet feels pain..but u dnt love her..."

"u cry when geet cried..but u dnt love her..."

"u get possessive when sum1 comes closer to geet...but u dnt love her..."

"u just cnt stand d sight of sum1 touching geet..but u dnt love her..."

"u go insane when geet likes sum1 else..but u dnt love her..."

"ur heart beats normally when geet smiles...but u dnt love her..."
"ur every sentense strt wid geet and close on geet..but u dnt love her.."
"u love it when geet look at u..u hate it when geet avoids u..but u dnt love her..."

"niddles passed through ur heart when geet gives importance to sum1 else dan u...but u dnt love her.."

"ur heart craved for geet's love..ur eyes craves for geet's smile..ur ears craved for geet's words..ur hands craves to
hold geet close...but u dnt love her..."
and finally suzeil suceed in her plan
"how much u feel happy when u hug me close..."

"not U..its geet.." snapped maan instantly..

suzeil lips curved into smile...
last one suzeil done is maan ko apna dil me kya hi ye ehsaas dilana
"u want peace na ??.."

"yes.." maan mumbled lost into sum realization..

"close ur eyes.."

maan did as suzeil said...

"put ur hand on ur heart.."

maan did it...

"and confess to urself...u love geet.."

a smile formed his lips and he read his heart...

" I LOVE GEET "
to ab jake mila maan ko peace
"i love geet..yes i love my geet..she is mine...i love geet..."

suzeil smiled and d tear of happiness n pain rolled out alltogether...
maan ab samja suzeil ko ye sab tuje samjane me kitna mushkil huwa hoga

maan noticed d tear in her eyes n crushed her into his arms...

"im so sorry suzeil...thnqq so much..thnqq so much for dis..u r a sweetheart..i love u so much..."

suzeil smiled in etars and hugged him back, "i love u too maan...i love u so much.."

both held onto each other in happiness...
again geet MU that maan came back to suzeil
waiting for this who will said this to maan dadima sameer ya koi ore
precap :

" i love geet... "

" but u dnt deserve her..." came a ruthless voice

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it yaar... Bus ab sab accha accha ho... N one more thing , show maans character strong...till now geet is so strong... I want c maan asTHE MAAN SINGH KHURANA..a powerful man
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oyee kitna suspense creat karna hai bus bh karde
aur i i guess he is Ved
what say yaar jaldi sey update kar dey please

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