Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 3 pt 47 pg130

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

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beautiful updates

and geet dared him to propose suzeil .. i think he will do something stupid and break suzeil's heart

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Shruti_Goyal

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todayzstar

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesomeee updatee dearr...
superbb..lubd itt..😳
cntnue soonnn

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Ratna

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Mishty 🤗...thank u for the awesome updates and PM...very emotional and touching...wonder what Maan will do now...pl continue...TC 😊

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blue24

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome updates dear
Loved the dare that geet gave to maan eagerly wateing for ur next updates..
Thanks for the pm

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part 38:
lovely update

i cant see maan with other

geet ka waise lonely shedding tears for maan really sad

flashback nice

especially when maan had injury geet cry maan explain with words

maan smiled n pulled her cheek wid a true reply , " ek baar ek thread ne candle se puchha..*why u dissolve wen i burn ?* to which candle repied..*u r in my heart,if u suffer Im bound to shed tears for U*...ab samajhi..."

maan shook his head wid a smile n cleared , " im ur best frnd..dats mean i hav a special place in ur heart..so wen i suffer from injury...u feel pain in ur heart n dats why u cry..."

but when geet asked him that he will cry when she hurt maan say NO geet ka cute angry face dekhne layak tha

cute fight was really nice

" oyye..agar mujhe chot lagegi to tumhe bhi rona padega..samajhe tum...ye mera order hai aur tumhe manana padega..warna aaj se uttara meri best frnd..."

dat was it..

maan pulled her down angrily as he barked , " tera best frnd me hu..samajhi tu...aur tuje chot lagegi to sirf mein hi rovunga...koi aur nahi..."

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part 39: this line was superb " im bound to shed tear for U ..." uttered geet and her own words

maan ka gussa fir ubar aaya

maan closed his eyes and he understood he was very much engrossed in his thoughts, on opening his eyes he smiled at geet n replied, "tera hi wait kar raha tha..meeting me etni der ho gayi ?.."

geet sighed, "haan wo sameer..."

and d word angered maan instantly..

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

part 40:
maan possesivenss geet give up nice

i like suzil understanding nature

she smiled sadly wid tears n she knew..sumwhere she was sure..she was loosing maan...or may be understanding d fact dat maan was never hers..

wah subha geet uti maan ki bahome nice

geet ka maan ki baho me sona suzeil kawindow ke paas sona geet suzil ko notice karna wah

daadi to nicely keh dia kia geet move on but geet cant love other espect maan

geet thoght maan behaving like kid being priority

lekin geet tum ab kya kar rahi ho maan ko ore jealous help of sameer ore sameer ter ooper ummed lagadi to

i just hav to do sumthing dat maan vil realise i hav a life of my own and his life should revolve around suzeil and not geet handa...

but geet is kel me maan apna feeling ko dekega i mean ki wo apna geet ko kitna miss kiya he really loves u not suzeil samjega

daadi shock by geet decesion

determined at her thought, geet tuened and looked straight to dadi, "dadi..im ready to take second chance..."

wid dat she left from dere, leaving a surprised, shocked and extremely happy dadi maa behind...

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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

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part 41: geet ka 2 idiot dosto ko manana acha laga waise geet say ILU uttara say IHU nice ore hameer ka wo uttara ke bare me geet ko bolna

hameer took his cell n put it on speaker, "geet iski nose puri red ho gayi hai..."
next uttara ko mannars sikana

u still didn't get manners..a gal doesn't wak her boyfrnd.."

geet u r really so lovely

geet rolled her eyes, "achha dnt strt fight now..i want u both in mumbai in next 6 hrs.."

uttara n hameer were in shock of deir lives, "u must be kidding.."

geet smirked, "im not..u tickets r booked..n now run n packs things hurrily..u both hav only 2 hrs left.." wid she cut d call and smiled in attitude...

uttara n hameer looked at each other and ran for deir lives...

nice thoght suzeil

suzeil was looking forward to d evening so dat she could just make maan clear his things n about his feelings...

maan ka jealous aaj badega hi nahi blast hoga

scaring d hell out of her while maan stood rooted on his place as his eyes stopped on d door noticing geet walking in wid sameer...

suzeil did notice how maan's so good mood went off suddenly...she sighed n moved forward only to get a hug from sameer...

sameer n suzil hugged each other as suzeil exclaimed, "i missed u buddy.."

maan atleast ab to samjo apne feelings ko

he was already upset wid geet's interest towrds sameer...n her sitting beside sameer n not him just irritated him further...why is geet behaving like dis..im her best frnd..she knows i never like her being close to any other person dan me..den why is she being close to sameer..i think jarur is sameer ne geet ki patti padhayi hogi...

ab maan sameer ke patte kaat ne chale

maan smiled weakly, "sameer..hum dono etne formal kabse rehne lage..teri har gf mene hi pata ke di thi..bhool gaya kya..?"

waise sameer ye kya tuje GF bi maan ne patake dia wow

very nice game in this perfect timing suzeil brilliant

suzeil excitedly, "i think we should play truth n dare.."

geet smiled, "dat vil be awesum...sab ke raaz bahar aa jayenge.."

muje ye game se past yaad aagayee jab maaneet sam hameer ore uttara kele

sam ne hameer ko kaha phasadiya

when he was saying 5 bad thing uska chera dekne layak tha almost cried awares of uttara's reaction

hameer made almost cry face, 5th..mujhe..mujhe bahot marti hai.."

wid dat he practically started to run followed by an angry lion named uttara...

wah daadi ka emotional dilog jaan leli

savitri..aaj se hum do sathee hai..jinke raste bhi ek hai..aur manzil bhi...zindagi ki har mushkil ka samna hume ek dusre ka hath tham kar karna hai...tumhare ansun meri ankhon se bahenge aur mujhe chot lagne par tum rovogi..is bandhan ka mahatva (important) shayad hum samajh na paye..par ek dusre ke sath..aur ek dusre ke liye jite jite..shayad ek din aisa jaroor aayega..jab hum dono ke bich..na koi baat aur koi chiz aa payegi..wohi hoga humara bandhan...pati patni ke is rishte ki kadar karte huve..hum ek dusre ke jivan ko pyar ke har rang se bhar denge...jarurate puri ho na ho..par humara rishta humesha ek dusre ko poora karega...tum dogi sath mera ?..."

hey tum dono ab to samjona

geet too wiped her tears n looked at maan who was looking at her wid sum unfamiliar expressions...she faked a casual smile n looked away...

nice question suzeil

geet understood by this

suzeil thoughtfully, "ek boat jo doob rahi ho..usme tum aur maan hai..aur sirf koi ek hi bach sakta hai..to tum kise bachaogi..."

geet looked at suzeil startled but d confidence in suzeil's eyes made her understand..dat suzeil had seen dem both last night...

geet teri mann ki baat boldi lekin alag andaz me taki kisi ko ko yena pata chale u love maan

geet smiled, "agar aisa hai..ke maan aur mujhme koi ek hi bach sakta hai..to me maan ko bachungi...kyunki mera liye sabse important dadi maa hai...aur me dadi maa ko maan se alag nahi kar sakti..."

dadi maa knew..her answer was true..but d reason wasn't...she could never let maan die bcoz she loved him..

maan tu geet ko ab tak nahi samja

suzeil smiled at geet's answer but maan wasn't..he wasn't satisfied wid d reason..couldn she say dat she could never let anything happen to me bcoz im her best frnd..im her everything..m i not her everything anymore ??..she want to save me for dadi maa..not for myself..

ab game sahi jaga pahucha

maaneet ke beech

lekin geet ye nahi karna tha

geet smirked, "truth or dare maan.."

maan rolled his eyes, "ofcorse dare.."

geet thought for a min..

"FINE...Prupose suzeil ..."

waise geet maan already told ki he loves suzeil what make sense ki wo ILV nahi kah payega

but i know reason ki tum suzeil ko ek ore baar maan ke pyaar se bharna chahthi ho

i wonder kyua hoga next waise i am damn shore maan nahi kahega agar kahega bi to geet ki tara indirect answer

waiting.. for next...