SwaRon FF - Sharon's Saam Dham Daan Bhed - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooowww awesome update, love it. thanx for d pm abi continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowiee..!!!its awesum abi..!!!luvd it..<3<3
plz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
I remember dis FF lyk madss!!!!! 😍
And ab yaha b i will say ki u al hav written dis FF soo amazinglyyy dudesss!!! 👍🏼
nd dis is by far my favourite FF ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
so i really want to request evry1 dat plz continue wid it...coz u al will fall in love wid it ❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great story line 👏
The shower scene was so hot... 😳 LOL Shirtless! 😆
Cant wait for the next scene... Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shivam would be a gud guy and will start liking Sharon...interesting...

Edited by luvSwaron4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever

Shivam would be a gud guy and will start liking Sharon...interesting...

No..No...Shivam is still evil in tis FF...its jus tat his oni interest in tis FF is Sharon...no Footloose n all tat...
Edited by ABBY92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ABBY92

No..No...Shivam is still evil in tis FF...its jus tat his oni interest in tis FF is Sharon...no Footloose n all tat...

okay got it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its nce...swayam being rude is okay...but swayam was a lil extra rude...bt then hez hurt dat bad...plz continue vth nxt part ...excited...i think this time they both vil be a lil softer towards each other...WOW... can u include hindi dialogues hre and dre...cozz dat way its like connecting to them very closely...juss a request...u guys must be wrkng hard on this...nly if u can...
Edited by luvSwaron4ever - 13 years ago
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awesum concept...
n thank u abi for updating dis FF...i sooo badly wanted to read dis whole FF in 1 go..
n i m nt sure bt i think i have update dis FF too..!😕
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Chapter 2

Swayam felt very bad that she was crying and that too because of what he said...

but he too was very hurt that he didn't want to console her...

Sw: Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?

Sh: *wipes her tears* Kuch nahi... tumhe kya?

Sw: Mujhe kuch nahi... Rey aur sab tumhe doondh rahe hai...

Sh: Mujhe kisi se baat nahi karna...

Sw: Kyun? Shivam ne bola?

Sh: Uska naam bhi mat lo tum..

Sw: Oh sorry for taking ur BF's name...

Sh: Woh mera BF NAHI HAI.. *yelling*

Sw: Sure..

Sh: SWAYAM!! SHUT UP!!! *faints*

Swayam catches her before she falls... and is extremely worried...

Sw: Isko kya hua? i have never seen my... sorry!...Sharon so weak...

Sw: Sharon...! Sharon.. Utho... Are u alright... Open ur eyes...!

Sharon slowly opens her eyes...

Sw: What happened...!

Sh: Vo... Kuch nai... But y do u care...?

Sw: Shut up.. Yeh attitude baad me dikhana...! 1st tell me kya tumne kuch khaya

hai...?

Sh: Nai... I'm nt hungry...

Sw: Shut up no1 is asking u... U have to eat...

Sh: Swayam... Tum kya ho... Ek time me itna attitude like u never cared... Aur ek hi

pal me itni saari care ek saath...

Sw: Sharon stop it... Come wid me to the canteen... And eat sumthin first...

Sharon walks... And was about to slip off the staircase... But Swayam gets hold of

her wrist in time...

Look-look hawa-hawa... BG pehla nasha...

But this time she sprained her leg...

Sh: Ouucchh!

Sw: If u ... If u dun mind i can carry u...

Sh: No thanks...

Sw: Ur wish...!

Sharon tries to walk but in vain...

Sh: Ok fine...!

Swayam goes near Sharon n picks her up...Sharon wraps her arms around his

neck...She felt so safe being in his arms...She was so weak afta everythin tat

happened 2day...She jus rested her head on his chest n listenin to his heartbeat

jus calmed her dwn...She looked up at him every nw n then but he jus looked

straight ahead...She missed those times when he wuld stare at her wit so much

love...But she was d one hu made all tat go away...Sharon thought to

herself...*Wish i had d old Swayam bac*...Sharon was jus so lost in her own world

tat she didnt even realise tat he had carried her to d canteen aready...Every1 was

jus starin at them...but for d first time,Sharon didnt think bout her reputation...d

fact tat she was so close to a Weakling...All she cared bout was d fact tat atleast

Swayam was wit her...He slowly made her sit down...

Sw: U jus wait here...i'll go get u sumthin to eat...

Sharon jus nodded her head n stared at him...He stared bac but then Swayam

remembered d pain she caused him... n jus walked away to get d food...While

waitin for d food to arrive,Swayam called up Rey n informed him tat Sharon's at d

canteen...D whole gang arrive at d canteen within 10 mins...

Re: Sharon,r u kay???...where were u???...i was so worried...

Sh: I'm fine Rey...jus needed to b alone for awhile...

Re: But u culd hav atleast picked up my cal so tat i wuld hav known u're kay...

Sh: I'm sorry Rey..i jus wasn't thinkin straight...

Swayam comes wit some sandwiches n passes it to Simmi...

Sw: Make sure Sharon finishes tis...she fainted jus now cus she hadnt eaten nythin

since morn...

Sim: Owh god...Sharon...hav tis...

Sharon takes d sandwich n starts eatin it all d while lookin at Swayam...d moment

Swayam saw tat Sharon was eatin..he decided to leave...

Sw: Guys, I'm gonna go nw...

Kr: Swayam,u shuld stay...Sharon's not alrite...

Sw: U guys r here...i'm sure you all will take care of her...

Re: But dude...

Sw: Mujhe force mat karo...

Re: Wait...mujhe tumse baat karna hai...

Swayam and Rey go out of the canteen...

Sw: Kya hai Rey?

Re: Yeh kya ho raha hai?

Sw: Kuch nahi...

R: Mujhse toh atleast joot mat bolo...

Sw: Main kya kahoon..

Re: Kya hua?

Sw: Mujhe uske baare main baat nahi karna hai...

Re: Tum usse bahut pyaar karte ho na?

Sw: Tum soch bhi nahi sakthe...

Re: Main jaantha hoon... ki kya hua...

Sw: Kaise?!

Re: Sharon ne bola.. par mujhe shak hai ki usne poore baat nahi bola...

Sw: Kya kaha usne?

Re: Woh...woh...she tol me tat Shivam kissed her on d cheeks...

Sw: Huh!!...Luks like she didnt tel u everything...but i saw it wit my own eyes...

Re: Wat do u mean???...Tum wahan tha???

Sw: Yeah..so,dude...nw u get y i dnt wanna stay around her...

Re: Swayam...she didnt mean to...i'm sure there's anotha side to d story...jus let

her explain...

Sw: Explain wat???...I saw everythin Rey...n i really dnt wanna talk bout tis rite

nw...

Re: Swayam...plz...

Swayam jus pushes Rey aside n walks off...Sharon sees all tis happening...Rey

goes bac to Sharon...

Re:Guys...u'll go...i'll take care of Sharon...

Sim: Its kay...Rey,v'll b here wit her...

Re: Guys...try n undastand...she needs some time alone...i'll take her home...u

guys go bac to class...

Nil: Theek hai Rey...

Rin: U take care Sharon...

Kr: Rey...take care of her...

Re: Dnt worry Kria...

Every1 leaves n Rey drives Sharon home...In Rey's car...

Re: Sharon...i hope u dnt mind me askin u tis...

Sh: U're my bestfren Rey...u can ask me nythin...

Re: Did nythin else happen between u n Shivam???

Sharon jus looked at Rey in silence...She didnt wanna tel him hw Shivam tried to

kiss her on d lips n hw she pushed him n ran away frm there...she was

too embarrassed...Tears flooded her eyes again...

Re: Sharon...

Sh: Tum kyun achanak se pooch rahe ho Rey?

Re: Woh Swayam...

Sh: Swayam ne kya kaha?

Re: Usne yeh kaha ki kuch zyada hua tha? tum mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho?

Sh: Usko sab maalum hai?!

Re: Haan... ab mujhe bhi batayegi?

Sh: Woh...woh... *crying* i dunno how to tell...

Re: Sharon i'm ur best friend main tumhe samajh sakthi hoon...

Sh: I dunno...the one person who actually understood me better than myself didnt

understnd...

Re: Kaun? Swayam?

Sh: Haan... Rey... Woh...

Re: Yea tell me Sharon...

Sh: Shivam almost kissed me...

Re: What the fish? U r kidding na?

Sh: No.. But for some reason Swayam ka images came infront of me n i pushed

Shivam away... This is what i wanted to explain to him... par par... *breaks down

crying*

SH: I could not forget abt him and i pushed Shivam away from me...I left from

there...and did not inform anyone...i could not believe that i allowed him to kiss

me on the cheek. I hate myself Rey.

Re: Stop Sharon don't cry please...i understand

Sh: I could not stop thinking about Swayam and i decided that i will never let him

know

Re: But he knows and he is not aware about the whole thing..he thinks something

more happened

Sh: Ya i know...i dnt know how to explain to him...he is not ready to listen to

me..he thinks i am lying Rey

Re: I know Sharon but he is upset cuz he loves u...he loves u so much Sharon

Sh: I Know i never wanted to hurt him..i am ashamed of myself

Re: Don't worry i am sure once he listens to you ...he will understand

Sh: But woh toh mujhe baat bhi nahin kar raha

Re: Do u love him Sharon???

Sh: I do Rey...i love Swayam and she smiles when she said that she loves

Swayam

Re: I am so happy that finally u realized

Sh: I can't see him like this Rey..what should i do

Re: I will help you...lets try and tell him the truth

Re: Sharon plz ro mat! i am there for you , i will help you!

Sh: Thanx Rey for being there, u're the bestest friend anyone could have! Rey plz

drop me home na! mein ghar jaake kuch sochti hu..

Rey drops her home without any further questions...

* Sharon in her room*

Sh: Swayam tumne aisa kaise soch liya ki main aisa karungi...tum to mujhe

hamesha se samajhte the naa! par ab jo bhi ho i will not loose you!

* ek do glass todti hai gusse mein*

Sh: Idea! i have to woo him! Rey ki help leni hogi! and Kria...woh usse sabse ache

se jaanti hai! No Sharon u can't take her help...that cheap weakling! Nai Sharon u

have to do it for Swayam's sake!

She was hyperventilating...she did not have a plan ... kya Kria karegi uski help?

calm down Sharon , calm down! ab socha hai toh karna padega!

Sh: Par mein kyu..kyu ye sab soch rahi hu? aakhir uss se rishta kya hai mera!

thinks for a minute!

Enough Sharon tumhe pata hai ki you love him!! ab egoistic hone ka time nai hai!

its game time...from tomorrow mission Swayam ko patao shuru!

Next day in college...Sharon went up to Rey n tol him tat she will need Kria's help

too to woo Swayam...

Sh: U pls talk to Kria...

Re: Dnt worry..she'll definitely help us...

They catch up wit Kria at d rehearsal hall...

Rey: Hei Kria...

Kr: Hei Rey...Sharon...aap yahan???

Sh: Woh...i need ur help Kria...

Kr: Sure...

Re: V need u to help Sharon woo Swayam bac...u're his closest fren...u noe him

well...

Kr: Thanx universeji...Finally aap bhi Swayam ko pyaar karte hei...

Sh: Haan...but i wonder if its too late nw...

Kr: No Sharon...i'll help u...Swayam's jus angry...but he still loves you...

Sh: I hope so Kria...i'm not sure if he still does afta everythin tat i've done to him...

Kr: Huh???...

Re: I'll explain later...

Kr: Theek hei...I'll c u'll in class...v'll start plannin in class...

Sh: Thanx again Kria...

Kr: No prob Sharon...i'm happy tat Swayam is finally gonna get his love...

Every1 was already in class...Swayam was sittin in a corner by himself...Rey enters

wit Sharon...Sharon jus luks at Swayam n then at Rey...

Re: U shuld go sit next to him...

Sh: He'll jus move away...

Re: I'll make sure tat he has no choice but 2 sit wit u...

At d same time Kria walks in to class...She walks towards d seat beside Swayam

but be4 she could sit dwn...Rey calls her...

Re: Kria...do u mind sittin wit me 2day???

Kr: Kyu???

Rey signals towards Sharon n then Swayam...n Kria undastood...

Re: Remember...i tol u yesterday tat v hav sumthin important to discuss...

Kr: Haan...yaad hain...Sharon,do u mind sittin here???

Sh: Sure Kria...I dnt mind...

Sharon goes n sits beside Swayam...n gives him a small smile...Swayam

immediately gets up to find anotha seat...but d whole class was full...he had no

otha choice but to sit wit Sharon...

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