SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 96

Originally posted by: shafyyy

nice part

Originally posted by: crazy4ZaynMalik

Awesome upd i must say👏 yaar keep it uhp <3❤️

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Loved It To The Core !!!

Originally posted by: tejjo

thank u di 4 ud

loved it
superb ud tha
bechari chand sbko reply kar ke thak
poor chand...

Bt i loved veer vry much...he love her n care v karte he's so sweet

hehehe...chand ko dar lag rha tha veer...apni skirt dikhate hue...bt he tied his shirt on her waist thats my fav scene
n after that his reply omg yeh veer kab sudhrega,...bt i know he cares her alot

kabhi show nhh karta,...

He said meenakshi..mother in law...wow usne abhi se hi chand ko apni wife samajh liye

bt why he hurts her everytime

n last scene...omg chand ko kya hua h di jaldi ud dena pls

wait ni ho rha mujhse...poor chand
hope everything will fine with her

sorry di 4 being late
ud soon
luv u

Originally posted by: ridzzi

superb,,,,,,,,,,,,,,amazing...👏

chandu herself has invited a monster in her life,,,,,,,,,,,,,,and yes that was really irritating when your try to hide anything and people will notice it and every single person on earth will recognise it and ask you at first,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

and that skirt scene,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,chandu thought that he will surely pounce on her if he see's that but she is wrong,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,we know that he is a devil but he is also a demi god for her,,,,,,,,,,,haye kinna cute hai veer...

and at last why that time was stopped at 2 p:m...it's the same time na when chandu left office without answering about veer...may be that chudail aunty is behind her,,,,,,,,,,,,hope nothing will happen to her...

continue soon...

luv u...😊

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Thanx Dhanvi for giving an update.

Poor chand! She is hell confused abt wat she wants from her love life but look at veer he knows wat he wants, he loves chand more dan nything nd simultaneously he wants to irritate her :D :D

plz ud soon bcoz our chandu is in danger.

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

Superb UD dear.. Manohar & kaka's combination is perfect.. poor chandni..all r asking d same question abt "luv bite"😳😳 awww But Veer really luv her.. though he is very naughty bt cares for Chandni.. aur ye time ka kya chakkar hai..???😕😕 really confused & eager to know.. I jst luv Veer & his attitude to mind blowing hai ji.. plz giv nxt UD soon..

Originally posted by: ankitabhatta

Helo Dhanvi di...dis ff is always a treat 2 read...itz different...itz unique...itz amazing...itz awesum...i ve read al 10 parts of it till nw...7 in rtw nd 3 here...u hv really done an amazing job writing dis ff..u r an amazing writer...

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Lovely romantic sweet part and spooky at the end ! Update soon

Originally posted by: ashu1909

nice update.veer doesnt live single chance to irritate chandni.conversation of veer and chandni is most entertaining.at last of update is it ghost which is coming to trouble chandni just cant wait to read next update.