SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 92

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update

wow! chandni is jealous

thanks dear...😊

Originally posted by: disha15

Firstly 👏 👏 👏 for writing such an amazing ud. 😳

I sooo loved the update!(as always) 😍

Ok so bout the update..

it had hardly been a minute when Chandni saw him walking past the cafeteria with a girl... she widely opened her eyes in shock...it was unbelievable for her...unable to grasp what her eyes had seen '..she walked out of the queue and followed Veer'... to her surprise he occupied the table next to where Maneka was sitting...

annoyingly she turned her face away... "monster..." but unable to control herself from looking at the brute... her eyes searched around for him...she had seen him a minute ago talking nicely to a girl who was now sitting alone next to her table...

actually even i was in a state of shock thinking what the hell was Veer doing with another girl? 😲

Chandi all jealous 😆 so it was this Misha!WHO WAS LEAVING LOL

tempted to see him she tried to figure out his existence when she felt a touch on her right shoulder...she quickly turned around...

"looking for me" he smiled

He knew she was searching for him 😳

alarmed at his reaction...but annoyed at his behavior she angrily replied "my foot" then turned towards the counter...

EGO my friend EGO 😆 She WAS looking for him,but,didn't wanna let him know,she had to make him regret being with another girl you see 😆 Nautanki!

she felt him so close, that her back could feel his chest... she closed her eyes for a second...she wanted to ask him the reason of the bandage on his right forehead...but she was angry at him...

And EGO caves in again! 😳 Cudnt she ask him? poor guy..had fallen down 😭

he bend down to cover the distance between her neck and shoulder and whispered in her ear "what do you want??"

for a moment she felt herself loosing in front of his warm breath that touched her ear and neck... but another instant she flung around...with hands on her waist ..."why don't you ask your girlfriend?" staring at him...

"that's what I am doing" he answered casually...

THAT WAS MY FAVOURITE PART! ☺️ haaye,that was sooo romantic 😍 Veer,chandni ko chod do,mujhe pakdo 😆 im in love with this guy 😳 Gosh i loved the above paragraph di!EPICNESS!

Veer came back and sat with Misha but his eyes scanned the beauty who was sitting in front of him... he wanted to hold her...he gazed her fair neck from one side...her beautiful hair kissing her shoulder and back... her fair legs and thighs... "beautiful" he said '..

Misha was surprised as he wasn't looking at her... "Veer!!1"

Chandni heard him and felt more angry as she assumed he must be flattering the girl sitting next to him...

arre re..he was looking at you dumbo! 😳

Maneka turned back towards her seat when her eyes fell on him... "hi Veer..."

"hi" he smiled at her making her feel happy... Maneka now understood why Chandni was so angry... "Veer...i think you have to work hard on this one..." she smiled indirectly talking about Chandni...

"i love working on hard subjects..." he winked at Maneka who smiled back...

Such good understanding between mother in law n son in law 😆

few seconds later she heard him coming from behind like a strong wind...

another second he was in front of her... she looked at herself, he had pinned her against the tree with his hands around her waist...

Yeahhh! 😃 sorry i get super excited when such scenes come 😆

she got more angry at him while he was smiling... "get away..." she tried to push him with her soft hands... it didn't work much, she hit him with closed fist on his chest...

but instead he gripped her tightly caressing her back... and removing the distance between them... "leave me Veer"

I love Veer 😃

she could clearly see the bandage '..she touched it "how did this..??"

"i fell off the stairs..." he said innocently...

finally she asked! 😳 cudnt resist cud she? 😳 EGO gay teil laane 😆

her eyes were moist...her anger was melting away in her tears... helplessly she let him embrace her tightly in his arms...

slowly she curled her arms around his neck...he could feel her bosom touching his chest, wanting him grasp her more tightly... slowly his hands slid under her t-shirt...and touched her fair waist...

"i think I must fall more often...then you will embrace me in your arms" ingeniously smiled at what he said...

"Veer...nothing can happen to you..." she said softly

she closed her eyes...and felt his strong hands touching her back and waist... she never wanted to break the embrace...she was standing on her toes making sure she was locked around him...

After a very long time...

he broke the tight embrace '... and cupped her face with his hands... she looked into his eyes that were attracting her to give herself completely to him...

His fingers entangled in the silk locks that were shinning in the afternoon sun... he stroked her lips with his thumb... and whispered "don't you ever say, that you won't talk to me..."

Aww 😳 how cute!Di,you know how mcuh i love the way you write romantic scenes rite? 😳 ur awesome!

her hands touched his strong shoulders...his gaze made her scared for a second... he looked into her eyes as if he will eat her... "don't '...please," she whispered back...

his hand travelled towards her neck...caressing the fair skin... "Veer...please..." she felt her hands cold and her body nervously telling her to run away...

"why??" he whispered in her ear...making her weak in front of his might...

she looked into his eyes '... "you...you scare me..." she whispered...

*COUGHS* hehehehe..Veer 😳

slowly his hands reached her nape... she couldn't collect when he placed his lips on hers... it was in another second that he tried to enter her mouth...

slowly he tugged her more closer, his strong arms tightly encircled her waist... soon she found herself trapped in his arms...her mouth and lips all wet... her body felt different, every breath she was taking created a havoc inside her '.slowly she wrapped her arms around him...

Unaware of the surroundings...of the world around her...it seemed he dragged her away... soon the kiss turned into passion...she wanted to pull away...but his strong force didn't let her move...

fiercely he sucked her lips...as if he wanted her through out his life...as if he was waiting for her, it showed more passion, hunger and love for her...

Scared at first she wanted to pull away but soon she let him kiss her as he wanted... she forgot everything and was completely lost in his touch and taste...

After a very long time...

He stopped and opened his eyes...while gazing at her closed eyes... he slowly broke the kiss...he saw her breathing quickly... as if she had run miles away... his eyes fell on her red lips '..that were now swollen, but still tried to seduce him... he bend down and kissed them again...

What?do i even have to say how 😍 this was 😳The entire sequence speaks for itself 😳 epicness!

"you are beautiful..." he said softly...

while her eyes still closed...but her ears listened to his words...

"you are beautiful..."... she thought again " beautiful"

Aww..i swear i love him! 😆

That was what he said to the girl who was with him in the cafeteria...immediately she opened her eyes and pushed him away "Veer, who was that girl??" she stared at him angrily...

Surprised at her sudden reaction... he grabbed her in his arms again... "which girl are you talking about??"

"the one who was sitting with you in the cafeteria" she looked angrily..

"i don't remember..." he said mischievously...

🤣 Shaitaan kahin ka! 😳 poor chandni cudnt control her jealousy n dis guy 😆

she pushed him again... "you don't remember??? '..how many girls sit with you in the cafeteria???" aggravated at his response...

he smiled... "so you are jealous Chandni??"

she tried to act normal... "of course not..." she picked up her bag... "you...you just go to hell..." she started walking when he hold her hand and pulled her closer... this time she again tried to push him away...

OFCOURSE SHE IS!EGO strikes again 😃

Once again he tugged her against the tree holding her arms tightly... he gazed at her angry features and bend down at the fair skin of her neck...he nibbled and sucked her neck...

"leave me Veer...just...just stop it..." she said angrily...but he didn't stop...soon she closed her eyes... "no...don't" she whispered...his warm breath created a sensation in her body and she didn't fidget anymore...

he kept sucking her neck below her right ear with his teeth and lips, he tasted her fair skin...her fingers ran in his tousled hair that were rubbing her chin and cheek...

with one hand behind her nape and other curled around her waist he leaned on her...while she looked up the clear sky then closed her eyes again and felt herself landing in a different world that made her forget everything around her...he bite and sucked again and again...

Dhanvi di,I've told you this to you before as well-you are legend when it comes to these scenes 😳

She felt a sharp tingling under her ear, the biting had stung her neck "what have you done??" she shouted while touching the sore area... he looked at her fair skin ...the area where he had sucked turned red causing a visible mark... "Chandni..."

"don't say anything..." she said angrily and picked up her phone...

"yes Grandma '.i am on my way" she stared at Veer and started walking...

"Chandni...you should listen when I say something" he muttered...

Chandni left without looking at him...while Veer stood there smiling at her...

This reminded me of TUM MERE HO 😳 hahaha there also this Prithvi had given nandini innumerable..umm..ahem..*insect bites* 😆

as she entered the kitchen to drink water...Shama looked at a sharp red mark on her neck... "Chandni...how did this happen...???"

Chandni immediately coughed...she realized the mark on her neck... "oh...this..."

"yes...its so red...what is it???" Shama asked again worriedly...

phas gayi bechaari 🤣 god chandni! 😆

"So...one insect bite me..." she answered with relief...

it was so difficult to lie...and on top of that creating amazing stories...she smiled at her answer... "insect" she giggled again...

🤣 LOL

but her laughter stopped when she looked in the mirror... "oh no" it was a red mark...so visible... why didn't she realized before...

angrily she dialed his number...

Veer smiled when he saw her number flashing on his screen "my sweetheart...never thought you would miss me so much..."

oh god this Veer also na!hey bhaggu! 😃

"miss you!!! my foot... what have you done Veer??? how could you leave this mark on my neck???" she questioned furiously...

"mark???!...oh that one..." he said very casually...

"how could you talk so casually about it???" she was raging '...

"if you keep that voice, then I might have to repeat that again" smirkingly smiled and disconnected the phone...

😃 i love this guy 😳

LOVED THE UPDATE DI! 🤗

hey sweetheart...thank you so much sweetie...oh 😊...i am so glad you liked the story so much...and you love Veer... 😉...i am sure Veer will like you 😊

Originally posted by: sonalimurat

Very Nice update Dhanvi di

loved it thoroughly

It was superb ..n very Romantic

ohh then Chandini saw him with that Menka

and got jealous too...but jealousy is sign n prooof of love na 😉

then It's nice n chandini don't harsh on veer ..he is only yours 😃

she walked from cafeteria n didn't want to talk to him

But her mom understood and said veer indirctly ...I understood their code languages 😆

he followed her...ye to hona hi tha

how veer loose his chance to annoyed chandini 😆

n Like the way he annoyed her ...ekdum Romantic n passionate 😉 😳

she also let him do whatever he want ☺️

poor chandini how she would resist his spell 😳

LOved their scene 😳

But what veer have done ...veer u left visible mark on her nake ...😲

ab baaki sab usse sawal punchege ...kitna emmbarracing hoga chandini k liye pata hai

now whatwill she answered 😕

But our chandini is very smart ...she answered that she bitted by insect

veer u and insect 🤣 🤣

she made call .and insead of apology what he have done he ..you threaten her to do that again 😆

poor chandini

thanx di for lovely ud

update soon

love u ⭐️

thanks a lot darling...loved reading your long comments...i will surely try and update soon...but honestly i haven't even started scribbling yet... ...will try and update by the end of this week...lov u 😊

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

LOL I like chandni feeling jealous...and veer is too much...

lovely update...continue soon

thanks a lot Ruchi...😊 and i love your siggy 😛

Originally posted by: ashu1909

nice update.poor chandni veer is irritating her.but loved veer attitude.

thanks for the comments dear...😊

Originally posted by: dhwanimehta23

very sweet update!!!!!
Loved Chandni and Veer's moments in jungle!!!!!!!!!😛😛😛

Thanks dear...😊 your comments are much appreciated...😛

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

Awesum part <3 lved veer, chandani n jungle :P. Veer to har jagah cha gya <3 n chandani princess she's awesum, Jhel hi liya usne veer ko ;)

thanks for the lovely comments dear...😊

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
loved both parts
chandani's fight with tht bhootani was amazing
thanks to grandma who force her to take spiritual training!!
so here veer to face same force
ohh n he got injured
loved veer n chand meet!!
hehehe chand feeling jealous!
wow misha going back!!
now wht is in tht diary?
n which secret her grandma hiding ?
heheh love romance between veer chand
poor change took long time to drink water to thought reason for marks!! tht too hillarious insect!! but true veer is love insect who bites her n will repeat it again!! veer will be veer!!
poor chand had to make stories for tht

hi dear...i always wait for the critics...😊...thanks a lot for appreciating...i am glad you are liking the story... 😊

Originally posted by: Bells.E.cullen

nice...

thanks dear...😊

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

Superb UD dear.. njoyed it lots.. waiting for nxt Ud..😊

thanks a lot dear... will try and update soon...😊