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THAT WAS AN AMAZING UPDATE
thanks alot dear
Originally posted by: -Gunners-
lovely update...
thanks alot
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THAT WAS AN AMAZING UPDATE
Originally posted by: -Gunners-
lovely update...
Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
Brilliant update
Everything was just so perfect, the race, mayank's flirtingđ, nupur angerđĄ and the situation u created was damn good.
Fabulously written n describedđ
Originally posted by: vinan2050
woo wnderfull update awsm yarr itzz too gd soo adventures
lvd the mayank damn dangerous and too gd racer .But CSI is my fav FF steal want its next part thanx for Pm
Originally posted by: parul_bansal
amazing...
it was full of thriller..omg!!! di how cn u write so welli mean...i was toh feeling like i m there ..watching everything on my ownthanks 4 the pmmay god bless u
Originally posted by: arhi_maneet
VERY ENTERTAINING!
very nice update Fiza... đ
Thanks a ton for liking the previous part..
Though initially I thought 'maybe its difficult for u guys to understand the track ..yet my intelligent readers'got it so well'
Rplyd to u all
though i am not sure... saw it on my dashbord.. yet
A very happy birthday Goppi..May Allah bless u with best of fortune, success, health and wealth.. and happiness always surrounds u' God bleess u
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Mayank: leave me..i can do it alone..
Benz signal everyone not to stop him, he made his way in between on all the girls that were drooling hugging ..and seducing him⌠he got on his car, and with a sharp noise got himself down to the roadâŚ.
Samrat: what I thought it party timeâŚ
Ben: we will do it dude.. as our champ is not at all gona do soâŚand if u actually tried to make him.. ur dead.
Nupur: what actually has got into himâŚ
Ben: dono .but its something bigâŚhe never hurt anyone like this âŚevr..anyways⌠I didn't knew that u were dam good nupur..
Nupur: I am dude⌠the best..
Samrat: common lets celebrate⌠it after a year my sweetheart is on the track..
Nupur: without the driverâŚ
Samrat: we shall goo..and from there we will try to call him ..
Ben: he wont cum..i know him⌠plus he will be needing time alone at home toâŚso guys chill and celebrateâŚ
The reach the pub and was dancing and enjoying the whole ambiance⌠getting drunk, having fun was all ben and saint was doing.. nupur who has her mind somewhere else.. asked them that she is leavingâŚas she knew now or than she will be leaving home alone today as both of them will take there fun to different levelâŚ
Reaching home she parked her car, and saw the garage lights on..she shocked her head knowing he must be there ⌠reaching there she saw him, repairing the damages on the body of the car⌠tires were out⌠and he was removing the dentsâŚand that so doesn't seems to be in good moodâŚ
She went inside and foots made him knew who can be here..
Mayank: u didn't have partyâŚ
Nupur: why u didn't joined usâŚ
Mayank: I wasn't feeling like
Nupur: why u were not feeling like to party⌠girls were missing youâŚ
Mayank: I don't care..
Nupur: and what the reason of not feeling like, not so care..mood..
She said in exactly mimicking his toneâŚ
He chuckled an turned to her⌠cleaning his hands..
Mayank: hmm..and why r u so interestedâŚ
Nupur: why u were so interestedâŚ.
Mayank: forget it⌠right now I am hungryâŚhe pouted..
Nupur: hmm⌠here u go..
Mayank: oh wao someone brought food for meâŚwaoo.. aha..i am liking itâŚ
Nupur: huh.. ur imagination..
She made her way out and he followed her..
Mayank: I thought someone was giving me companyâŚ
He said sitting on the grassâŚ
Nupur: alteast clean ur hands âŚ. Ur so yuck..
Mayank: whts so yuckâŚthe smell pf petrol is so goodâŚsee..its actually a delicious
Nupur: errrâŚ
She set beside him and he was enjoying his meal..
Nupur: why u did it..
Mayank: what I did.. eating the grease
Nupur: no almost killing JacobâŚ
Mayank: his jaws got stiffenâŚ. And the anger was again on his face⌠he didn't said anything at all yet he was stiffâŚ
Cant u ignore
Nupur: noâŚ
She was patient to listen, she knew he will speak, and she want him to speak himselfâŚ
Mayank: Jacob was classmate at high skool⌠I was a different person thanâŚ. A sweet, nerd, book worm
Nupur: WHATâŚno way it cant be..i thought u must use to skip highskool to go n check the tracks..
Mayank: I use to have gr8 love for cars and raceâŚI use to.. but not like a racer, yet I always had the love for drive.. I am driving from 13..
Nupur: too old⌠I did that in 12.6
He chukled..bad girl
Mayank: I use to be a good boy.. have love for studies.. the only aim that use to have was to be an automobile engineer.. I have put everything, my everything getting that aim.. toped at mid skool but I didn't got the scholarshipâŚso I wasn't enrolled in a good highskol rather was in the oky one⌠but I didn't got dishearten⌠but than toping at highskool.. and than at the scholarship exam ⌠I was the only candidate to be given the scholarshipâŚ
Dad n mom had all there attention on me, I was actually on high pressureâŚhave use there all money..and wasn't giving to much at homeâŚI hardly get time to work but I use to try⌠but even than⌠sigh
I was called for interview and I was full on prepared⌠and I was positive I have no reason to get reject.. but I did got rejected.
Nupur: whyâŚ
Mayank: cause of my name âŚmayank shrama⌠I was of third worldâŚand they donot want to loss there money on some outside..
Nupur: racist.. wht
Mayank: Jacob was the other candidateâŚson of the director of uni.. just passed ..he was given the scholarship⌠I called them no use.. pleaded argued and they clear cut said I am not one of them.. so get out of the office. I was actually actually thrown out of the office⌠excused of using offensive language against the professor⌠were I landed was infront of Jacob.. and he kicked right here ..right here on my faceâŚ
He actually pointed it out⌠nupur was keenly listening and watching him.. siting beside him.. she was herself chocked.. this kinda things exist but to that extend.. his seriousness was effecting her⌠somehow she realize she didn't like him this way, serious, so carefull, and abit in pain too
Mayank: as I fought a lot with them and get a mark of being offensive with the prof..she was a profâŚso getting enrolled sumone where was not easy..
Nupur: than
Mayank: it was the day that turned me completely⌠Jacob actually humiliate me a load of that and help the people to threw me out of campusâŚI was nerd that time have nothing like that to fight .. dad n mom also kicked me outâŚclick⌠he chukledâŚ
So I landed on street , the best I knew was all about cars.. so strt working at garageâŚmet ben.. .and than went for street racing⌠today it all cum back infront⌠Jacob there.. I want to kick him off âŚI so want to kick him of the track ⌠now I had the power the guts to kick him back on his face.. I had that all⌠and I did it..
Nupur: but this all didn't mean that u strt hating your own self..
Mayank: watch it lady no body make me hate myself..
Nupur: oh really ..than why u changed ur name..identity..u urslef
Mayank: I didn't change myselfâŚ
Nupur: but u strt hating ur identity⌠why.. just because⌠they were not reasonable to u⌠u made urself one of them.. rather making urself uniqueâŚ
Mayank: I don't made myself one of them..but I cant make myself hate my identity.. if even than I wasn't mayank Sharma..i would have be somewhere elseâŚ
Nupur: and u regret where u r nowâŚthis ridiculous mayank..
Mayank: why just cant u stop calling me that
Nupur: cause u don't hate calling me u that.. u want to live in delusion..that ur not wht ur âŚu cant deny u r mayank SharmaâŚmackz.. is just a lie ur living with..
Mayank: and it has given me all that mayank can never have given
Nuupur: reallyâŚdidn't mayank gave u the knowledge that made u work when u have nothing to do⌠didn't maynk has given u sense of relaxation that u did and u had madeâŚ.
Mayank: he was looser and mackz is a winner
Nupur: he wasn't a losser⌠he was a winner..as he lived with himself..with truth.. he didt and almost achieved wht he want..
Mayank: almost.. he laughed..
Nupur: u wont agree ⌠but think about it⌠u r running away from urself mayaâŚokay fine mackz.. were is ur family..
Mayank: at NYâŚ
Nupur: u didn't meet themâŚ
Mayank: noâŚ
Nupur: sighâŚ
There was silence between them as he was actually think wht he did just few moments agoâŚwhy he said it all to her⌠wht actually he did..but it felt gr8.. it felt so much good⌠he didn't regret itâŚnobody even not ben knew anything regarding this⌠he looked at her who was looking at the sky..
This girl had made him feel differently, so different that he feel like going evry way to let her be beside himâŚfeels like pulling her close right here..
Nupur who was thinking wht got into her that she said that all to him, she should get so much effect with wht he think and what not.. why he is low..and when he smiles âŚshe doesn't want to do soâŚnot at allâŚ.but somhow unknowingly its happening ⌠she was aware of the way he was gazing at her.. but next shudder her so much
He caressed her cheeks with the back of his finger..puting his gaze on herâŚ. She turned and look towards him.. and was getting lost in the momentâŚ
Without removing his eyes from herâŚhe kept his fingers travel on her skin.. made her abit weakâŚ.but than he leaned down at her..and abruptly bring her close to him griping her waistâŚtaking her lips in a kiss.. initiated just as a touch of lipsâŚ.turned to wild expression of passion..
as she griped his collar n his hand were making havoc of emotions in her.. he crashed her in his arm..moving his hand on her back..rubing her pulling her more close..⌠making it more deepâŚ. His other hand was caressing her neck softly..making her loss it completelyâŚher hand reached her hair..rufling them making him turn on⌠a moan escaped from her mouth and she was completely going the way he was taking him.. the slight pain of nibbling make her come back to earth..
her eyes get opened finding him completely lost in her..so close to her
She pushed him back⌠and he looked at her surprised..she herself was shocked of her acted.. geting up from there she want to her car. driving herself away ..and he stood up and called her ..
Mayank: crab manâŚnupur⌠he went behind her but than stop⌠hiting the stone in frustration
Ups!!!!!!
sry Api...mujhe laga hi tha kahin maine seq kharab toh nhi kar diya.
sry again...
love u lods...đ¤đ¤đ¤
ps: hw is Suja apu now???
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