GEAR UP, MJHT NEW FF 6/6..CHP:16.Pg57 - Page 20

amazing...

very nice update Fiza... 😊

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

wow. mayank is so cool

thanks deear... yup he iss...

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Woa!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn exciting part API...
i loved it to d coreee...
it was like m experiencing every bit of dat race...literally!!!
though in d starting of dat race part i wasn't understanding a bit bt later on i jst got everything n it was damn fun to read dis part as i was visualising it...😍
i jst loved it to d coreee to BITS...
n OMG!!! dis Mayank is something he was flirting even dat crucial stage...😆
n i was actually imagining Nupur pushing him down from der...🤣
dis MayUr r Awesome...
so different n sooo damn amazing...
m loving dis a lottt
loved it to d coreee
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

thanks alot dear
such a relief that u actually can imagine this all
lol...mayank is mayank nah...i actually donot want to change both of them in this ff...
lol...u want her to push him..
will update soon
thanks for liking

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

That ws so entertaining nd exciting...
I ws panicking whether mayur cud win or not...But yuppiii they did it...they got the 3rd posi...
And this mayu na...flirtatious ever...😆...but the techniques he followed ws dangerous yet useful...it made them win...nd woaa nupur ws also enjoying it...
And oye hoyee the lap scene...Louveed it...i cud surely visualize nupur on his lap..ahem ahem...😆
Now just want their real love-story to start...i think u hav planned something in ur mind...
So cont soon dii...
Love u..<33

thanks alot dear...
glad u find it entertaining
lol..hero hai hero... can he loss..😉
so nice to know u can understand the way he had handle it, can visualize it..
i do have planned sumthing in my mind..yet its always diffcult to make a lovestory out of such ff...
hope u like it

Originally posted by: shafyyy

wow..

it was complete thriller...

amazing

thnk u

glad u liked it

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Awesome update.

thnsk alot

Originally posted by: raginisharma

Fiza jani loved this part and loved this mayank to...and nupur also ...

great part continue soon..wondering the moment when nupur fall for mayank haye..😳

thanks alot dear...
i am so so glad that u all enjoyed it...
hay hay... i wonder those moments n than sigh 😕

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

Omggg ... Truely wonderful . A treat to read ...captivated and stunned . More than anything in this ff ... the way u write attracts me ... Truely Madly Deeply in Love wid this Ff <3 <3 <3
Update SuperSoon ;-)

i m so glad u liked it dear...
break lago itnay adjectives... 😳 thanku
they u guys are reacting on this ff ... its making me tense more n more... but i am loving the fact that they way i strted maybe nobody is gonna read it... yet tis turning to be well liked...

thnks dear...
updating super fast...😆

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

it was amazing full of action

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: gopi06

interesting updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanku gopi.. glad u liked it

Originally posted by: --jiya--

loved it fiza-ji!!! full on entertainment👍🏼... loved the way you write this FF

❤️❤️

~jiya~

P.S. 🤗

thanks alot dear...
glad ur enjoying it...
🤗🤗
tc

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

wow brilliant Fiza di...Mayank is too cool..I mean aisi situations me bhi flirt...loving it.

But ye last me kya hua I din get it...I mean Mayank and the boy fought then last line which Mayank said'Leave me alone" why???😕

thanks alot dear.. glad ur enjoying it... hain na he is cool...n i like him cooll...

u will get it... ff mein koi drama hi nhi tha... kuch tu tpyical hona chaiy nah😆