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Addie07

@Addie07

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

shreya m feeling the same *sigh* looks like we are gona have all angsty os' for this month... hoping the hate track ends within this month,,, bt i have a feeling the hate track is gona be too intense...

neway coming back to the os.. awesome awesome awesome

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catalyst

@catalyst

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

awesum ... i lykk it :-)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Lyraa99
shreya m feeling the same *sigh* looks like we are gona have all angsty os' for this month... hoping the hate track ends within this month,,, bt i have a feeling the hate track is gona be too intense...

neway coming back to the os.. awesome awesome awesome

I know! Just thinking about the way he glared at her in today's episode makes me want to cringe. :(
Thank you!

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nims6

@nims6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

painful...i loved it...thank you so much...

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renee

@renee27

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

why is everyone hell bent on making me cry...

amazing as always...:)))

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pc17

@pc17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

aw...my heart literally broke for Arnav while reading this 💔 especially after watching that painful episode. You channelled the mood so perfectly into your writing. I know that in real terms love is like this...bittersweet and there aren't truly any happy endings but ahhh...why?It makes me so sad! And I don't know why but the line "I'm not angry because you didn't believe me, I'm angry because you didn't give me a chance to explain" really got to me. Maybe because I am anticipating this is what is going to happen in the show, sigh...

Anyway enough with the melancholy! I love this OS, you are an AMAZING writer 👍🏼 Could you send me PMs for your future work please? I would like to read more of what you've written.

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

I had totally made up my mind to read the FF first!
But then...oh well! :P

This is brilliant writing!
Its all angst, I know!
And I don't know if I'm being sadistic here (totally unusual for sure), but I loved to see Arnav suffer!
Well, not exactly love, but I want him to suffer! :l

And that song!! <3
I love Script! <3

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

loved it dear amazing OS

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sruthirishi

@sruthirishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

arnav's emotions beautifully potrayed😃

gr8 writinggg...

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haminasto

@haminasto

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

now havent i said this before that im the cute lil innocent sadist..
if only i had not being sufferin from another jet lag...i could've placed my timin right..
so basically she left him...ohkay.....thus once again she left him...n now he's in gloom coz she left him...
WOW!!!!...i hope she had right him first...leaving the guy *ahem* is not exceptable in our pure virginal beyhooda culture...

sorry...i did mention a jet lag.....alas!!! i hardly remember where i was...but its night where i am...

it was elemental...edgy...quite to the fact that Arnav had let his weakness of mistrust be the murderer of his happiness...
his impotency of givin Khushi a chance...
not holdin a pregnant pause to hear her out...
thus losing alll for ever n beyond...
well done...

n im happy u r not continuing it...or else wat all ive written wud go to Hades...

Edited by 18shabbo - 13 years ago

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