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maansi12

@maansi12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

very well written. Enjoyed reading.

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: 18shabbo
now havent i said this before that im the cute lil innocent sadist..
if only i had not being sufferin from another jet lag...i could've placed my timin right..
so basically she left him...ohkay.....thus once again she left him...n now he's in gloom coz she left him...
WOW!!!!...i hope she had right him first...leaving the guy *ahem* is not exceptable in our pure virginal beyhooda culture...[

sorry...i did mention a jet lag..[...alas!!! i hardly remember where i was...but its night where i am...[

it was elemental...edgy...quite to the fact that Arnav had let his weakness of mistrust be the murderer of his happiness...[
his impotency of givin Khushi a chance...[
not holdin a pregnant pause to hear her out...[
thus losing alll for ever n beyond...[
well done...

n im happy u r not continuing it...or else wat all ive written wud go to hades...[

I was metally replying to your comment as I was reading it but my mind just went blank when I saw your siggy. I LOVE it woman! Did you make it ?? It's BEAUTIFUL!! :D

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

ok i loved this

my mood is a bit off, so i guess that's why lol...

but yeah, great stuff

thanks for the pm

take care

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haminasto

@haminasto

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: reyabear

I was metally replying to your comment as I was reading it but my mind just went blank when I saw your siggy. I LOVE it woman! Did you make it ?? It's BEAUTIFUL!! :D

ahuum ahummm...YES Ma'am that is but alas!!! my conjured up futile imagination...im humbled..

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Jalebi

@Jalebibaby

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

That was sooo awsme.
So heartpaining nd emotional.
Want arnav to feel 4 his action like ths.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Shrey!! You are again back to form??? 😡
But I loved it!! Though hurting, glad I didn't cry!!

I'm not asking for continuation, this will be best remembered if this has this ending!! 😉
If you write it, I'll not say a NO to read it! I'll be happy as always as I love happy endings😃

Thanks for the PM dear!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

love angst and this hit the right spot. brilliant

xxx

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sweetygirl28

@sweetygirl28

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

pretty explains how most of them in the forum feel shreya.. kkg was being stupid in todays epi..

both of them are insane.. 🤣 let them suffer :P

Like button is like me half of the time it wont work 🤣🤣 so here u go 100000000000000 likes for u!!!!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

I would definitely want to see this happening but with a happy ending.! Btw feeling-wise I'm in your boat.

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Nooo... Please don't continue this!!! Sorry, but I can't take angst, pain and guilt any more..!! I have had enough in today's episode - and that was my upper limit for tolerating Arnav's pain...

I liked the way you wrote - but I didn't like what you wrote - I don't want anything like this to happen! 😭... Sorry!

Thanks for the PM...