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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL "we lost control" CLASSICCC!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Fabulous update👏
i love this Arnav
but i hate the reason he told in front of both families
feeling bad for Kushi
pls continue soon 😍
Thanks a lot for the PM 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
OMG such hatred!!! poor khushi, arnav is such a jerk eh. any who great os, keep it up :) :) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
aww first of all thank u so very much for all those wonderful comments!!🤗 they always put this huge smile on my face😃
and well even-though i am not commenting on each and every one of them, i am reading all of them, and trust me they were the main reason i squeezed in an update before the weekend.
ps: the banner was not made by me..but thought it is totally apt for this update:-)

Ok now about this update, well i am actually apprehensive about an update for the first time, u'll realize when u read on..

phew here u go,

Part 2 : Click here for Part 2
~Part 3~

Anjali was quietly admonishing him for saying what he had, even if it had been true, feeling sorry for Khushi who was standing a blank helpless expression on her face.

And Arnav just brushed it off and said,

"di what has been done is done, we can't undone it. So why don't we stop all this commotion and move on?"

Through all this the guests were bidding hasty goodbyes and leaving what was soon to be a family feud, as the marriage they had come to attend was anyway over. And after a while only the 2 families were standing.

And Garima who had stopped trying to lunge at Khushi again, turned away from her and said to nani that they were leaving and to take care of her daughter Payal. And after she hugged Payal one more time she blessed her for a happy married life. And guiding Shashi who had looked on in his wheel-chair she started moving out.

And a strangled cry erupted from Khushi as she moved towards her father when Garima turned to her and said,

"Stop Khushi. You don't have any right to come near us anymore"

"Amma" she sobbed.

"it was our fault we tried to love u and bring u up like our own daughter. But not anymore, today u have proved us that u r not ours. What a pity you couldn't even hold the honor of the man who adopted u and treated u better than a real father would! From today on u have no relation with us" saying this she asked buaji to follow her and went out.

Buaji slowly came towards Khushi who was sobbing by this time and placed her hand softly on her cheek and said, "Sanka devi u shouldn't have done it. I still can't believe'take care of urself" and with this she too left.

And once the Gupta's were gone, nani asked everyone to leave to their respective rooms and asked mami and Anjali to take Payal to Akash's room and without even glancing at Khushi she left.

And Khushi watched on as one more person left her, as she stood motionless not doing anything to stop it, not because she couldn't but because if she opened her mouth it would mean both her and her jiji would go through this hell. And her life was already ruined, why ruin her jiji's too she thought.

Payal who had until now been only a spectator came towards Khushi and hugged her and when Khushi didn't say a word and simply stood still she broke apart and held Khushi's face and said,

"Listen Khushi, let amma have sometime, she will forgive u eventually. Don't think too much about these things"

And Khushi nodded once, glad to have a soft word, a caring touch on her for the first time since this nightmare had started unfolding.

"Say something Khushi" said Payal getting worried with Khushi's growing silence, she hadn't spoken a word since they had walked in.

Khushi forced a watery hint of smile to come up and chocked out a,

"I'm fine jiji. You go with jiju"

And after hugging her for one more time Payal left with Anjali and Akash. And mamiji grumbled as she pulled a face and followed them with mamaji leaving behind only Khushi-Arnav & Shyam in the living room.

And a now Arnav came towards Khushi and put his arm around her waist and pulled her against him and leaned forward and placed a kiss on her cheek asking her in a husky voice, "sweetheart let's go upstairs. I know it is not our first time, but after all it is our wedding night, so I'll keep you busy all night long" and the steel grey in his eyes and the cold hardness of those lips were a few more secrets only Khushi was privy to.

And he escorted a numb khushi up the stairs with his viselike grip around her waist intact as he threw a look full of contempt at Shyam.

Shyam who was left to his devices smashed his hand on a nearby wall watching their retreating backs through Arnav's room.

And the moment they came in to the room Arnav closed and locked the door behind them, still not taking his hands off her.

After a few seconds Khushi once she realized they were alone started squirming away. Arnav would have none of it as he held her tighter and asked her in his cruel whisper,

"Where do you think u can go to?"

Khushi started wondering what else he wanted her to do, when he replied, "So now that u r my wife, I demand my marital rights" and her eyes widened in shock as she realized what he had said and she became still.

And just like that he picked her up in his arms and carried her towards the bed while she was too shocked to react. Once he deposited her on the bed he leaned over her and slowly started stroking her bare waist and started running his fingers through her silky curtain of hair, pushing it away from her neck while nuzzling and planting soft kisses up her neckline. After the first frozen state wore off with his expert caresses Khushi felt an involuntary moan leave her lips.

And he then moved from her neckline to capture her lower lip and gently coaxed her lips apart, initially gentle and soothing and deepened as he lost himself in it and broke apart only when he was gasping for air. And he looked down at the gentle mounds that were rising and falling as her chest heaved. And he slipped a hand through the material of the slip of a blouse cupping and caressing each of them. And ever so slowly he started undressing her while continuing to kiss her and Khushi moaned, her back arching as pleasure coursed through her, forgetting everything that was wrong, everything that was broken about her as she felt lost in this haze of passion.

And just as softly as he had initiated the love making he entered her and she gasped at the unexpectedness of it as he stifled her cry of pain with his lips on hers intensifying the kiss. And he remained still for a few seconds until she got accustomed to having him in her and started a rhythm as old as time, steadily rising until both of them climaxed and he lay across her, both of them spent.

After a while he slowly detangled himself from her and stood near the bed watching her. She looked so delectable he thought watching her sleeping form, pity she had to have such a vindictive nature hidden behind those angel-like looks.

And he quickly left to the bathroom and took a cold shower and came back and got in to bed beside her and soon fell asleep with his back to her.

Ok people, here it is, and well may be I sucked at the love making part, cz honestly I don't think I know what to write. So well, excuse me if it did fall flat. Anyway well weekend is here, so I am dead busy during weekends with stuff that requires me to stay away from my laptop. So the next update probably wouldn't be until Monday, that is unless I manage to squeeze in another update before that.

And for that I need some motivation. That is comments and LIKES! lol sorry for resorting to emotional blackmailing. But really all ur comments make a huge difference to me and inspire me to write more.

Part 4 : Click here for Part 4

If u r interested in my other work

SS:The compromise,a wedding it is

FF :Another Chance at Love


Edited by princessunara - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
oh my god! what is he doing! feel so bad for her. . does he even understand what he said!!!
next part atleast 1% of misunderstanding clear ho jae tho it'd be nice! lol . . . superb update

but loved the part!! soo awesome!! it was like i was watching the actual ASR and a tongue tied Khushi - just waiting till Khushi kumari gupta reaches the limit and pounces back!

edited -

just read the other part too!! man ASR- leave her baap! i had tears thinking about this! she respects all that so much and all her family does is scold her and leave?

again - awesome part! filled with emotions and the banner! SOOO apt and good!!! 😊👏
Edited by asumi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Everything until their consumption of marriage was acceptable...but then princess is Arnav morally that low???????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Khushi is living a nightmare..the poor thing..arnav should have stuck up for her...i understand he feels she deserves it..well at least when he realises the truth..he should not only apoligise (lots n lots) to khushi but family as well..i understand why a family would react like that..traditional values n all..

Nyways lovely update..very emotional..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
I loved it, you didn't suck! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
ahhh ASR 🤢
poor poor kushi...what would she feel when she realises he didn't do it out of love 😭😭
OMG Sunara that was a fabulous piece of writing.
And the lovemaking part was awesome! 😉
I can't wait for the next update. ummm screw other work and update soon? ( yeah i know I'm a bad influence on people 😆)
Edited by CDlove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
What the hell is happening????? How can he do something like this to her???? He loves her damn it! Why did he do this???????????????

Please please please update soon, or I would die of tension!

Thanks for the PM..

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