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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music1

Everything until their consumption of marriage was acceptable...but then princess is Arnav morally that low???????



hmm...well i don't know the answer to that question myself..in fact i am exploring two completely different dimensions of the same moment, same story through my two SSs..
this is darkness as much as the other one is sunshine...

whether morals ever came in to play is a question here, cz this SS was based solely on a whim i had and i wrote it in the story before now,
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She will go through exactly what his di will go through when she gets to know one day, except Khushi will pay more than that and today was just the start."
that is what this story is about...not quick fixes or punishments meted out in a rush...

this is based on what the article on 'Hatred often paves way for love!' said about "
but when you take it to a level where you have ruined somebodys life"...



Edited by princessunara - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hararnav

lovd it...

poor khushi everyone hatess her:-((
he didnt even put the mangalsutra for her , then y did she agree for the love makin... and arnav wat did he want to prove with this.. he is so cruel and ofcourse different



well seduction played more of a role than acceptance by her...one fact we know for sure even in the story is their heightened physical attraction, and it just needs a lil push to stumble out of control...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anumber1

Wow, he was so mean. I kinda understand why she gave him her virginity. Everything was so bleak for her that she craved some sort of tenderness/love. I think any other situation she would have fought it but she was in such a bad place that she just wanted to feel good in some way. Poor Kushi. 😭 Please pm me with updates.



aahh...well u have come pretty close to reading in to the story i had in mind.. will PM dear:-)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Neetu2825

I loved your updates but I don't understand why Khushi is being punished by BOTH her family and his family for "sleeping" with him before marriage while he is left unscathed? Technically, he broke the rules too...so why this old mentality? I thought the grown-ups would be wise enough to hold him equally responsible but I guess they will just blame Khushi for this hasty marriage due to this supposed premarriage behaviour. It isn't right.

Your writing was awesome but it was very dark. If the show takes a turn in this direction, where Khushi is emotionally/physically/mentally abused...I would probably stop watching it.

Yeah I get Arnav feels betrayed...and his loyalty at the moment only belongs to his sister. Still, if you TRULY love someone...you can't go to such extents, for your love for that person (no matter how much you've pushed it away) will still linger in some recesses of your heart and would not allow you to be evil towards your love.

In your story, Arnav knows that he hasn't married her...so to sleep with her? Um...I didn't like that.

BUT...I DID like your writing! I hope my post made sense😆


i so agree that it sickens me too that in our society a girl has to keep her pristine pure personality intact, while a man is not only forgiven but also not held accountable n neither is it expected of them to be restrained! i think that after friday's episode y the families held her responsible wouldn't come as a surprise..i expected that much from them..hell i dread how nani will treat her from now on in the show! there none of these was told and only marriage is known to them!n yet i dread n that says how prejudiced this society is!

n lol it makes perfect sense what
u said😆!
so thanks a lot cz it means i got across the message correctly!!🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great story so far...both are emotionally tortured. ASR doesn't know how to control his emotions around K anyway. So didn't expect any better. Hopefully, he'll see that it was her 1st time in the morning!

-Sona
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please update soon.
Please PM me too.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahhh! I don't know how 2 react? I'm so upset wit Arnav 😭 but @ da same time I get him; same way I feel bout Kushi's situation - devasted but angry 😡 at da same time! Hence my predicament! Y? Y? Y? Why r u torturing me like dis? ...well da only thing I can demand is update, update, update - 😆 😆 😆! Please just put me out if my misery 😕 ... U were - 👏 👏 👏 !
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sparikh

Great story so far...both are emotionally tortured. ASR doesn't know how to control his emotions around K anyway. So didn't expect any better. Hopefully, he'll see that it was her 1st time in the morning!


-Sona



thank u...
and well he knew already..he was sure of that before he had her..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazmeen

you made me say wht a jerk man ASR sorry baby buh YOU are a Jerk to do that to a grl :(

Loved ur ff plz con sooon



well he is a jerk..and well in this story he might be a jerk for a while, i haven't decided fully yet..but well this is not yet the end though..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SNR7

Ahhh! I don't know how 2 react? I'm so upset wit Arnav 😭 but @ da same time I get him; same way I feel bout Kushi's situation - devasted but angry 😡 at da same time! Hence my predicament! Y? Y? Y? Why r u torturing me like dis? ...well da only thing I can demand is update, update, update - 😆 😆 😆! Please just put me out if my misery 😕 ... U were - 👏 👏 👏 !



thank u very much!!😳
aww will update in a little while!!

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