Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1 - Page 35

The last strains of the music faded away, swivelling in front of them like steam above hot water, swirling and whirling gently as they mingled and disappeared into the air. Leaving behind two souls, wounded, alone, frightened, and desperate for each other, but with a world of devastation lying between them, keeping them apart.

Well all I have to say is that you ate an awesome writer
Keep it up!

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Reading this FF is stressbusting from all my revision, and best of luck for your exams too!

Great update

Glad to see Arnav trying to get Khushi back slowly.

N Teri Meri...bought back memo's for both of em.

Cont soonx

beautifully written continue soon :)

Such strong emotions... You write so beautifully I can really feel every word.

it was soo emotional...dear u hav a fan in me..thnx 4da pm

I just read part 13 and 14 they were amazing and beautifully written I really can't wait to see what happends in the next part thanks for the pm

Wow...so emotional

Are you trying to kill me here, girl?? That was freakin' awesome! I could literally feel every word..!

What can I say more? Oh yeah, this is the most perfect portrayal of emotions and the lost battle both of them are fighting in their hearts just to keep the hate facade on show - ever written on I-F..!

Damn, I'm running late for my lectures, but the hell I care - this was uh-may-zing! Well, you said this is laying foundations for the next chapter - you know what- saying such things after writing such an amazing chapter with that awesome song is considered a sin here! I want want want want want the next chapter asap!!!!!! Oh I hate your exams more than you must be hating them!

Thanks for the PM! waiting for the next one!