Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1

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cloud.9

@cloud.9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Emotional update. You have written so well

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Awesome portrayal of Khushi's dilemma! Loved it..!

All the best for you exams dear! Will be waiting for your next update..!

Thanks for the PM!

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Wow read all 13 parts and it was awesome, Arnav has some making up to do with Khushi but knowing him I'm sure he'll do great.

Can't wait for that creep Shyam to be exposed. Please update soon and do PM me

Dee

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suadvani

@suadvani

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

Simply fantastic.. Just read 12&13.. Amazing.. The teasing in 12.. And in 13 I love how Khushi thinks about forgiving.. But realizes its not just forgiveness its trust.. Which he has broken sooo many times.. but the Dhaka Dhaka.. Too good..

Loving your writting..

Good luck on ur exams

Thx for the pm.

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Huny

@huny.thebest

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

interesting ss dear... do pm me ur next updates...

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

hey

awesome update...

good to see khushi's emotions..

arnav in full form from the next part..il so wait for it..

dhak dhak...hmmm/..

thanks for the pm..:)

continue soon..