Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

omg!!! what a beautifull ss, i have just read all the chapters now, i just loved it. i realy felt sorry for khushi, my god,,, the pain this man has put her through, i know he is trying to make ammends now that he knows the truth but i do hope khushi dos'nt forgive and forget so easily. please continue soon and thanx for the pm.

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Syca

@Syca

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Aww that was so cute he had a picture if her in his wallet, brilliant update can't wait for the next part update soon please thanks for the pm. Good luck with your exams

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Love the update!

Yay Arnav is doing something to gain her trust again but this will not be enough he has to do something big!

Oh em gee Khushi saw a picture of herself in his wallet :o

Now what's going to happen?

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Loved the way you wrote the entire update.. so many feelings, emotions - described perfectly.. awesome! Especially the description of Arnav noticing Khushi's change in behaviour..!!! Hats off..!

Love the way the story is moving! Continue soon.. thanks for the PM..

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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

that was great...specially khushis thoughts n d lil gestures arnav were showing towards her to win her back!

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nada_a

@nada_a

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

wow that was an amazing update...👏

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Just caught with entire SS!!

I loved it..! The emotions the body language their gestures amazingly written!!

I had a feeling of watching them in real!!

Thanks for the PM..!

All the best for ur mock exams! 😛

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

love your update!!! honestly i'm already restless to read the rest of the story!!!! 😕

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#179

it is beautiful..i like ho wu clearly show Khushi's inner turmoil as well as how Arnav is so perceptive towards every nuance of her countenance..
do update soon:-)