MAANEETSS-THE JOURNEY[epilogue:pg112-june12th] - Page 9

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Nice update dear...
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awesome update
i wish nothing will happen to Maan while saving them
i guess Devil Dev did this
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Chapter 2:



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Then as his superior infromed him to land the flight...pilot makes an emergency landing at airport.


When the flight landed in the airport, the superiors called the pilot.


Pilot: hello sir .


Officer: hello pilot. Whats the problem? Why did u ask for sudden landing of flight.


When pilot was about to answer the black beard man took the phone from him n answered


hello officer.


Officer: who is that??


Thats not important now. Listen to me carefully. We have hijacked the flight.

Officer: WHAT?


If u want your passengers safe then I want to talk to govt. officer immediately. If I dont get a call within 10 min then from the next minute u will hear that one of ur passenger is dead. So dont be late. Ur count down starts now.


Officer: plz dont do any harm to our passengers. We will inform govt. officials.


Saying so that black beard man cut the call n smirked.


In the officer's cabin:


The officer immediately called NSG commando officer n IAS officer of delhi n informed about the situation here.


Officer: hello NSG commando shashank gupta?


Shashank: yes speaking.


Officer: sir this is suresh from ****** airport.


Shashank: yes, whats the matter?


Officer: sir here is the news the flight from delhi to banglore is hijacked n landed in ****** airport.


Shashank: WHAT?? who did this?


Shashank asked n maan who is in the cabin saw his change in the expressions.


Officer: sir we dont know who did this but he wants to talk to u n had some demands.


Shashank: ok connect to him.


They cut the call n shashank asked maan.


Shashank: maan the flight from delhi to banglore is hijacked.


Maan is hell shocked to hear this. Sudden panic evolved in him.


Shashank saw the fear in his eyes which is very rear n asked


maan whats wrong?


Maan closed his eyes n told geet is in the same flight.


Shashank: that means u think its him.


Maan: yes I think this is done by dev.


Shashank: maan we cant get into any conclusion before talking with them. U calm down, nothing will happen.


Maan just nodded. The phone rang again n shashank picked the phone. He kept the phone in speaker so that maan can also listen.


S (shashank): hello.


That black beard men on the other side.


BB: hello officer. How r u??


s: stop the non sense n tell me who r u??


BB: oh itna gussa. Ok just listen mera naam BRIJ. Dev ka bhai.


This increased maan's anger n he shouted


maan: you b******* how dare u. I wont leave u.


Brij: oh, maan singh khurana. Ok just listen we r giving u 24 hours time. U should handover my brother if not then all the 500 passengers will be dead including your geet.


Saying so he cut the call.


Maan: I know that they are planning something. But hijack I didnt expect.


S: maan dont worry we will do something. First come we will go to airport n talk to officials.


M : yes sir.


In flight:


brij removed his artificial beard. Geet is hell shocked to see him in the flight.


Geet (st): that means this is his plan for his brother. I did a wrong thing by not taking him into custody. I will not let this happen. Brij u r dead.


Brij: listen people until our demands fulfill u r not gonna leave u. so dont try to act smart n do anything which u repent later.


Brij turned to geet n told


geet now u came to know what will be the consequences by arresting my brother. We wont leave u.


geet smirked and told u r mistaken brij now u have to face NGS commando officer MAAN SINGH KHURANA. U didnt read his history he solved many such cases n I know he wil solve even this. So u be ready to face the consequences.


OK LET US WAIT AND WATCH. All of u take ur positions n dont allow ant one to move from their places.


All his men nodded n took their positions with guns in their hands.


Here maan n shashank n IAS officer reached airport n whole media surrounded them. One of the reporter asked them


R: sir we came to know that the flight is hijacked.


IAS: yes


R: sir what are their demands? Why they did so?


IAS: see still didnt talk with them. Once we come to know we will inform u.


R: but what u think their demands will be? What if the demands are high? Will u be able to fulfill their demands.


Maan is pissed off with their questions n shouted.


Maan : will u plz stop it. First let us do our duty. Its ur responsibility to co-operate with us. Dont annoy us with ur questions.


They all left from there.


R: reporter pinky gupta reporting with cameraman Ashok. Just now the NGS officials n IAS officer came to airport but they are not giving any information. Commando maan singh khurana is yelling on media people. So for further news keep watching ******* news.


In the officer's cabin:


IAS: Hello mr. shashank.


S: Hello sir.


IAS: What are their demands?


S: we have to leave underworld don DEV whom we arrested 2 weeks back.


IAS: oh no. so what r u thinking to do officer.


S: We cannot take any decision now.


Just them another NGS officer ADI entered the cabin n saw maan observing the flight whch is landed in the airport from the window.


Adi : he saluted n wished good morning sir.


Maan turned back n saw adi. Adi went towards maan n asked


A: what r u thinking maan.


M: brij did all this to realease dev.


A: we took so much risk to arrest dev. How can we easily release him. We cant do that.


M: exactly I am also thinking the same.


A: geet kaha hain. Does she know?


M: I think she knows.


A: what do u mean?


M: geet is in the same flight. I know they wont do anything to passengers but I am worried about geet.


A: maan dont worry kuch nahi hoga. Calm down.


But still the officers are discussing what to do.


In flight :


Meera: OMG.. OMG.. what did I do? Dad n mom told me not to go. But I didnt listen to them.


YASH: uff just stop ur non sense.


M: u shut up. When mom n dad comes to know what will happen to them.


Y: by the way what u did?


M: I didnt inform at home that I am going to banglore.


Y: ohh ghar se bhaag gayi, very good. Ur parents can live in peace.


M:you.. you.. I wont leave u.


Y: waise what is ur boy friend doing? Pity him. I just dont understand how he fell in love with u. u r such a irritating girl.


M: boy friend?? oye hello I didnt elope. Main ghar se bhaag gayi.


Y: what is the difference?


M: there is so much. My cousins marriage is after 5 days. Dad told we will go day after tomorrow. But I want to enjoy with them so without informing them I came.


Y: Ohh.. other than shouting n fighting u know how to enjoy even.


M: u just shut up. Tumse baat karna hi bekaar hain.


Geet: guys will u both shut up for some time.


M: sorry geet, by the way geet I never saw maan singh khurana. How he looks? Handsome? Sexy??


G: oye.. he is married.


M: so what.. I am not talking with his wife na.


G: oh stop it meera. I am Mrs. khurana.


M: ha geet mujhe pata hain.


G: Mrs. maan singh khurana.


M: oops I am sorry n bit her tongue.


Yash started giggling heraing their convo.


M: oyee.. chup dont laugh.


Raj-romeo convo:


romeo: raj when they release us?


Raj: what do I know. Just sit quitely.


Romeo: sir when I see ur fights I will lost in those fights. Sir even my girl friend is great fan of urs. We will see ur movies twice, thrice n many times.


Raj: oh thanku. (hitting his head).


Romoe: sir I know u will do something now.


Raj: what will I do?


Romoe: arey sir dont try to fool me. I know in one film u r a cop n when the flight is hijacked u did mevellous job. In that film at night u did commando operation n killed all the people. Even now also u r waiting to do something at night. Right sir?? I know sir u r the best.


Raj (st): oh god, kaha phasa diya aapne mujhe. (loud): see romeo that is a film n what director sir will say I will do. Thats a reel life n this is real life. There is so much difference. So stop dreaming.


Romeo: sir I know u r joking. Dont worry sir I wone inform anyone about ur operation. Good luck sir. I know u will save all the people.


Raj(st): god plz save me from this pagal. He is eating my brain from airport. Does he dont have any other work other than irritating me. Ufff..


in the officer's cabin:


maan is thinking how restless he was in the previous night thinking about geet.


~~flashback~~


maan n geet are sleeping each others arms. Maan is carassing her hair n geet rested her head on his chest.


M: geet.


G: hmmm.


M: is it necessary for u to go to banglore tomorrow.


G: yes maan, I have important meeting.


M: I dont want u to go.


Geet lifted her head n cupped his face n asked.


G: why maan??


m: I dont know. Muje kuch bhi acha nahi lag raha hain. Plzz dont go na.


G: maan dont worry, nothing is gonna happen. U dont worry. I will be fine.


M: hmmm.. still not convinced.


G: maan if u r worried like this then how can I go?? pouted geet.


Maan smiled at her pouted face n told ok yaar dont worry. I am fine. But jaldi aajaana.


G: ok maan n kissed his cheeks n slept.


~~ end of flashbck~~



m: I was feeling so restless from yesterday only. Now what happened. Jaan u dont worry I will do something. I wont leave that b*****.



precap: maan n adi's plan.

Officials decision. 😡



Hii friends we r here with part 2. hope u all like it. Sorry for short update. Next update will be coming soon.

Plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.

Will be waiting for ur response. 😍



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-jyothi, mona. 😉


part 3: page 29



Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part


geet ko kuch nai hona chhaiye


warna my like button wil stop working for sure...
waiting for the next

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