KHWAAB(ARSH FF) PART 3- PG 6

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Hey dear feel so sad to know about u nice FF awesome update
Alot of thanks for ARSH version I love ARSH.
Hey dear I noticed a mistake I don't want to embarrass u
I just want to told u key in 1st update u said she is going London in 2 nd update u said new York yaar new York to USA
Mein hai either you change country from London to USA.
thanks 4 PM
Update soon.

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friends_4dream

@friends_4dream

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: moonlight2630
Hey dear feel so sad to know about u nice FF awesome update
Alot of thanks for ARSH version I love ARSH.
Hey dear I noticed a mistake I don't want to embarrass u
I just want to told u key in 1st update u said she is going London in 2 nd update u said new York yaar new York to USA
Mein hai either you change country from London to USA.
thanks 4 PM
Update soon.

thnx 4 ur comment and telling me d mistake.actually my hand is injured so my frnd is writing 4 me i will surely correct ir.

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Awsm part.
Waiting 4 d arsh meting.
Thanx 4 d pm.

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

nice part...

liked it..

continue super soon...

thnx for the pm...

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

loved the update!!!!!!!!!

feeling sad for shilpa!!!!!!

how can her father be so rude to his own daughter?

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heavens_way

@heavens_way

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

guys thnx alot for ur response.and sry for mistakes.
actually i met with an accident few days ago and i had wriiten these parts in a paper before.
write nw my frnd is typing for me as doctor has asked for complete bed test atleast for one month.
dats d reason i couldnt update MOHOBBAT DO DILON KI DAASTAAN(ARSH).
i m really sry 4 mistakes and i will surely tell my frnd to type in small letters and in deep shade.
and one more thing i got a suggestion to change the title of this ff.
so if u want the title to be changed then plz suggest some names but according to me i gave this ff
this name because according to the story geet has always seena dream to have a good life,life partner and all.this ff is based on hw geets dream is fulfillled or not?? and many more.
so if u want to change the title then plz suggest some names and tell me whether if u want to change the title.

thnx