Arhi SS: Safe Havens DISCONTINUED

purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

So guys, I'm Simi. I live in the US, and I don't feel like saying anything else, because well, I'm feeling lazy. Anyways, after reading a bunch of wonderful FFs, OSs, and SSs, I decided to write my own. Let me know how it is, because I'm not sure whether or not I should continue. Here goes!

A note before I start: Arnav and Aakash are cousins, but Payal and Khushi are best friends, and Anjali isn't crippled, and Shyam isn't her husband.

Prologue:

I looked up at the ceiling, and sighed out loud. My second day in college, and I was sooo over it. Payal giggled and blushed next to me, and I rolled my eyes in annoyance. I looked over at Aakash, and I could see him pushing his chest out like a stupid rooster. He was nice, I guess, but he was NOT my type. Which, like Payal, Lavanya, and Anjali always point out, is still undetermined. I looked at the clock, which seemed to be taking forever to move, and sighed again. I heard a soft, velvety chuckle behind me, and whirled around in my seat. Oh. It was THE Arnav Singh Raizada. His beautiful chocolate brown eyes seemed to root me into my chair, and I felt like we were the only two people in the room. My eyes trailed down his perfect Grecian nose, and down to his sinfully perfect lips. How would it feel to kiss them? Oh sh*t! I'm not going there. He's Aakash's cousin. I don't know how they can be related. They're total opposites!

I looked at the back of the delectable creature in front of me. She had a perfectly feminine body. What would it feel like to hold that body? Oh sh*t! I'm not going there. I stretched out my legs, and heard her sigh, when I saw Aakash swell up like a rooster in his seat. I saw Payal, his new crush, giggle and blush. I heard the girl in front of me sigh again, and let out a little chuckle. She spun around to look at me accusingly with her perfectly large, doe-like hazel eyes.

"Did you say something?" he asked, in a voice that had my knees trembling.

"N-n-noo," I managed to get out. I wondered where he had learned to seduct women with just his voice.

She had the cutest look on her face, and I felt like reaching up to smooth out the tiny pucker in her brow. Just then, the loudspeaker crackled, startling both of us out of our reverie.

"Attention all students and staff. This is a Code Red. There has been an intruder spotted on campus, and sources tell us he has a gun. His name is Shyam Jha."

That's it so far, guys. Comment, like, and tell me whether I should continue!

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Edited by purplekid - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

You should deffo continue!
Sounds interesting
do pm me when you do :)

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purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chinnu-

You should deffo continue!
Sounds interesting
do pm me when you do :)

Thanks Chinnu! I honestly wasn't expecting any responses! 😛

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whisperer

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sounds interesting...do continue!!!!!!!!👏👍🏼

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647669

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Posted: 13 years ago

Why? You write good! And i like the storyline!

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Angel13

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Posted: 13 years ago

interesting

you really should cont.

thanks for pm

cont. soon

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sounds really interesting :)

You should definitely continue! :D

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purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi93
Sounds interesting...do continue!!!!!!!!👏👍🏼

Thanks! It means a lot!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Oooh, I normally don't read stories where the characters are in a very different setting, but your story line is really good and sounds very promising. You write very well, do update soon :)