Shetan Ka Ghar (12)-Ended

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: NiharikaNeha777
Simi di, I told u whtevr u write, um completly fine wid it 😳 bcz I love ur simple style of writings 😛

so now bak 2 bak devil stories, ri8?????? Fear & Hope, then Shetan Ka Ghar and now, may be "Shetan Kii Mishti" 😆 😆 😆

are haan, part 77, nice twist... 3 Idiots, haan??? 😃 my fav scene... but u ended it... now start d new one pretty fast diii... woh kya hain na... dil mange more 😉 😉 😉

P.S>> arey, pls BM aur BD ke Maaneet pe bhi kabhi rehm kiya karo... unhe bhi update kiya karo diii, plsss 😳 😊

ahha yeah..I am writing another dark story (hopefully it is dark lol) haha shetan ki mishti😆😆

I will update that 2marow...

I updated BQ yesterday and will update BM today itself😳😳😆

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

Oh its ended... I really don't want it to end... Awesome update...
Y not name it devil in disguise

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#463

wonderful...for a moment I thought u are going to use contact theory - a premature baby can recover if given skin to skin contact with mother

epilogue...so this is coming to end...

I really loved this FF Simi and will miss the updates. Only silver lining is that you are going to start something new.

Title from my side - "Captured Love"

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: ritzy09
wonderful...for a moment I thought u are going to use contact theory - a premature baby can recover if given skin to skin contact with mother

epilogue...so this is coming to end...

I really loved this FF Simi and will miss the updates. Only silver lining is that you are going to start something new.

Title from my side - "Captured Love"

Thanks ritzy!

yeah I thoguth about it but then decided to do soemthign else..I liked 3 idiots idea lol

OoO captured love is another wonderufl title😆

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#465

Awesome update!!

loved it!!

Awww Maan finally thinking about his dad!!

Haaayyyeee he was so much worried about Geet during the time to hospital!!

Ha ha Maan became so restless when Geet was inside!!

Awww his dad cared for him and Geet and even met her at home and even brought thread for Pari from temple!!

OMG suction pump was too good!! Ha ha instead of "All izz well" , "Shetan" simply loved it!!

Poor Geet became exhausted and even went through a lot even it be just for a sec at the thought at the loss of their child!!!!!

Haaayyeee finally Pari woke for her parents- for her mom, for her shetan dad!!!!!!!!

You rocked it Simi Di!!

I am sad b'coz its ending

Post epilogue soon!!

Titles:

Romeo Shetan

Will edit later on...

p.s: I know the title i gave is crap!!

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: Anu-Ananya
Awesome update!!👏
Wow Simi Di That was marvellous!!⭐️
Oye hoyyeee Return of Shetan!😳
Poor Geet was feeling so conscious because of the short dress!!😉
Awww Maan made the day special for her!!!😳
Uffo Shetan and his naughtiness!! Simply love it and would surely miss it!!😉😛
Poor Geet regretting her decision of sitting on his lap!!😆😉
OMG that was the start!!😲
Maan loves Geet so passionately!!!! That was deffo HAWWWTTT!!!☺️
You rocked it!!⭐️
Me sad bcs its ending!!😭
umm Ideas:😃
How about Maan loving Geet secretly as in obsessively but never showing up whereas Geet being attracterd towards him at first sight???
I know its crap but still!!😆
Cont soon!!😳