mod please close

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

The ending actually moved me to tears dear.loved it.

Quote

zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Fantastc OS.

Loved it. SO sad.😭😭😭😭😭

Thanks.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

invalid

@invalid

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Oh wow, this was just so so beautiful and sad, so sad, but I adored the last line ! I read it over again, it was horribly depressing, but also really satisfying at the same time (not in a sadistic way!)

I love your writing Zee !

Quote

suadvani

@suadvani

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

So sad.. Thank u for the silver lining though.. Will u continue this one?

Quote

Sidra

@siddy9171

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Beautifully written! Please pm when you update

Quote

-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Zee this was amazing and different! 😃

Please update another part!😉

Quote

Tas

@gapgirl

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

very well-written.

and not entirely impossible either. i think there is more danger to khushi if arnav marries her and she is in the same house as shyam. it'd give him more opportunity for him to "try and have his way with her" so to speak...

wish that our indian serials didn't have our heroes being so mistrusting of the good girls like khushi. it's a predominant theme in all of our serials sadly.