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Awh how beautiful!! Continue this please I beg! You can't leave a story incomplete!!

very well written! will u continue? that would be great!

Yep, another os that made me cry...😭

Aww sigh, poor Khushi :( But at least you left us with a ray of hope.

Wonderfully written!

Cheers!
Naina

ooommyyy ggooossshhh! that was gorgeous! i had tears in my eyeballs!!!!!!!!! can you keep going? if i beg? i may even grovel!👏

oh wow this is a very good concept...lovely

Omg this actually had gotten years in my eyes it was eaitifully written! I just cried! Please send me a pm when you write another fan fic

lemme kill that shyam...and then the turn is urs...
how dare u make me cry with his heartbreakingly beautiful OS that too early in the morning...

i look stupid crying, my mom wondering what has suddenly got into me to go all weepy in the morning😆...

had u not been a fantastic writer , i wud have happily strangled u...but then since u write so well...all the more reasons to kill uu..as u make a depressing OS even more dpressing depicting khushi's helplessness, selfless love , arnav's indiffrence and suppressed anger...and shyam's perverted motives so beautifully ...i wish i cud hug K and cry...

somehow i dont feel any sympathy towards A...since its all his doing, no matter whether he knew about shyam's motives or not...but its K who had to pay a heavy price...

next time u write a morbid OS, hand over a pack of tissues, coz i will badly need themm...and yes a disclaimer to read them only when we r alone...lest ur family deems u as loony...like my mom does😆

ok there's one more thing i wanted to ask...

have u added one more E to ur IF id...i guess it was earlier zee...now its zee...
or am i dreaming...

dont confuse me for a stalker who has an obsession for watching ur every move...its just i guess i am getting paranoid offlate that i am observing things a bit too much😆...
i need to get my eyes and brains checked😆

this was so beautifully written!! i hope you continue to let us know what happens when that thumb brush turns into khushi completely waking up 😉