FF- Pehli Nazar Mein Part 1 Pg. 10 3/2/12

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

awesome update very intresting pls continue soon

had exams sorry for the late comment

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arnaushi

@arnaushi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

its a nice concept continue soon

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

I luv your writing (don't we always cuz ur just too brilliant) Anyways you guys I love the plot and the writing is going on smoothly and beauutifully. Please do continue and PM!

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-zozo-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

we need an update! PLEASE!

Edited by zoey_1365 - 13 years ago

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Wow this is an awesome first chapter. Please update soon I can't wait any longer the anticipation is killing me

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-ChanChan-

@-ChanChan-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Brilliant update guys!!!!!

Abhay is just so adorable...awww!!!!

And Payal she is just amazing!!!!

And when Abhay was pulling Khushi's hair...cute!!!

I wonder why Khushi and Payal moved? and Khushi let down her dad!!!...oh the suspense!!!

I'm loving the concept of this FF!!!...it's really interesting!!!

And who is Dhruv SIngh Raizaida?...another mystery...guys you have to tell me soo, the suspense is killing me?

And Akash, Anjali and Arnav they are just tooo cute!!!!

Can't wait for the next update!!!!

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Wow you are mean. You give us a great update and leave us with so many unanswered questions. Who baby is that? Who are them "all"? Is Khushi going to work for Arnav?
Jk you guys aren't mean!! This is so interesting, cant wait to see what adventure you take us on this time!!!