FF- Pehli Nazar Mein Part 1 Pg. 10 3/2/12

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Hey guys! So let me tell you about this before all of you freak out 😃 This is a FF that is being written by three of people!! Yes you heard right! Three people!!

The Writers -AquaBluez17(Mya), Smileyface (Hershi), ..first.rain.. (Khushi)

We are here to present to you a new creation made by all three of us. It is to be called Pehli Nazar Mein!! Dhan tana!! 😲😆

We really do hope you all like it!! It took a lot of time and effort to make this happen so please do tell us if you liked our work!!

For pms please add.ArHi_Paradise.

Thanks for reading in advance to everyone and now we present you, Pehli Nazar Mein!!!👏


Prologue

The happily ever after it was not.

Just a fake dream that burn hearts.

The new phase seen at first eye

And things change

For good or bad?

Or is it for worst?

One truth'harsh but magical

Keeps them bonded together.

Will this story start?

Before it ends at

Pehli nazar mein?


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"Hey lady! Watch it! Can't you see where you are going?!" a man grunted at her.

She looked up in shock as she felt herself being pushed once again by the same man. Looking at the man stare at her, she gave him a big smile before moving forward and stomping on his foot. "Oops" she muttered sarcastically before balancing her bag on one hand and her world on the other, she walked away.

Who does he think he is? Pushing me around? It's not like this whole station is his! Right Devi Maiyya? Exactly! she mumbled to herself as she walked out of the station and started looking for a cab. She smiled a little when she felt her sister taking the bag out of her hand, lightening her weight. Shifting her weight so she was more comfortable, she reached out for the cab once again. Once they got into a cab. they placed all of their luggage in and took a new step... towards their new life...

Half an hour later, Khushi pushed the door open with her free hand and stepped in together with her sister. Taking a few steps inside, she looked at the dusted place. It made her cough twice but she was careful about where she coughed. Payal checked out the rest of the house while Khushi muttered, "New house. New life. New people. New city. Does this get any better?"

She stood by the window and admired the view outside. The view was just perfect considering the way it was perfectly designed. She turned hearing the soft moan. She smiled softly and turned to face him. She said pleasingly, "Isn't it beautiful Abhay?"

Picking up the handsome little man on the floor, she gave him a kiss on the cheek before turning back around and pointing outside making him look too, "Look there. See that?" From what he understood, he followed the finger, mostly due to the jingle sound her bracelets were making as they clanked, and let out a loud giggle as he drooled a bit, jumping in Khushi's hold. The excitement of being in a new place could be seen on his face. Khushi giggled and wiped his mouth.

"This is our new home shonu!" she whispered into his ear as she saw her sister join her by the window looking out at the beautiful view and holding her free hand comfortingly.



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Love ya all for all of the support you have showered us with previously🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I n d e x .


Prologue Page 1
Part 1 Page 10
Part 2




For pmz, please add this id as your buddy. Thank you. =]
Edited by .ArHi_Paradise. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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my presence has been here!!

JK!! hope u all like it =D

xox
hershi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys! So we hope you all will like this. Tripple dhamaka is here 😃

Love, Khushi


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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept can't wait to read more loved that you guys are starting this together
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its a beautiful start trio gals...waiting to see the plot unfold😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohhh hi!

a kid? and the man- was it arnav? naaa why would THE asr be at a station...
Edited by malluangel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start you guys! Love it! So excited to read this story!

Want more! Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res... :D

*edited*

Hey the concept is amazing!!

Abhay??? Hmmm...

Update soon!! Added the new account... Hoping to get PMs soon... 😃 😉
Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago
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great start pls pm me when u update next part

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