FF- Pehli Nazar Mein Part 1 Pg. 10 3/2/12 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, awesome start...

can't wait for more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Ooohhh! Sounds interesting! Continue soon! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey peeps!! We are here with part 1! Sorry about the delay, all three of us were just too busy to sit down and figure this out but we finally did so go ahead and read it! Please press the LIKE button if you like it and leave lots of comments! Thank you!

Part 1

Payal and Khushi plopped down on the sofa, letting out a sigh. Finally after spending the entire day cleaning and organizing, they were finally settled into their new home. After dinner they put little Abhay down to sleep and now finally had time to sit and talk and just relax.


"We did it Khushi," Payal laid her head back on the sofa as she looked around the apartment.


"Yes we did Jiji!" Khushi looked at her sister who was trying really hard to bite back a smile but seeing Khushi all her efforts went down the drain as the two sisters burst out laughing, trying really hard to keep it down so they wouldn't wake up Abhay.


Finally after calming down, Payal took a deep breath as she held Khushi's hand in her own and put her head on her shoulder.


"We proved everyone wrong Khushi, look at us! On our own in a new city! We finally can shut them all up," Payal emphasized on the word 'all' knowing Khushi knew exactly who "all" she was talking about.


"You are right Jiji, and now we only think of moving forward! We have to make Bauji proud and we will do just that. I let him down once, but not again," Khushi gave a gentle squeeze to her sisters hand.


"Khushi, we promised we wouldn't talk about that anymore. It wasn't your fault! And now it's done and over with. Now we just to look out for the happy times and the new life we have started. You, me and my handsome Abhay," Payal reprimanded Khushi, but ended up smiling as she thought of her cute little nephew.


"Your cute little Abhay?! Excuse me?" Khushi asked in a offended tone.


"Yup! He is mine and don't you forget that!" Payal called out as she walked to the kitchen to get some tea for the both of them.


"You know Jiji, sometimes I feel like you don't love me anymore! I mean come on! Abhay gets all the attention!" Khushi complained like a two year old as she followed her sister.


"Since I don't silly! It's you against Abhay. Obviously we all know who the winner is. And plus I warned you when you were pregnant that once he comes no one will even spare to look at you! All the attention will go to my little man," Payal responded as she brought the tea.


"Fine then. You can watch your darling Abhay tonight when he wakes up while I can sleep peacefully," Khushi said cheekily.


"Don't I already do that Khushi?" Payal said in an obvious tone, teasing her little sister.


"Ya well. I am just letting you know," Khushi pouted, as she took a cushion and placed it on her Jiji's lap and laid down on it, placing the tea cup on the table.


The two sisters went on talking and teasing each other as the night passed, each avoiding the real thoughts running in their minds. They had come to Delhi but what now? Using all of their savings and some that Bauji had gave them, they had bought this small comfortable house. Khushi had told Payal to not spend so much money on the house alone but Payal had made it clear that their living standards would not go down, even if only for Abhay.


Just before going to sleep, Khushi made a mental note to call her office early in the morning letting them know she was in Delhi and would start working in two days once she was settled down. Before leaving Lucknow, Khushi had already applied for a job at a personal fashion firm and had got her appointment letter due to which the girls had decided it was time to move on. She hadn't thought twice before taking up this job since it seemed perfect and was worthy enough to support all three of them.


Of course she would give her all to the job but the nervousness of working somewhere new kept her mind in a frenzy. With multiple thoughts running in her head, she swiftly closed her eyes, forgetting all the pain the past had caused her.


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Early morning, Payal giggled looking at Abhay playing in the water. At last, she decided it was time to get him out of the bath tub and get him dressed before he caught a cold. After getting him dressed, she took him to Khushi's bed and placed him on the bed to disturb his mother out of her deep slumber as Payal proceeded towards the kitchen to prepare breakfast.

Khushi pouted in bed as Abhay played with her hair. Next thing she knew, he was pulling at it getting irritated that his mother was sleeping peacefully when he wanted to play with her! Khushi made a soft moan in pain and finally got up, "Alright buddy. You win. Mumma's up."

She tickled him and pulled him on her lap. Together they played until Payal called them out for breakfast. Khushi quickly got ready after giving the bottle of milk to Abhay.

20 minutes later, grabbing her purse off of the counter, she quickly got her dupatta and sprinted to the door.


"Bye Jiji!! I have to go now or else I will be late!!" Khushi shouted to her sister.

"Be careful! And come home early!" She replied back loudly while walking towards her. Handing her a a glass of orange juice, she added, "I have heard it's not safe in the cities to be outside in the dark."

"Jiji you worry too much! It's fine. I will be home early and safely," Khushi consoled her before chugging her drink down. "Now I will go before my boss gets mad at me for being late and fires me on the first day." She gave a quick hug to her after handing the glass back to her.

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In another part of the city, the Raizada Mansion stood mighty and tall, towering over the other buildings in the neighborhood. Everyone knew about the Raizada Mansion. It was the house of them, the Raizada family, the house of one of the richest families in India. Arnav Singh Raizada, the man who everyone not only feared but looked up in admiration, took the family from the streets to becoming one of the respectable and reputable families in the society.

At the age of 26, Arnav Singh Raizada had built it and is still running as one of the top fashion houses in the country. AR is one of the most efficient and fast paced company in India, known for it's best qualities and designs. With the help of his brothers, Akash Singh Raizada and Dhruv Singh Raizada, Arnav Singh Raizada has developed a palace as his house and a stealthy control over the fashion industry.

Known to be the most influential men in the country, the Raizada men have grazed the covers of many fashion magazines, which only leads to them becoming more popular then they already are. Even though their popularity within women and their own work is soaring, the Raizadas like to stay aloof of the social world, staying very mute about their personal life.

The business world may be controlled by the men but in the house only one person controls everything. Anjali Singh Raizada. With the help of their grandmother, she has made sure to keep the house a happy place. And just like every morning, even today she was fussing over her brother who was in a rush to get to work.

"Chotey don't walk away as if you can't hear me! Get back here and eat your breakfast!" Anjali reprimanded her brother as he walked downstairs and went towards the door.

Turning around and rolling his eyes, he walked over to his sister who had an annoyed expression on her face.

"God di. Do you have to be this loud all up in the morning?" Arnav asked his sister as he took his seat on the table.

"Well I wouldn't have to yell if you just listened and came straight to the table rather then going. You know that i don't like you going out of the house without eating." She replied back to him as she put food on his plate.

"I don't have time di! I have a meeting and lots of work to do today."

"Today? You always have meetings and lots of work." Anjali went on ranting as she made sure he ate his food properly while he just groaned in reply.

"Di, I am going to work! See you later," Arnav said as he walked out.


"Wait Chotey! Dhruv called today in the morning! He said he wanted to talk to you about something so do call him back," Anjali yelled after him.

Frustrated she glared at her brother's back as he walked away from her, trying to find a way she could penetrate his mind with her gaze. Finally giving up she turned around to bump into her other brother Akash who was smiling widely.

"Di you are mad at Bhai again?" Akash asked softly.

"I don't care about your Bhai. Just tell him that Dhruv called in the morning and wanted to talk to him," Anjali huffed and walked away from the scene before Akash could probe further. Shaking his head at his siblings, he walked out following his brother.

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Alright darlings! That was part 1! Hope you all liked it! You know what to do...press LIKE and leave lots of comments! Also remember, we do not add people who have 0 posts and silent readers won't be getting PMs so pleaseee comment!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Yay!! I'm first! 🥳 Now let's celebrate with a comment!

Another fantastic update, I've read so far ,Abhay sounds so cute and adorable!! Especially when he had started to pull Khushi's hair to make her get up, lol!

It was a wonderful update! Continue soon! 😛



Edited by Electric_BuBBle - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
update soon i was too good
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
abhay=cuteee
anjali= adorableee
khushi= pregnant :O wattt? well i mean mother ?!
and arnav= awww
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Electric_BuBBle

Yay!! I'm first! 🥳 Now let's celebrate with a comment!

Another fantastic update, I've read so far ,Abhay sounds so cute and adorable!! Especially when he had started to pull Khushi's hair to make her get up, lol!

It was a wonderful update! Continue soon! 😛




aww thanks Meggy! glad you liked him!😃

love the beautiful man! haha so beautiful!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
interesting twist... 😊

liking it so far can't wait to read more... I couldn't resist after reading the title, Pehli Nazar Mein was my favorite song for the longest time...😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic update, Abhay sounds so cute and adorable!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome, want to know more...plzz pm me

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