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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: prahelika

my reserved space isn't working😭...edit hi nahi hota...

lovely update dear...😃
so i guessed it right...(so did many other readers😆)...there was a baby girl in the wicker basket😳..
loads of cuddles,pampers and kisses from me for the baby😳..gosh!!! i love babies😍...
but what was that egyptian or hebrew or greek 😕😲😆archaic language...
it must be a mystery to solve later...
this baby is surely an angel...she has the aura to change the winter-forever garden to blooming-spring one...😳
and the jewel changed it's colour when she wore it😊...another mystry...
waiting for the next..
plz update soon...😊



u guessed everything right, for that a big🤗

i wasn't sure if i would be able to deliver the suspense properly i really feared people would ask me to explain in simpler language . but the readers understood my writing


so for u r intellect i will reveal one thing she is not an angel, other things in ur comment u guessed r absolutely right abt the color of amulet will reveal later
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: pranita1202


u guessed everything right, for that a big🤗

i wasn't sure if i would be able to deliver the suspense properly i really feared people would ask me to explain in simpler language . but the readers understood my writing


so for u r intellect i will reveal one thing she is not an angel, other things in ur comment u guessed r absolutely right abt the color of amulet will reveal later

aww...here is a hug from me too🤗
and i love the way u r writing ur two ffs...
cinderella story is more of conversational and silver amulet is more of a descriptive as it has supernatural aspects too...
as sweetsanyo mentioned ur word selection is fantastic but easy to understand yet😊...
so she's not an angel...maybe some other supernatural creature or maybe a human with special gift...i'm really waiting for the update when this secret will be revealed...
plz update cinderella story too...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
@ pranita :
beautiful update dear👏, specially the pictures were much needed here, continue soon. and sorry for the late comment !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

i miss u...
vapas aa jao!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

sorry for the late comment..

but really amazing update..

liked it alot..

n the pics added more to it.

cont. soon..

thxn fr the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
u know how much i love taming of the shrew rite? 🤗rashmi tol me ki she loves silver amulet..n was like i must check it out..while seeing it was urs..i was like yeaah!its pranita's! coz i love ur writing!

Coming to this story!awesomeness dude!very different frm the trend these days..i really liked d concept!really lukin fwd to ur next update!

Edited by disha15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
kya hua why didn't u continue??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The night is wavering in the water

The greening shore is so still and silent

That it is painful

If only I could wait

For a beautiful dawn

With a pure heart...

Who told me that

There is a land without any conflicts

Beyond the dark seas and skies?

No one can reach that land,

Or perhaps it only exists in someone's heart

A melody that can quench the thirst

Of the land that calms the waters' flow

Even if it does not exist anywhere right now,

I will come to possess it

Always, someday, for sure

Let the token of water be in my hands

Even after engulfing all the flames,

It still continues to flow, gently and broadly

I will reach its tranquility

Always, someday, for sure

With your hand in mine...


(CAN'T FIND THE POET'S NAME)



Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
very nice...promo...n that baby in black...awww...so cute...
update soon yaar...luv u... :-)

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