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Just_Love

@Just_Love

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#941

Very nice FF, you have written here! =)

Can I get PMs for it in the future please?

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#942

you know your line "they both had to learn to breath all over again"... to describe what aryan and lavanya is going through.. was amazing.. just perfect line.. you didn't need anything more or less to describe.. i have tears in my eyes.. this FF has always been close to my heart.. so perfectly written and just amazing story..

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Smita Gogoi

@Gogoismita

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#943

Its been rly amazing...
Tears roled through my eyes aftr reading this chptr...
Cnt wait 4 the nxt chpt...:)

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winchfire

@winchfire

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#944

it was so sad n beautiful!! really no words to describe it!!

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#945

falling in love with wrong person is so difficult na esp when u have to let go

really feel bad for la n aryan may be they can find themselves in each other

oh i dont knw what me saying

beautiful update m so happy at last arhi together

great work dear

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#946

Wooo !!

This was amazing !!
Such a long update, full of pain hurt and love !!

Aryan and Lavanya on the same boat, they did fall in love with the wrong people didnt they ??
But sometimes the wrong seems the best, and I guess thats the case with Arnav and Khushi isnt it ?!!

Aryan's parting with Khushi, was just so emotional, so sad and so much full of love, care and pain, that I was crying there !! And still smiling
And Arnav and Khushi's kiss, well it did speak volumes !

This seriously was an amazing update !! Loved it beyond words🤗

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-Mannat-

@-Mannat-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#947

Hey Lyraa...

Just caught up with your story, and I'm in LOVE!! Pain, Friendship, Love, and pretty much every human emotion you've wrote about is so wonderful... that I could feel everything the characters were.

You're a really talented writer, and I can't wait to read more of your work!

Please do update soon...

P.S. I have a feeling that Aryan and Lavanya might have a future... i feel really sad for them but really happy for ArHi

<3 Mannat

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#948

"You came in my life for a brief time and taught me about love. Not just about falling in love but about loving someone. You taught me about holding on and more importantly about letting go. You became my reason to breathe only to teach me to breathe without you."😭⭐️👏

Loved it[ mopping the floor]😭

Loved how u connected Aryan and Lavanya😃

Not going to write anything abt Khushi and Arnav[ there will be flood soon]😭

and YES WE NEED MORE😃

Thanks for the pm

Smitha