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Jammy-

@Jammy-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#951

This update was just too awesome... I felt Aryan's, La's, Khushi's and Arnav's pain. Too many people hurting, all at the same time.. The fab analysis of the River and banks took my breath away!! That was surely the best moment.
You've written an amazing FF!!
Aryan and La should fall in love, what better than letting time heal all the wounds?!!

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#952

first of all wanted to say wonderful ff

i am inlove with you ff

in this ff you bring out human emotions so well. while reading the chapters it looked as if i am watching something happening in reality in front of my eyes.

hats of to you for writing such a great story👏

chapter 16, 17 and 18 are too good.

here you portrayed each characters helplessness very well.

in chapter 17 and 18 you showed us the real meaning of the title of your ff " The reason i breathe" by showing us the reason of breathing for arnav, khushi and aryan and this was more pronouncedly expressed in the last part of chapter17 where arnav tried to sacrifice his life for khushi, khushi tried to sacrifice her life for aryan and aryan in turn tried to sacrifice his life for khushi and each of them was doing it for the knew that the oter person for whom they are trying to sacrifice their life is actually their reason for breath, they have given them the ability to breathe again.

have added you to my buddy list. please pm me when you update next

waiting eagerly for your next chapter.

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#953

Fabulous update dear =)

there are lots of things to say but i'm out of words =) =)

really love the way how u ve described everything and if i noted them down then i might ending with the whole update except for few lines =) =) =) So coz of dat i'm nt going to do dat =D

Love Arnav's reaction when LA told him about Kushi =) =)

Extremly awesome update =) and Continue soonnn =) =)

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LilaUK

@LilaUK

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#954

That was lovely! Glad I came across this by chance today. Glad it's not quite the end. Waiting for the last chapter or maybe last 2!

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Nishi

@nishi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#955

Love how each of the 4 ppl handled each other ...
Hopelessly in love with the story ...
Am glad la n aryan r close to a closure

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Amina Mahmood

@Amina87

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#956

I just luv this ff...plz continue soon!

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#957

Absolutely beautiful update
Thanks for the pm

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#958

so sad & confusing for all...Arhi would want to rejoice for finally being together but the thought of a broken-hearted Aryan is not going to be easy to forget...

so yeah i am all for a proper ending...trusting in you to give us all that closure...that courage to go on with life despite everything...

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Raj

@GillRK

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#959

wow that was sooo good!!! im thinkin aryan and lavanya are going to get together...i cant wait to read more :)

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723461

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#960

Lyraaa..one of your best updates so far.

The pain, beauty, love and sheer joy of this whole story has actually become my reason to breathe.

I really dont know how you frame such thoughts, its just absurd.

But i want you to know its so achingly beautiful that it remains in the minds of all who read it...

I'd say I'm stunned, but your work casts such a spell on its readers, I'm not shocked anymore, just very very pleasantly surprised, every single time, unfailingly.

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