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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#281

Hi Marvee...saw u updated n had to read! Lol...bt so try n pm! Nywyas fab n rocking update! Geet is such a sweet innocent girl! She is rich bt is down to earth ! She want evryone to likes for herself n nt for her wealth n status! Yash is hilarious! Maan n Geet meet on the bus! Maan helps her! Geet thinks he is hot! Maan tries his luck to no avail. Poor Maan! 😉 Maan comments on his status! Seems lyk a wrong move as Geet seems different! Although she is rich she does nt flaunt it. Yash questions Maan n he is shocked with Geet nt making ny moves! He has to wrk harder. Update soon! Loving dis FF! 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

nice concept loved it do update soon

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Sumaiyah

@summikhan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#283

ohh... interestinggg... now i think the 2nd meeting will be at the gym?!! ☺️

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

Osome updt
loved it...
waiting 4 next
con soon

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#285

woah, gr8 update...
read both parts now...
and mahn, tht was enuff to make me sweat...
awesome beginning...
so Geet is gonna be a tough task...
n his 1st law of seduction almost failed...
continue soon.. wud be waiting...

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

Oh how I wish Geet giving Maan a very tough challenge and make him work too hard ...to get her...forever...

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Sneha

@sneha.juneja

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

very very nice part Marvee..

luving it to the core..

Damn different story..

waiting to knw wat happens next..

do update soon..

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504887

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#288

awesome one di!
loved it
ha hha his 1st law failed!
omg yash did it all!
n maan now craving 4 her skin
but geet appears sweet n conservative
its going to be tough this time mr.charmer
cont soon
omg precap!