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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATING TONIGHT...
any one there???

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

UPDATING TONIGHT...
any one there???



yeah me waiting was just going to ask u to update
as 10 pages comments r done
and by the way congrats for becoming a dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079



yeah me waiting was just going to ask u to update
as 10 pages comments r done
and by the way congrats for becoming a dazzler


thanku abi... 😃
yeah i started typing... will be completed in few hours... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 8:


note: plz add 'maneetmaneet' to ur buddylist for pms.

Priya went to kitchen n was preparing coffee. Suddenly she heard a voice.

Gudiya mujhe bhi ek coffee came a voice.

She was rooted at the spot. She turned back n saw maan n a person smiling at her.

Priya ran to him n hugged him tight. He too hugged her n asked how is my gudiya??

Armaan bhai, how r u?? I missed u a lot. I am very angry on u for not calling me. Mujhe aapse baat nahi karni told priya n broke the hug n pouted.

Armaan smiled n was about to tell something he heard a voice.

Amy''.

Armaan turned back n saw geet n pari. He smiled at them. But geet n pari had tears in their eyes.

Armaan came to them n hugged pari. Pari too hugged back n asked how r u amy??

Armaan broke the hug n told I am fine yaar. Don't cry dear now I am back na.

Pari smiled through tears I missed u amy.

Missed u too told armaan n wiped her tears.

He looked at geet n smiled.

But tears flowing down her cheeks continously. Armaan hugged geet. But she didn't hug him back. Seeing him geet broke down completely. She is crying very badly.

Geet calm down yaar, nothing happened. Shh shh consoled armaan.

Priya got tensed seeing her crying.

Armaan broke the hug n told geet dear, don't cry.

Geet nodded her head in no.

Priya came to geet n asked geet di what happened?

No.. nothing told geet.

Geet knows that its time to apologise. Mainly maan should know that she don't hate him. But she don't want to say that she loves him.

Amy, maan called geet.

They both looked at her.

she sat on her knees infront of them n her head lowered.

I am so sorry, galti tho meri thi ki I misunderstood u, I know maan there is no mistake of yours. Uss waqt I don't know what happened but I did a huge mistake in my life. I know that u wont believe me now for what I told u. but I am truly sorry. Ho sake tho mujhe maaf kardo, amy tum bhi I am sorry.

Geet yeh tum kya keh rahi ho. MU tho kabhi kabhi ho jata hain.

Geet looked at him n smiled sadly.

Ha tum sach keh rahi ho. But itna bada MU I just cant imagine how I think like that. But I don't deserve ur divine friendship, that's why I took a decision.

Armaan looked at her questionly.

Main hamesha hamesha ke liye india chodkar jaa rahi hu told geet.

All are hell shocked to hear this. Pari made geet stand n cupped her face.

Geet what are u saying? U cant leave us yaar. How can u think like that.

Nahi pari, mera chale jaana hi acha hain. I talked with veerji too told geet.

R u gone mad geet, why u r doing such things asked pari.

Nahi pari mera chale jaana se sabko khushi milti hain told geet n looked at maan.

His face has no expressions, he stood there like a lifeless body but geet don't know that he is in shock, he is not able to believe what she told 'hamesha hamesha ke liye india chodkar jaa rahi hu' is the only thing in his mind.

Di aap aisa nahi kar sakte told priya n hugged her.

Don't worry priya I will be fine told geet.

Nahi main kuch bhi nahi sunne wali, yash bhai aisa kaise kar sakte hain asked priya.

Geet (st): yash veerji ko nahi pata ki main hamesha ke liye jaa rahi hu, I will convince him later.

Geet broke the hug n cupped priya's face n told mera jaana jaroori hain, plz don't make ot difficult for me.

Armaan n maan stood there don't know what is going on. Geet saw them both. She hugged both for the last time. Automatically maan n armaan hugged her as if it is a natural thing for them. Geet felt some relief. She immediately broke the hug n ran from there.

They all stood there numb. But pari composed n shook them.

Maan n amy I don't want geet to go anywhere. I don't know what u do but she should not leave us told pari n left from there.

The whole scene didn't miss by dadimaa. She is shocked to see them like that.

Dadi (st): kuch tho hua.. I have to do something now. Geet bte aap aisa kahi nahi aa sakte.

Geet went to her room in HM n sat on her bed crying bitterly.

She took the pic from her cupboard n caressed that pic n smiled. Those are the happy days in her life. She want to live those days again where there is no MU n all. They all always had masti n enjoyed their each n every moment. Geet closed her eyes remembering those days n smiled.

~~past~~

It's the 2nd year of their BARCH. Surprisingly maan n armaan are very much excited to go to college because their juniors will come today n they can drool over those girls.

Armaan called maan.

Hello bolo amy told maan.

Kaha ho tum jaldi ready ho jao, humko college jaana hain.

Oyy I am started going to pagal's house pata nahi kya kar rahi hogi told maan.

Ha yaar, main bhi usi ki ghar aa raha hu told amy.

Acha thik hain we will meet there told maan n cut the call.

They both reached the so called pagal's house n went inside. They saw uncle n aunty there.

Hii uncle, aunty wished both maan n amy.

Arey beta aap log ayiye, aap dono itni jaldi kaise uth gaye asked rano.

Wo kya hain na aunty aaj college hain na isilye told maan.

Acha, phi rap logon ki friend abi tak so rahi hain told rano.

KYA? Shouted both amy n maan.

Kyun? Kuch kaam hain kya asked rano.

Ha aunty bohot important kaam hain told amy n winked at maan.

Hum abi ate hain aunty told maan n they both ran to her room.

They opened her room door n saw her sleeping peacefully n a smile on her face.

Maan n amy frowned seeing her sleeping peacefully.

Yeh aise kaise so sakti hain, raat bar tho humko sone nahi diya told maan.

Ha yaar, chalo hum kuch karte hain told amy.

Maan n amy smirked n went near her bed. They both stood on either side n bent down n shouted GEET in her ears.

Here geet who is sleeping peacefully got up with a jerk n widened her eyes.

Kya hua kya hua asked geet horrified.

Seeing her face maan n amy burst out into laughter. Seeing them smiling her face became red in anger.

U u.. I wont leave u told geet n got out of her bed n started chasing them.

Maan, amy ruko tum dono I wont leave u shouted geet.

Ha ha aaja shouted maan n amy n started running.

Trio are chasing n reached hall. Rano smiled at them, they all are used to their fight.

U dono monkey n gadha ruko shouted geet.

Pagalll shouted maan.

Tum monkey shouted geet.

Just then a girl entered HM n saw them chasing. She is wearing a blue color salwar suit with minimal makeup but looking so sweet.

Maan n armaan saw her n shouted heyyy ridzy.

Geet stopped n turned to her n she smiled widely.

Ufff aap log phir se shuru hogaye asked ridzy.

Geet hugged her n told dekho na ridzy, yeh dono mera neend karab kar diya.

Ridzy broke the hug n told acha hua, see we r getting late come on get ready fast.

Geet made a baby face at her n turned to maan n amy n gave them a angry glare n went to her room to get ready.

Meanwhile they all are talking in geet's room.

Geet tera books kaha hain asked maan.

Maan mera lappy ke paas hain told geet from washroom.

Yaar why don't u keep ur books before only asked maan.

Tum ho na replied geet n chuckled.

Maan rolled his eyes n told shut up n come fast.

Aarahi hu na, cant u both come fast replied geet.

Oyy chup chap ready ho jao warna hum chale jayenge told amy.

Geet came out getting ready n glared at amy.

Amy smiled at her n made a sorry face.

Chalo chalo told ridzy.

All the 4 went out bidding good bye to rano n mohinder. All the 4 put their goggles on n maan n amy started their bikes.

Geet sat on maan's bike n ridzy on armaan's bike.

They accelerated the bike n went with full speed. After 20 mon they reached college. They 4 got out of the bike with full attitude. All the girls are drolling over maan n amy n all boys are staring at geet n ridzy. They all smirked n walked with full attitude to the class.

They went to class n settled in their seats. Geet n ridz in one bench n maan n amy in next bench to girls.

After some time professer came to the class n started his lecture. Geet n amy are least interested in their class. Where as maan n ridzy are listening to class seriously.

Amy saw geet n winked, geet too winked at him.

Geeet shouted amy. Suddenly the whole class became silent n turned to them. Maan n ridzy smiled inwardly seeing theirnew drama.

Geet acted as if she fainted. Amy got up immediately n took her in his arms.

Sir I think she is not well told amy.

Ok take her to rest room immediately.

Thanku sir told amy n took her out.

Once they reached outside the class, geet stood on her feet n they both burst into laughter.

They hi-fied each other n laughted. But to their luck the professer came out at the same time n saw them.

Miss. Geet n armaan malik shouted professer,

They both looked at him horrified.

Get into the class now ordered sir.

They both looked at each other.

Now..

Ok sir told geet n amy.

They both sat in their seats. After the lecture is finished professer gave some assignment.

Students I want u all to submit this next week.

Ok sir..

But geet n armaan will submit tomorrow only. Or else u both will be suspended warned sir n left the class.

In lunch they 4 went to canteen.

Samajte kya hain apne aap ko, bunk marna koi paap hain kya murmured geet angrily.

Aur nahi tho kya utna bada assignment ek din mein kaise complete kar sakte hain told amy.

Maan n ridzy laughed seeing their condition.

They both gave them an angry glare but laughed with them.

Maan n ridzy looked at them confused.

Awww my sweet cute maan will complete my assignment 😆😆 told geet.

Awww my sweet cute ridzy will complete my assingnment 😆😆 told amy.

They both looked at them n told NOOO WAY''.

They both made a baby face''..

Precap: 😆😆

Hii friends here is part 8. Hope u all liked it. As many are not liking this ff I wanna wind it up soon. Tell me ur opinion guys.

Plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.

Will be waiting for ur response.

Love

-jyothi.

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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~edited~
yippie me first...
wow dear.. what an update..loved it so much...
thier past was so funny..
pagal n gadha.. wow. ye maan & geet kabhi ek dusre ko naam se bhi pukarenge ya nahi..
aww poor geet.. why she is doing all this?
why she is leaving india forever?
but i know maan, amy n dadi will do something..
mama didn't react.poor baby maan...
aww geet said sorry wo bhi on her knees... me crying... sob sob..
please jaldi se sab theek kar do na...
please... ma making baby face...
hugs to u dear..
update soon...
Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loving it
want to know what has caused the MU b/w maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it.. awesome want to know wat happened yaar thanks for pm
Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow finaly sory ho gaya
bt why is she going yaar
i hope dadi ma kuch karengi
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n mindblowing update...

really loved it...

toh geet sabko chhodke humesha k liye jarahi hai...magar sahi mein ja payegi...


thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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