MG FF: kya mujhe pyaar hain pt 10 pg 112 3/8 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Update.
Enjoyed it.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update jyothi..
first of all iam soo soo sorry for late reply..kya kare exams ki wajah se busy hoon...upar se health..😭.ok k sorry mein toh apni baton mein lag gayi..
cmng to the update it was just awesome...superb...omg maaneet kitna ladthe hai upar se dono ko ek hi group mein dal diya..ab pata nahi indono ka kya hoga aur o group leader shilpa toh zaroor pagalhojayegi
and us sasha ki itni himmat ki o geet ke bhare mein aisi baat ki..😡accha huwa maan ne use mooh tod jawab diya..so maan is the child hood friend of nt and arjun..and mein ne kaha na in dono ki jagde ki wajah se taxi driver bhag jayega..dekha aisa hi huwa..and i just loved the way maan teased geet and her fitting replies to maan..continue soon...
love u loads dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED THEIR FIGHT AND THE TANTRUM FOR THE TAXI
SERVES BOTH OF THEM RIGHT TO WALK

SASHA GOT WHAT WAS COMING TO HER
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice FF..waiting for next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago


just 30 min dear... updating...
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Chapter 4:



note: plz add 'maneetmaneet' for pms. or do tell me i will add.



Both maan n geet are walking to their home. But maan made a call to someone. After walking for 15 min geet got tired n thought.


Arey yaar iske acha tho uss maan ke saath ek hi cab mein chali jaati.


Maan saw her thinking something n asked kya hua takh gayi? I told u before that we will go in the same cab. Par tum tho sunti hi nahi hain na.


Ha its my wish, tumko kyun told geet.


Hmm I dont have any problem. Ok ok continue walking told maan sarcastically.


I know what I am doing. Tum kyun mere piche aarahe ho? Asked geet.


Geet I told u before I am not following u told maan.


Whatever told geet n started walking.


After 5 min of walk geet saw a car n smiled. The car stopped infront of her n a man came out of the car.


Veerji shouted geet.


Geet maine kaha tha na, agar tumko kuch bhi problem ho tho muje phone kar dena asked yash.


Veerji I am sorry. Mera phone switch off ho gaya told geet making baby face.


Ok ok.. next time se be careful. Aao andar aaja told yash.


Thik hain veerji told geet n got into the car.


Maan tum bhi aaja I will drop u told yash.


Nahi bhai its ok I will go told maan.


Arey aise kaise jaa sakte ho, tumne hi muje phone kiya tha. Aaja told yash.


Nahi bhai maine dev ko phone kiya. He will be coming now told maan.


Lo aagaya dev told maan n smiled at him.


Maan thanku very much for calling me. Tum geet ke saath ho isiliye main itna khush hu told yash.


U dont worry bhai. Hum kitna jhagda karte hain. Phir bhi she is mu friend told maan.


Thanks dude told yash.


Bhai aap kitna thanks kehte hain muje told maan smiling.


Thik hain baba. Chalo bye told yash.


Bye.. told maan.


Just then dev too reached there.


Kya hua maan asked dev.


Kuch nahi mera bike panchar hua told maan.


Huh!! yaar tum dono kabhi bhi nahi sudar sakte na told dev.


Chodo yaar told maan.


Thik hain chalo told dev.


They both left for KM. After 30 min they reached KM.


Andar aaja told maan.


Nahi yaar muje pub jaana hain told dev n winked.


Maan rolled his eyes n told no one can change u.


hahaha muje pata hain told dev.


Jab tumko kisi se pyaar hoga na tab pata chalega told maan.


Jab hoga tab dekhte hain told dev.


Tum chalo bye.


Bye dude.


Maan entered KM n saw his princess priya is busy watching movie.


Oh hello main tumara bhai yaha khada hu aur tum movie dekh rahi ho told maan.


Bro I am watching movie. Plz dont disturb me told priya.


U n ur movie ufff told maan n left to his room.



Maan goes to his room n freshen up. He came down n saw priya still watching movie.


Priya mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain told maan.


Hmm bolo bhai told priya.


Will u switch off the TV for some time asked maan.


Bro u tell I am listening.


Just then nt came to KM n smiled at maan. Maan too gave her a warm smile n pointed towards priya.


Hii priya wished nt.


Hiii told priya still watching tv.


Suddenly she realised that someone came. She looked at nt questioningly.


Priya stood n asked aap??


hmmm aapne mujhe pehchana nahi na?? asked nt.


Ji nahi.. told priya.


Nt hugged priya n told arey choti I miss u very much.


Choti??


nt broke the hug n told ha choti.


Omg... nt di... how r u?? omg omg I cant believe this. Aap itne din ke baad told priya excitedly.


Ha main thik hu. Aur tum kaisi ho??


I am fine di. Aur aap yaha n aap itne din kaha the.


Hmm main aur maan ek hi office main kaam kar raha hu.


Acha?? bro phir aapne mujhe bataya kyun nahi pouted priya.


Oyyy... main kab se tumko baat karna chata hu aur tum seriously tv dekh rahi ho told maan.


Acha acha thik hain. Di aap baitiye na.


They all sat n talking with each other. Just them maan's dad n mom came there.


Nt got up n took their blessings.


God bless u beta. Aap??


uncle main nt, aapke EX-PA ke beti.


Arey nt beta aap. Kaise ho? Itne din ke baad. How is ur dad?


I am fine uncle. Main yaha job ke liye ayi thi. Papa is also fine.


Thats good beta. Aap log baat kijiye hum abhi ate hain.


Ok uncle.


Maan's dad left from there.


Di arjun bhai kaise hain? Usse baat karke kitne din ho gaya told priya.


Arjun is fine. Aur ha main kal usse baat karva deti hu. Thik hain?


Ok di.



They talked for some more time n had their dinner. Nt bid good bye n left from there.



In handa haveli:


All are in the dining hall having dinner.


Soo geet how was ur first day?? asked dad.


Aaj kuch nahi hua dad. Just finished all the formalities told geet.


Oh thats good told dad.


Waise veerji main tho aapko phone nahi kiye the na, tho aapko kaise pata ki main waha hu asked geet.


Geet, maan ne mujhe phone kiya told yash.


Maan ne?? asked geet shocked.


Ha maan ne phone karke bataya tha ki tumari bike mein kuch problem hain aur tum paidal aarahi ho told yash.


Isme meri galti kuch bhi nahi hain uss maan ne hi meri bike ki petrol katam kiya told geet.


Kuch bhi ho geet, maan ne mujhe phone kiya told yash.


Ha ha thik hain told geet n ate her dinner silently.


Mera dinner ho gaya mein jaa rahi hu. Good night told geet.


Good night gudiya told yash.



Geet left from there n went to her room. She laid down on the bed n thinking.


Maan ne veerji ko phone kiya. Jab phone karna hi tha tho mujse jagda kyun kiya. Yeh maan bhi na bilkul thede hain. Koi kaam seede nahi kar sakte. Muje help kiya tho thanku tho bolna chahiye na. Na baba na agar kuch ulta seeda bol diya tho. Kuch bhi ho thanku tho kehna hain. Main abi maan ko phone karti hu.


Geet took her mobile n dialled maan's nunber. She laughed seeing his name in her mobile.


She saved maan's name as MONKEY.


She dialled his number. On the other side maan who is lying on the bed suddenly got up by listening his phone ringing.


Maan took his phone n surprised to see the caller ID. He too saved her name as PAGAL.


He picked the phone n told


hello..


hello maan..


ha bolo geet.


Geet is shocked listening his pleasant voice. Everytime they fight n shout at each other but now its different.


wo.. wo.. thanku for informing veerji.


Ohh soo the great geet handa is saying thanku for me. Its strange.


Again geet came to her normal self n told main tho sirf thanku kehne ke liye phone ki thi,


ha ab mana kisne kiya. Ab maine kab kaha ki tum I LOVE U bolne ke liye phone ki told maan sarcastically.


Chii.. I love u aur tumko kabhi bhi nahi.


Ha thik hain. Ab tum thanku kehne ke liye phone ki ya phir jagda karne ke liye asked maan.


Main tho sirf thanku kehne ke liye phone ki but tum tho koi bhi baat seede seede nahi kar sakte ho na.


Ab maine kya kiya. Sab kuch tum hi start karti ho.


Ha ha main na tumko phone karke bohot badi galti ki.


Main na tumari phone uthke aur badi galti ki.


Tho phir bye. Good night.


Ab tum good night wish ki tho, wo good night kaise ho sakti hain.


Tum na chodo.. told geet n cut the call furiously.


Iss maan se baat karna hi bekar hain. Main tho pagal hu isko thanku kehne ke liye phone ki. Hmm good night babaji.


Geet dossed off. Here maan too after his talk with his pagal handa he too dossed off with a smile on his face.



Precap: weekend n maan in NGO. 😊

Maan lost his wallet n who got it?? 😕

whoever saw his wallet got a biggest shock in their life. 😲 😲



So guys here is part 3. hope u all like it.

Plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT..

silent readers plz hit like n do comment. 😃

Will be waiting for ur response. 😳


Love

-jyothi. 😉



Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Yuppiii me 1st me 1st

woww Luv the Update Jyo

awesome...superb

Luvd thank u part so much
Ufff ye dono Phon pe bhi fight karte hai 😆

Eagerly waiting for next
I am curious to know who got maan's wallet

continue soon...
Edited by Gcs-girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upadte
loved it
i think maan has geet's pic in his wallet😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg dont tell me that he has geet photo and that wallet is with geet
oh gosh ill be happy damn excited
love ya

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