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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: awesumsonia

thnk u for this update...

was really upset watching d last part of today's episode,...
but ur update brought a WIDE SMILE on my face...love u darling
Hamesha ki tarah...sneha ji...aur update was FANTABULOUS...
haaye haaye...i'm getting naughty :P

thanku for so sweet comments dear love u tooo...by the way i like people who are naughty...😉😆
and ji ko hatao call me only sneha...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Raj_preet

Wow sneha loved it it's something different...republic day and u take them to wagah border it's cool 👍🏼

after watching todays episode i am like 😡 i am trying to come out from that track
waiting for ur nxt one


thanku Meenu...😃They staying in Amritsar and visiting wagah border on republic day that to Air Force officers hain banta hai na visit...so made them go atleast in my SS😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bobby1810

Awesome. Really lovely brought back happiness to see our Rajpreet's romantic moments.

thanku dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sen_madhuban

thank you sneha dear...

in dese sad times...ur writings r d only respite...

ice cream sharing...so sweet...

i have to thank u Madhu for reading and liking it...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ankitaluv

Sneha yaar tum tho ab mahir hogayi ho FF's likhne mein...Loved it a lot..

Loved that you showed Republic day celebrations and Airbase as I am missing all those Airbase fun and masti ..
Rajbeer and Preeto white white matching (Chaddo stupid SSSP stylists ko and Jai ho Sneha Stylist ko ki finally got to see matching matching)
Kudos dear..Do come up with more as now a days episodes are very boring and depressing 😭
You made us smile and thanks for that

thanks Saina dear...😃i would suggest u also to try writing FF/SS when u get time...😉
😆 matching matching toh hoga na in my SS atleast...haha...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Really sorry for late update...i hope u all will like it forgive if any mistakes...do comment will wait...😃and if u liked it then click like button...😉

Part5

Day 5:

Dhillion' s home:

Dhruv ishu and simi come and staying for 2 days..

After having tiffin Beeji Bauji and Mama Mammi go to gurudwar...

Except Rajbeer Remaining all in the hall start discussing about tomorrow roka...Dhruv asks preeto abt where Rajbeer is...Preeto says mai abhi dekhti hun dhruv jiju goes frm there...

Rajbeer in his room:

He gets a call frm his dad as always after talking to his dad Rajbeer gets upsets..
Preeto comes to Rajbeer room...tum yaha ho sab tumhe neeche puch rahe hain..asks him to come down...
He refuses tum jao preeto mai baad mein aunga

Preeto: baad mein kyun abhi chalo na Rajbeer neeche sab kitna masti kar rahe hain

Rajbeer: shouts at Preeto maine kaha na mujhe abhi nahi ana hai plz tum jao yaha se

Preeto: Rajbeer tum itna chila kyun rahe ho...chodo tumse baat hi nahi karni hai mujhe
she gets angry and leaves frm there...

sunny and all chit chatting..dhruv asks kya hua preeto Rajbeer kaha hai..woh upar hain phone pe baat kar rahe hain thodi der mein ajayenge...

rajbeer feels he should say sorry to preeto as unnecessarily he took all anger on preeto so he comes down...

as Preeto sees rajbeer coming she asks sunny acha sunny ji aapko kaisi ladki chahiye...sunny feels happy when preeto asks him...preeto ji apne mujhe pucha toh bolna padega..

Rajbeer gets irritated he is not interested in the discussion so leaves frm there and goes upstairs to terrace...He sits in the sofa talks to himself sorry bolne gaya tha toh sunana hi nahi hai toh mein kya karun...

Sunny continues his bak bak talking abt what kind of girl he wants...
Preeto: sunny ji aapko aisi ladki jaldi miljayegi
Sunny:feels happy and says Preeto ji phir toh band baja bajega ji

Preeto sees that Rajbeer didn't come back so she also goes frm there and finds Rajbeer at terrace..she sits beside him and asks him baar baar itna gussa kyun hojathe ho..he doesn't reply(making cutee angry face)...
She gives a small kiss on his cheek and runs frm there by surprising Rajbeer...😉

In hall all are dancing to songs but simi jus sits seeing it...dhruv asks her to join but she refuses..
Sunny: sees Simi and asks her...arey simran ji aap bhi ayiye na...
Even bani asks simran...she still refuses...sunny pulls her hand so simi also joins with all..
meeta di drags preeto to dance while all dancing rajbeer also comes down smiling...dhruv asks him also to join...all have full masti...
Beeji bauji mama mammi come frm gurudwar...feel happy seeing all enjoying...

During lunch

All sit and rajbeer asks preeto to sit beside him...she goes and sits beside him..meeta di khana parosti hai for all of them...
Rajbeer: whispered to Preeto asking her to meet at night 9 in the terrace

Preeto: mai nahi arahi hun

Rajbeer: acha dekhta hun

Preeto: haan haan dekhlo

rajbeer holds Preeto' s hand down the table not allowing her to start eating...

Preeto: rajbeer kya kar rahe ho chodo mere haath

Rajbeer: Nahi chodunga kya karloge

Preeto: rajbeer plzz koi dekhlega...

Rajbeer: jab tak tum ha nahi bolte tab tak nahi chodunga(smiles)

All start eating...
Meeta: sees preeto not yet started eating so she asks preeto tu kuch kha kyun nahi hai..
Preeto: woh meeta di soch rahi hun kaha se shuru karu...
And she says haa to Rajbeer...he smiles and releases her hand...

Beeji says preeto..preeto halwa pasand hain na thodi aur dale le..
preeto replies ha beeji...

after lunch Rajbeer goes out to talk about flower decorations for tomm roka function..
Preeto also started in her luna to buy some puja related things...

At Pankaj Home:

Sunny getting ready...pankaj comes and asks kaha ja rahe ho ready hoke...
Sunny: pankaj bata kaise lag raha hun
Pankaj: acha toh hai lekin kaha ja raha hain aur yeh haath mein phool kiske liye...
Sunny: maine soch liye hai ki aaj Preeto ji ko propose karleta hun
Pankaj: gets worried and asks kya tu yeh kya bol raha hai
Sunny: Pankaj mujhe preeto ji na bahut ache lagte hain
Pankaj: sunny bhai tu mere baat sun aisa kuch mat kar beeji ko pata chalega toh mujhe chodenge nahi badi muskil se meeta aur meri shaadi ke liye manavaya hai...aur preeto woh toh tujhe chodegi nahi mar khayega tu woh sher singh preeto hain...
Sunny: arey pankaj tu itna darta kyun hai...maine decide karli hai mai aaj Preeto ji se apna pyaar izhaar karke hi rahunga...saying this he leaves..

Pankaj tries to stop but sunny doesn't listen..now they come into Dhillion' s house..Pankaj and sunny in the hall...pankaj tries to stop sunny again asking him not to do anything like that as this will put him in trouble...

meeta sees both discussion frm kitchen..and comes to them and asks yeh tum dono ke beech kya baate chal raha hai..both pankaj and sunny try to hide saying kuch nahi..Meeta says kuch toh hai...sunny escapes frm there...meeta then asks pankaj tu sach bol umbrella kuch toh chup rahe ho aur sunny ji phool pakade ke kyun ghum rahe hain...

Pankaj: meeta woh bass aise hi..he then whispers in her ears sunny preeto se pyaar karta hai..meeta di shockingly surprised kya...lekin preeto toh rajbeer ko pasand karti hai..Pankaj shocked says kyaa..? rajbeer se ..?

Meeta : Ha nahi mujhe pata nahi thik se lekin yeh janti hun ki unke beech kuch hai shayad...jo bhi ho pankaj tu sunny ji ko rok...preeto usse chodegi nahi aur beeji ko kuch pata chalega toh bahut gadbadd hojayegi...

Pankaj: ha meeta mai usse kisi bhi tarah rokta hun he goes frm there to upstairs where sunny is searching for preeto in all rooms...

Meeta : thinks to herself haye baba ji acha hai ki abh preeto ghar pe nahi..

Pankaj goes upstairs and says to Sunny that Preeto is not in home...
Sunny: Preeto ji ghar pe nahi...koi baat nahi yehi wait karta hun..
Pankaj: sunny tu mera baat kyun nahi samjhata..chal ghar..
Sunny: Pankaj yaar mujhe rok mat..tujhe toh khush hona chahiye..
Pankaj: decides to tell abt Preeto and Rajbeer so he says to Sunny that Preeto kisi aur ko pasand karti hain
Sunny: kisi aur se...? his smile fades...
Pankaj: ha kisi aur se abhi meeta keh rahi thi
Sunny: nahi yeh nahi hosakta...he gets doubt and asks kahi tu jhoot toh nahi bol raha hai..
Pankaj: mai kyun tujhe jhoot bolunga bhai..woh Rajbeer hain na uss se
Sunny: he gets upsets listening this and leaves frm there...

At Pankaj Home:

Sunny: khatam hogaya sab kuch..yeh fauji kaha se agaya beech mein..mai yaha preeto ji ka sapna dekh raha tha aur waha woh Fauji udda ke le gaya...
Pankaj comes and asks tu theek toh hain na sunny...
Sunny: chod yeh sabh baate...bura laga lekin jo hua so hua..kal tera roka hai mera bhai bahut maaza karna hai...
night 9:30 at terrace:

Preeto waiting for Rajbeer at the terrace at 9:30...
Rajbeer in his room was busy talking to jogi in phone he didn't notice that it was already 9:45...
Preeto: kabse wait kar rahi hun abh aur nahi...kal batati hun she gets angry and she was about to go he comes...
She asks him Time kitna hua..(making cute angry face)
Rajbeer: kyun tumne watch nahi dekha (with mischivieous smile)
Preeto: she makes a face
Rajbeer: looking at her face he says acha sorry sorry woh jogi se phone pe baat kar raha tha isliye thoda late hogaya...
Preeto: smiles...jogi ji aur jassi ji kal arahe hai na
Rajbeer: ha kal subah arahe hain..
He then takes her right hand and gives her small box saying this is for u
Preeto: mere liye...kya hai rajbeer..
Rajbeer: chota sa surprise..asks her to open...
Preeto: she opens the small box...chudiyaan...bahut sundar hain Rajbeer...
Rajbeer: Preeto mai chahta hun ki tum yeh kal pehno...
Preeto: she smiles..and says I have something for u too but will give u tomm...
Rajbeer: acha..intezaar karlunga waise bhi addaat jo hogaya hai...
Preeto: laughs..and says goodnight..
Rajbeer: by holding her hand and stopping her frm going asks her
suno kal jo tumhe bolna hai yaad hai na..
Preeto: says haa smiles and leaves frm there...

PS: next update day 6 Pankeeta Roka...and ha Rajpreet romance too will try my besttt...😉..will post it soon...😊
Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
rajpreet kiss...😍 😍 😍 😍

simmi-sunny dancing...

under the table romance..🤗 🤗 🤗

sunny getting 2 know d truth... 🥳 🥳 🥳

& ur promise of more rajpreet romance...👏 👏 👏


all in all a great package sneha...loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow. Lovely Sneha. I really like your SS. I like the way Rajpreeet holds hands and then ek dursa ko manana. You are one of the best writers on this forum. Looking forward to the next one. This is for you.👏👏👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow sneha nice one awww preeto kisses Rajbeer😍and sunny knows that preeto is in love with rajbeer gud one nd love Rajpreet conv
Today i read two SS both r excellent👍🏼 ...why cv's didn't do like this
Now i am waitinggg for Part ^6 for Rajpreet romance
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
very nice sneha !! very well wrappeh the simi/sunny matter !! and i love the way u re introduce jogi/jassi in the show (cvs ko honki yadh bi nayi ahi..)

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