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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: awesumsonia

arrey waah sneha...awesum...haaye haaye superb one yaar...

tooo goood

thanku sonia dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fehmida

very nice !! please next part !!

thanku for reading it...will come up with next part soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Take a bow Sneha dear👏
This part is best of all...Loved every line and the way story progressed is Quite cool..
Sunny's song selection also suited his character
RB's Jalan tho Uff mazaa aa raha tho padte huye
NA ko Goa bej diya- Thank God for that
Simran ko aise hi rehnediya and I am cool with it
And the best you brought all the old flavor back like Drishu, Jogisi ..
Superb..loved it ...waiting for your next one
Also, CV's chahe kuch bhi karle, Rajpreet ko hamare khwabon mein aur aap sab logon ki FF, SS mein bilkul judaa tho nahi kar sakte hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ankitaluv

Take a bow Sneha dear👏

This part is best of all...Loved every line and the way story progressed is Quite cool..
Sunny's song selection also suited his character
RB's Jalan tho Uff mazaa aa raha tho padte huye
NA ko Goa bej diya- Thank God for that
Simran ko aise hi rehnediya and I am cool with it
And the best you brought all the old flavor back like Drishu, Jogisi ..
Superb..loved it ...waiting for your next one
Also, CV's chahe kuch bhi karle, Rajpreet ko hamare khwabon mein aur aap sab logon ki FF, SS mein bilkul judaa tho nahi kar sakte hai

thanku so much Saina...😃
show mein NA said i have to attend parties lekin ghar mein hi thi...so as she said parties i sent her to goa...😆😆
and ya i cant seperate them in my SS...we have watched enough of seperation in the show becoz of Cvs...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
have used 2 songs few lines one song jab mein tumhare saath hoon frm jodi breaks and other song jeene de frm tere naal love hogaya...do read..comment and like...i jus hope u all will like it...if any grammatical errors then do forgive me...😊

Part 4

Day 4: Republic Day and Icecream Treat

6:30Am Preeto comes to Rajbeer room to wake him up..

Rajbeer still sleeping..

Preeto: keh rahe the office jana hai jaldi aur abhi tak sorahe hain..

She tries to wake him up calling Rajbeer Rajbeer..he still doesn't get up..yeh aise nahi uthenge..she finds his mobile on the table..she takes his mobile abh dekhti hun kaise nahi uthenge.. plays drums ringtone by placing the phone on his ears..noise was disturbing his sleep he jus wanted to stop the music he holds her hand tightly and as he opens his eyes sees its Preeto..

Rajbeer: yeh tumne kya kiya preeto

Preeto: she laughs saying maine kya kiya utho abhi office nahi jana hai kya..? aur chodo meri haat..

Rajbeer: he leaves her hand..oh ha jana hai jaldi time kitna hua

Preeto: its already 6:30

Rajbeer: ok..he gets down frm the bed and stands

Preeto: acha tum ready hojao main chai lekar athi hun

as she was about to leave..Rajbeer stops her with his hand around her wrist comes even more close to her giving hug from back and says ready rehna by 2..

Preeto: blushes and asks hum kaha ja rahe hain aaj

Rajbeer: republic day dekhne wagah border

Preeto: wagah border !! she turns around him woh toh bahut dur hain yaha se aur roka ka bahut saare kaam karni hai mujhe..

Rajbeer: all the work complete before 2...tum mere saath chal rahe ho Preeto..dhruv ishu simi jogi jassi sab arahe hain..

Preeto says ok ready rahungi and leaves the room asking him to get ready..

Rajbeer gets ready and comes down..Beeji asks him to have tiffin..he sonu and bani all at table..

Sonu: Rajbeer bhayya aaj humare school ki function mein gana ga rahi hun

Rajbeer: that's good sonu and asks kaunse gana..?

Sonu: vandematram..

Rajbeer: smiles and says all the besttt Sonu...ache se gana...

after tea and tiffin he leaves to Air Force Office...Sonu to school and Bani to college..

Preeto calls Ishu di and says that Beeji asked them to come home and stay till Meeta di Roka..Ishu di says ya sure Preeto..dhurv keh rahe the ki chuti lenge and Preeto also says that shez coming to visit wagah border along with Rajbeer..Ishu happy and says chalo phir milte hai waha sham ko..

At 2 Rajbeer comes back home from office..Rajpreet start to wagah border in car..both looked grttt..he wore white shirt and blue jeans..she wore white chudidar...As they reach half way they find more people in the crowd and some vans and cars stopped..Preeto asks yaha pe itna bheed kyun dikh raha hai..she then notices a truck where some Punjabi uncles giving lassi to all the people passing by the road..she asks Rajbeer to stop the car..she gets down and goes near the truck to get glass of lassi..Rajbeer standing near the car..she comes to him and says Rajbeer uncle ji sabko free mein lassi de rahe hain bahut tasty hai..ruko tumhare liye bhi lekar athi hun..he says not to mujhe nahi chahiye preeto tum le lo...chalo chodo mai aur ek glass leti hun apne liye..he smiles and stops her asking her to bring lassi for him too..she smiles and gets it...and then both start from there after having sweet lassi...

Saanson mein hai
Sansani si kyun saath tere
Lage ye sheher pyara Kyun saath tere..
Jab main tumhare Saath hun
Jannat sa lagne lage jahan
Sajde karta kyun aasmaan
Jab main tumhare Saath hun
By 3:30 Dhrishu simi reached wagah border...and Jogi Jassi who joined them there by 3:45..all waiting for Rajpreet...

Rajbeer and Preeto reach by 4 ..all greet each other and go inside to watch the republic day celebrations..As they belong to Air force they were seated in the VIP' s row which is very close to the place where the Parade happens...Place is all crowded all indians waiting for the flag ceremony to start...ceremony starts with Parade by Border security Force of india and ends with jana gana mana..Rajpreet..dhrishu..simi..jogi and jassi all feel grttt watching it..they come out after ceremony ends..Jogi jassi leave saying bye..Preeto asks them to come home tomm...and Dhrishu also left asking Rajpreet to start...

After all left Preeto jus wanted to have icecream and asks Rajbeer Icecream khate hain na...he says ok lekin yaha nahi Preeto..will take you to one place Chocolate room where shall get the best icecream so lets go...

Meanwhile Dhruv driving the car asks Ishu and Simi how abt we having icecream..Simi says that's guddd bhai..

Ishu: ha dhruv chalte hain..

Dhruv smiles says we are almost near to chocolate room..Rajbeer mai aur Jogi bahut baar achuke hain jab bhi icecream khane ka mann karta tha toh yehi pe athe the...

Rajbeer and Preeto also reach the place...after parking the car..they walk inside holding hands and ask the waiter for a table...waiter shows them the table which is at one corner of the hall both sit facing each other and then waiter asks for the order..Rajbeer orders vanilla+chocolate 2 scoops icecream..Preeto orders 2 scoops of chocolate icecream..

Dhruv Ishu and Simi are already in the chocolate room they reached before and are in the other corner of the hall all having icecream...they didn't notice Rajpreet yet...

Rajbeer: Preeto icecream ane mein thoda time lagjayega isse pehle mujhe kuch dena tha..i have brought something for u...

Preeto: with surprise look on her face asks whats it rajbeer

Rajbeer: tumhare haath agge karo batata hun...

As she gives her hand...he places small box on her hand saying a gift for u..asking her to open..

Preeto: smiles and opens the box..It's the gold pendant...she says its so beautiful Rajbeer ..

Rajbeer: smiles..asks her...Preeto I want u to wear this pendant on Meeta di' s Roka..

Preeto: Blushes

Both stare at each other with smiles on their face...their eyes speak how much they love each other..

Waiter then brings the icecreams ordered and places them in their table..Rajbeer and Preto start having icecream...

Simi almost had icecream as she gets a call from friend she goes out to talk on phone..as she was busy talking in the phone while walking out she didn't notice Rajpreet in the chocolate room...

Ishu and Dhruv still at the table talking to eachother and while talking Ishu suddenly notices Preeto..and says to dhruv...dhruv also sees and says Rajbeer aur Preeto yaha pe..Ishu then says Dhruv tumhe nahi lagta inke beech abh sabh kuch thik hogaya hai..Dhruv smiles and says I jus hope so Ishu..Dhruv then says chalo milte hain unse...Ishu stops him nahi dhruv dono ko disturb nahi karte...he says ok they pay the bill and both leave..Simi standing out still talking in phone who sees dhruv ishu coming out..she says to her friend will call u later after reaching home and ends the call...Dhrishu and Simi start to their home..

Preeto: having icecream says to Rajbeer yaha ka icecream kitna yummy hai..mmm too delicious rajbeer..

Rajbeer: laughs and says Preeto ur eating icecream jus like a kid...there is some on your lips..

Preeto: tries to wipe and asks him abh thik hai Rajbeer

Rajbeer: smiles and says nahi...he wipes the icecream on her lips with his hand...

Preeto: feels shy and blushes..

Rajbeer: he then feeds a spoonful of his icecream to Preeto...

Preeto: haves it..and smiles...

Jeene de..Iss dil ko jeene de

Jeene de har pal ko jeene de

Yeh pyara sa lamha jeene de

Jeene de..Didaar ko jeene de

Jeene de iss pyar mein jeene de

Jeene de jeene de jeene de mujhe

Both after having icecream start back to home...

At Dhillion' s home: All had dinner...

Beeji is worried abhi tak Rajbeer preeto ghar nahi pahunche...waiting for them...

Rajpreet reach home by 10pm...Beeji asks them to have dinner...they say that we already had out..he says goodnight to beeji and goes back to his room...

Beeji : asks Preeto kaisa raha aaj ka din...

Preeto: smiling says acha tha beeji...

Beeji: smiles back and says chal so ja thak gayi hogi na

Preeto: says goodnight to beeji and goes back to her room..

PS: @All those who don't know abt wagah border...its the border between India(Amritsar) and Pakistan(Lahore)..its really awesome place...do visit if at all u go to Amritsar..and as Dhillion' s home in the show is near to golden temple Amritsar it takes around 2hrs frm golden temple to wagah border...

will wait for ur comments...😃

Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
thnk u for this update...
was really upset watching d last part of today's episode,...
but ur update brought a WIDE SMILE on my face...love u darling
Hamesha ki tarah...sneha ji...aur update was FANTABULOUS...
haaye haaye...i'm getting naughty :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Wow sneha loved it it's something different...republic day and u take them to wagah border it's cool 👍🏼
after watching todays episode i am like 😡 i am trying to come out from that track
waiting for ur nxt one


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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Awesome. Really lovely brought back happiness to see our Rajpreet's romantic moments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you sneha dear...

in dese sad times...ur writings r d only respite...

ice cream sharing...so sweet...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sneha yaar tum tho ab mahir hogayi ho FF's likhne mein...Loved it a lot..

Loved that you showed Republic day celebrations and Airbase as I am missing all those Airbase fun and masti ..
Rajbeer and Preeto white white matching (Chaddo stupid SSSP stylists ko and Jai ho Sneha Stylist ko ki finally got to see matching matching)
Kudos dear..Do come up with more as now a days episodes are very boring and depressing 😭
You made us smile and thanks for that

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