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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Sneha ur ff is sooo coool ... loved the R and P scenes...
done it sooo well... WELL DONE!!!

and the songs you've put are brilliant ... and Rajpreet Moments!!
atleast simran understood ... in the serial she's getting annoying too...
Edited by xxAqeelahxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful.
nice to read,
May be u should direct the serial ,
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: xxAqeelahxx

Sneha ur ff is sooo coool ... loved the R and P scenes...
done it sooo well... WELL DONE!!!

and the songs you've put are brilliant ... and Rajpreet Moments!!
atleast simran understood ... in the serial she's getting annoying too...

thanku for reading Aqeelah...😃
serial mein Cvs have spoiled simi' s sweetness so i made Simi understanding and sweet in my SS atleast...😃😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Angleicq

wonderful.

nice to read,
May be u should direct the serial ,

thanku very much dear...😃dont u think we all here can be gudd directors than the present directors of the show hum sab direct karte toh abh tak show would have reached popular list...imagine channel would be shocked seeing high trps...😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
CV's have wrecked my nerves and Sneha your SS calmed my nerves ..
Loved the whole Pankeeta's ROKA celebration going on with cute Rajpreet cute convos. Thank God Sunny ka pehle se pata chal gaya hai so no more haddi 🥳
Dining table scene haye cute...😍
Loved it dear ...Wish CV's saw your version first we would have spared with all the EA
Can't wait for Pankeeta's Rokaand RP scenes
overall Awesome SS 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ankitaluv

CV's have wrecked my nerves and Sneha your SS calmed my nerves ..

Loved the whole Pankeeta's ROKA celebration going on with cute Rajpreet cute convos. Thank God Sunny ka pehle se pata chal gaya hai so no more haddi 🥳
Dining table scene haye cute...😍
Loved it dear ...Wish CV's saw your version first we would have spared with all the EA
Can't wait for Pankeeta's Rokaand RP scenes
overall Awesome SS 👏

thanku dear...😃i jus started this SS becoz in show Cvs are more towards showing sad and evil things...so made my SS happy one...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Friends...😃 Do Read Day6 and Comment...😃will wait for your comments and if u have liked it click the like button...😉...I Hope u all will like it...forgive if any mistakes...Day6 i have jus tried to add more Rajpreet scenes samjho yeh maha eps hai...😆😃

Part6

Day6: Pankeeta Roka Day

Morning was too beautiful..with her eyes partially open Preeto smiled to herself..then she gets down from the bed turned to see herself in the mirror still smiling and thinking about Rajbeer...

Anchal main hain khwaab tumhare
Anchal par hai naam tumhara
Anchal main hi dil ki dhadkan
Dhadkan main hai pyar tumhara

Meeta di Comes to room saying tujhe abh subah huyi Preeto..ja beeji bula rahi hai...
Preeto: ha ja rahi hoon brush toh karne de...
Meeta di: acha sun maine aaj na gobi ke parathe banayi hai..
Preeto: gobi ke paarathe...mai abhi jati hun jaldi...
Preeto after taking shower and getting ready goes down...asks beeji apne mujhe bulaya Beeji...
Beeji: ha tujhse kuch baat karni thi Preeto..woh Rajbeer ka diya hua chunni tu aaj pehen rahi hai na..
Preeto: smiles and says ha beeji..
Beeji feels happy and says mein bahut khush hun Preeto...
Meanwhile Ishu comes in the kitchen asks kya baate chal rahi hai..
Beeji:Ishu bas Meeta aur Pankaj ke baare mein...
Ishu: aaj ka din ke liye meeta di ko kabse intezaar tha na beeji..mein bahut khush hun akhir unko apna sapno ka rajkumar milgaya..
Preeto: smiling says haan Ishu di..
Beeji also smiles and 3 of them hugg..
Preeto then says mujhe abh bahut bhuk lag rahi hai kaha hain gobi ke paraathe...
Beeji: smiles and says ja table pe rakhi hai...
After having Tiffin...Preeto thinks to give pathani to Rajbeer that she stitched for him...

Rajbeer at his room:
he sitting in the bed and putting laptop in his lap was going through all the pics of jogi-jassi shaadi and dhruv-ishu shaadi...specially when preeto' s pic he starts gazing at it by smiling...
Preeto comes in asking kya kar rahe ho Rajbeer..
Rajbeer: nothing jus was seeing all the photos
Preeto: photos...i want to see Rajbeer show me also...
she sits besides him...eagerness to see all the photos...
when her photo comes she says acha lag rahi hun na mein...
Rajbeer: looking at the photo..unable to take off his eyes amazed by her beauty...says ha bahut ache lag rahi ho...lekin abh thodi moti hogayi ho kha khake...😆
Preeto:she starts punching him at his shoulders...and shouting at him iska matlab mein abh achi nahi dikh rahi hun haan..aur mujhe tum moti keh rahi ho...
Rajbeer:Preeto kya kar rahe ho koi ajayega...laughing says mai toh bas jo sach hai wahi kaha..
he then tries to stop her frm punching by holding her one hand and placing his other hand on her lips stopping her frm shouting...
both start looking into each other eyes for a minute...

sschi sschi teri nazrein ek darpan...
dede mann ki yeh khabrein ek pal chin..
adharon ne kuch na kaha re...naino ne keh diya...
tune toh pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiye...more piya..
tune bhi pal bhar mein chori kiya re jiya...mora jiya..

Rajbeer: smiles and asks tumhe kuch chahiye tha mera matlab tum yaha...
Preeto: ha mai yaha tumhe yeh pathani dene ayi thi...she gives him the red color pathani and asks him to wear in the evening Roka Function...
Rajbeer: smiles..and says haa...
and as she leaves getting down frm the bed...he stops her by asking...Preeto tum aaj mere diye huye chunni pehen rahi ho na...intezaar karunga aaj shaam ke liye...
Preeto: surprised and asks him tumhe kaise pata chala ki mein aaj woh chunni pehen rahi hun...
Rajbeer: smiles...bass aise hi pata chal jata hai tumhari dil ki baat..agar tum na kaho phir bhi...
Preeto: smiles and leaves frm there...

Rajbeer then gets a call frm the decoration person whoz waiting out of the dhillion' s home...he says them that hez cuming down and that they can start the work now...

Preeto in her room:
Preeto opens the cupboard for the chunni and bangles...she wears the bangles and holds the chunni in her hand starts dancing with full of happiness waiting for the moment to say 3 magical words to Rajbeer in the evening...

Chhann chhann
Chhanan chhan chhann chhann
Mann gaye kyon
Sann sann..hawa sann sann sann
Lahraye kyon

Kangan
Khanan khann khann khann
Kyon khanke re
O jhanjhar
Jhanan jhan jhan jhan
Kyon jhanke re

Jhankare tere mere pyar ki hai
Dhun yeh mohabbat ke ikraar ki hai

Chhann chhann
Chhanan chhan chhann chhann
Mann gaye kyon...

In The Hall:
Rajbeer and Dhruv make sure that decoration work is done properly...meanwhile Pankaj comes to dhillion' s house asking Rajbeer and Dhruv if they need any help...they both say that they are doing it everything...Beeji also joins and says ha pankaj yaha ka kaam toh sabkuch ache se chal raha hai u jus come in the evening by 6:30 along with sunny...Pankaj smiles says ok beeji...dhruv says Pankaj tu toh kuch jyada hi sharmaa raha hai...he smiles and leaves by saying shaam ko milte hain Dhruv and Rajbeer...
Bani..Simran and Sonu are sitting in a sofa chit chatting...

In The Kitchen:
Ishu helping beeji and Meeta di in cooking...
Meeta: Ishu tu yaha ka kaam sambhal beeji ke saath...mein jake apni baal thik se straightening karvati hun Preeto se aur Facial bhi toh karni hai na...
Ishu: haa meeta di aap jayeyi...

Meeta di goes upstairs and takes Preeto' s help...
at 12:30 jogi and jassi come...all in the hall start greeting each other...Jogi then says kya baat hai ghar bilkul chamak raha hai..
Rajbeer: Jogi jus wait pura decoration hone de aur bhi chamke ga ghar...
Jassi asks Bani about where Meeta di is...
Bani: Meeta di uper kamre mein hain..
Jassi..Bani..Simran..Sonu go upstairs...all gals start having masti talking about dresses to makeup and everything...

Meanwhile by 1:00 almost all the decoration work was completed...house looked beautiful with red and orange combination curtains...lights added extra attraction...only thing left was flower decoration which also will be done by evening 5:30 as the Roka ceremony of Pankeeta starts at 7:30...
after cooking was completed...Beeji calls everyone for lunch...so all together have lunch...

At 4pm Flower decoration people come and start the work...by 5:30 work was almost completed...meanwhile dhruv jogi and Rajbeer get ready and come down...
Rajbeer wore red color Pathani that Preeto gave him to wear he was looking damn handsomee...
Jogi dhruv Papaji Mamaji sitting in sofas talking about the yet to be started Roka ceremony...
and Rajbeer saying Decoration people to do it fast the left over work asking them to complete it by 6:00...

By 6:00 Preeto gets ready for the first time she got ready so fast ...and decides to come down..
Preeto wore green anarkali chudidar 3/4th sleeves dress with red banaras border stitched by beeji matching the red chunni that is given by Rajbeer and also wore the bangles given by him...and pair of red earrings...
wearing high heels which she took from Bani...Preeto Comes down through stairs...Rajbeer whoz at the hall busy talking to decorator looks at her...as he sees her he feels very very happy as she wore the red chunni...he kept on looking mesmerized by her beauty...
she looked very pretty he couldnt take off his eyes...
he signals her for meeting in the terrace while she was getting down the stairs..she nods her head with smile saying yes..

Kehne ko Jashn-e-bahara hai..
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai..
Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein..
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein...

Meanwhile Papaji also sees Preeto and calls her...Preeto goes to papaji where mama ji dhruv and jogi were also there...
Jogi: says Preeto ji aaj aap bade sundar lag rahe hain...aur Jassi ji kaha hain..
Preeto: thanku jogi ji...thoda intezaar kijiye apki jassi ji bhi ajayenge...woh uper meeta di ki saath hain..
Papaji says to Preeto: Meeta ko kehna ki jaldi ready hojaye...
Preeto: Papaji aap bilkul fikr mat kijiye aaj Meeta di bilkul dulhan jaisi dikhegi...
she then leaves frm there saying mein jati hun meeta di ki paas...
she goes to terrace where Rajbeer is waiting for her...as she goes near him he smiles looking at her...
Preeto: Rajbeer aise kyun dekh rahi ho...raising her eyebrows slightly and smiling she asks kaisi lag rahi hoon...
Rajbeer: he gives mischivieous smile and says ha thik thak ho...
Preeto: she hits him at chest with her hand...
Rajbeer: he holds her hand and grabs her close to him with a wink...and says sach bolun getting even more close to her he whispered in ears very beautiful Preeto...
both then look into each other eyes out of shyness she turns away trying to escape from his gaze...
he turns her towards him...his hands on her shoulders...

mujhe haq hai tujhko jee bharke main dekhoon
mujhe haq hai bas yunhi dekhta jaaoon
mujhe haq hai
piyaa piyaa piyaa piyaa bole meraa jiyaa

her long untied hair falls upon her eyes with a gaze of wind...he comes close to her moves her hair behind her left ear...she looks somewhere down to his shirt blushing too shy to look into his eyes...he then raises her chin making her look into his eyes...and starts moving his hand across her face...as his fingers moves on her face she closes her eyes hugs him tightly and says i love u Rajbeer...he says i love u too preeto...
now both facing each other...
Preeto: looking into his eyes she says i want to be yours forever Rajbeer...

Ye Zindagi Aapki Hi Amaanat Rahegi
Dil Mein Sada Aapki Hi Mohabbat Rahegi
In Saanson Ko Aapki Hi Zaroorat Rahegi

Rajbeer feels happy...places both his hands on her cheeks...looking into her eyes coming even more close..she was breathing heavily..he kissed her lips...was the beautiful moment...

Jeene de..Iss dil ko jeene de
Jeene de har pal ko jeene de
Yeh pyara sa lamha jeene de
Jeene de iss pyar mein jeene de

after breaking frm the moment...his hands still on her cheeks..he cups her face and says tumhe pake mein bahut khush hun Preeto...aaj ka din mein kabhi nahi bhul sakta...

Jab main tumhare sath hun
Jannat sa lagta hai jahaan

Sajde karta hai aasmaan
Jab main tumhare sath hun

Saanson mein geeton ka ho gumaan
Jo main tumhaare saath hun

Meanwhile In the Hall:
Mammi ji comes down after getting ready and brings jassi bani sonu who are in meeta di' s room...and yeh dhola wala kaha hai...she finds them in the hall sitting..arey tum log kyun nahi baja rahi ho dhol...shuru karo Dhol bajao...jassi Bani Sonu start dancing...Mammi ji calls Jogi and Dhruv also...while all were dancing beeji bauji Mamma ji sit and watch...
Beeji calls Bani and asks her Preeto kahi nahi dikh rahi hai..kaha hai woh...
Bani: pata nahi Beeji meeta di ki room mein bhi nahi hain...
Beeji: ja bani dekh kaha hai woh aur usse bol neeche ane ke liye...
people start cuming...beeji and bauji greet all of them asking them to sit...

Bani searches Preeto she doesnt find in the rooms...she then almost reaches terrace calling preeto di she near the stairs...
Preeto: as she hears Bani' s voice...bani yaha..
Rajbeer mein ja rahi hoon...tum bhi ajana...
she leaves and goes to Bani...
Bani: arey Preeto di aap yaha ho beeji bula rahe hain
Preeto: tu chal mein meeta di ke paas jake aathi hoon
Bani: ok Preeto di
meanwhile Rajbeer also gets a call frm dhruv...
Dhruv: Rajbeer tu kaha rehgaya...kahi nahi dikh raha hai...
Rajbeer: ha araha hun neeche tu rakh...

Pankaj and Sunny come to Dhillion' s house...and the roka ceremony is going to start in sometime...

Meeta di in room is getting ready simi and ishu are helping her...
Preeto goes seeing Meeta di..she says Haaye haaye Meeta di aaj aap bade sundar dikh rahe ho..
Ishu: ha preeto bas kisi ka nazar na lage humari meeta di ko...
Simi did notice the chunni that Preeto wore it does make her bit sad but then keeping aside she says preeto ur looking grtt..
Preeto says thanku simran ji...Meeta listens this and says aaj mera roka hai mujhe bhi toh tareef karo...all laugh...
Meeta di was looking gorgeous in orange color lehenga...
Beeji goes and seeing Meeta di feels happy...says jaldi karo neeche sab wait kar rahe hain...they bring Meeta di down...make Pankaj and Meeta sit together...start the roka ceremony...first Pankaj puts the ring and then Meeta...
all feel happy and start clapping...Rajbeer standing one side along with dhruv and Preeto in the other side...even in everybody' s presence their eyes were talking to each other...Dhruv sees this and whispered to Rajbeer tu jitna bhi chahe mujhse kuch chupa nahi sakta Rajbeer...
Rajbeer: tu yeh kya keh raha hai dhruv...
Dhruv: tere aur preeto ke baare mein baat kar raha hun...
Rajbeer: by scratching his head he says tujhe kaise pata chala...
Dhruv: he smiles and says tum dono ko dekhte hi pata chal jata hai...
Rajbeer smiles and dhruv could see the way Rajbeer was blushing...

Pankeeta Roka ceremony went well all happyily enjoyed the function...had dinner...

Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww dat was lovely! I needed dat after all da fustration dat is portrayed in da show..why couldnt pankeeta roka happen lyk dis..update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haye sneha...only ur beautiful fantasies can help us survive in dis era of EA...

u still have positivity left 2 spin out so beautifully such a sugary sweet roka scene...wth song...dance...& kiss...👏 👏...

my OS yesterday prooved...dat i have lost all hope...

but love ur writing...please continue & give us some respite...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It is really awesome. I love the scenes between our Rajpreet. It is very romantic. This is what we need. Thank you so much.👍🏌👏

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