SS Rajpreet: Tu Jaane Naa-Updt pt33 pg49 Do Read - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fehmida

very nice and so romantic 👏

i hope CV could be inspired by u !
please write next part !!

thanku so much fehmida...will update next part soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bobby1810

Lovely FF/SS Sneha. It seems so realistic. Let us hope Cvs get some inspiration from this. Well done. Look forward to the next one.

thanku dear...😃and jus want to ask u why dont u also come up with FF/SS...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊 really good ... liked it a lot . ... hoping SKA gets to know the truth and also looking forward to more rajpreet moments in the coming week
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti.r

😊really good ... liked it a lot . ... hoping SKA gets to know the truth and also looking forward to more rajpreet moments in the coming week


thanku dear... 😃
show mein pata nahi kab cvs are going to make ska know truth already waited so long they are jus dragging it..
hehe see thats why in ss day2 mein hi i made ska knowing truth...😆 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SKA always has misunderstandings ... the day she understands something correctly I have doubts if she is unwell 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Day3 Continue Part:
I forgot to post this part yest..so posting today...😊😆
i have used 2 songs vaarijava frm movie tere naal love hogaya(new movie) and sunlo zara frm Ekk Deewana Tha...😃
Do Read and Comment...if u liked it then press Like...😃

NA House:

Simran still bit off and unable to come out of sadness...she gets a call frm NA (NA is enjoying in goa with her friends for 10 days..)

Simran: lifts and talks to her mom..

NA: kaise ho Simi

Simi: ha mom mai thik hun aap kaise ho

NA: does sense something wrong frm simi' s voice so she asks is everything alright between Rajbeer and u

Simi: yaa mom..ignores to talk about it by asking mom howz ur vacation ur having grtt time right..

NA: yaa simi a lot..u should have joined me too..next time we shall plan..
Simi: ok mom jus enjoy ur vacation bye

Simi then gets call frm Rajbeer..
Ha Rajbeer bolo

Rajbeer: Simi hope ur ok now

Simi: ya Rajbeer im 5n

Rajbeer asks to come to Preeto home...Simi at first refuses but Rajbeer convinces her
u will feel better Simi..Dhruv and Ishu are also coming now...come along with them...

Simi: says okkk

Meanwhile Dhruv and Ishu getting ready to go to Dhillion' s house

Ishu: asks Dhruv simi bhi humare saath chal rahi hain na..

Dhruv: ha ishu hum sab milke chalte hain..aur Jogi and Jassi bhi..

Ishu: smiles and feels happy that even jogi and jassi joining them..

Dhruv then goes to simi room...Simi r u ready..

Simi: Ha Bhai im ready

Dhruv also finds something wrong and asks kya hua Simi u look bit off..ishu also said that u didn't eat anything yest night..

Simi: nothing bhai was jus tired..now im ok..

Dhruv: ok then chalo lets go..

Dhruv Ishu and Simi start to Dhillion' s House in between Jogi and Jassi also join..

Pankaj Home:

Pankaj is waiting for Sunny thinking abhi tak toh ajane chahiye tha..call bhi nahi kiya pahuncha ki nahi...

Bell rings lagta hai sunny agaya he feels very happy goes and opens the door

Its Sunny( who is very funny..) he comes in...

Pankaj and Sunny hug and greet each other with big smiles on their face...

Sunny: Dekh mai agaya mere yaar teri shaadi toh dhoom dhaam se hoga..

Pankaj: acha hua tu agaya mera bhai...

Sunny: hez all excited and asks Pankaj chal bata kab milva raha hai bhabi se mujhe abhi dekhna hai..

Pankaj: smiles and says abhi chalte hain..tu pehle fresh up hoja..
Sunny: he says okkk

Dhillion' s home:

Everyone Is busy with their works...

Meeta di is cooking and bani is helping her..Beeji and Papaji in room making a list of people to invite them all to Roka

Mama Mammi went out to meet some of their relatives and will return tonight...sonu studying in the hall...Preeto busy stitching clothes...Rajbeer busy with phone talking to decorations people..
After Phone call Rajbeer goes near Preeto...

Rajbeer: Preeto kya kar rahe ho

Preeto: yeh Sonu ke liye dress

Rajbeer: acha...tumne mujhe yeh bataya nahi ki aaj tumne saree kyun pehna..

Preeto: Blushes..waise hi

Rajbeer: he then sits in the chair (right side of the sewing machine)..and by leaning towards her says acha waise hi yeh kyun nahi batate ki mere liye..

Preeto: haaa..meri matlab nahi woh..she blushes..

Both smile look into each other eyes..

Main waari jaavan
Saatho ki hoya ve kasoor
Main waari jaavan
Dil to ye hoya majboor
Main waari javaan
Chhu liya tune lab se aankhon ko
Mannatein poori tumse hi
Tu mile jahaan mera jahaan hai wahaan
Raunake saari tumse hi
Piya o re piya piya re piya re piya

Dhruv Ishu Jogi jassi simi come to dhillion' s home all greet each other..Simi behaves normal..Though Rajbeer knows that shez still sad..

Beeji and Papaji feel very happy..

Beeji: acha hua tum sab agaya..

Meanwhile Pankaj and Sunny also come..Pankaj introduces sunny to everyone...they all greet each other...says sasriyakaal to beeji papaji..and hello to bani sonu ishu dhruv simi..

Sunny to Meeta di: bhabi aap bahut pyaari ho..

Meeta di: Smiles

Sunny to Preeto: Aap bahut khubsoorat ho Preeto ji..both shake hands..

She smiles...sunny (starts flirting)says sach kehti hun preeto ji aap jaisi ladki ke liye din main bhi sapne dekhte hain log..

Everyone smiles...and Rajbeer face turns redd he didn't like the way sunny was flirting with preeto before him...

Sunny to Rajbeer: After pankaj says its Rajbeer..Sunny shakes hand...Beeji then says Rajbeer humara beta jaisa hai...

Sunny makes fun comment looking at rajbeer dikhne mein ghar ka bodyguard jaise hain..and then says mazak kar raha tha ji...

All start laughinggg even preeto laughs...Beeji then says Fauji hai sunny puttar..
Sunny says hello to jogi and jassi..and then says aap sabko milke bahut khushi huyi..

Beeji : says lets all have lunch..

All have lunch and after lunch Beeji Papaji kehte hain tum sab log masti karo..

So all start chit chatting in hall..Sunny says Shaadi ka ghar hai chalo sab milke kuch khelte hain...Meeta di says chalo sab antakshari khelte hain..sunny says bottle table pe ghumayenge woh jiske taraf jake rukega usse ek song dedicate karni hai kisiko bhi kar sakti ho ji..Preeto says yeh bahut acha hai..all start playing...when sunny turn came he dedicates song to Preeto...pehla turn ishu who dedicates song to dhruv...next turn sunny ka..sunny dedicates to preeto saying mein gana bhabi ki behen Preeto ji ko aur yaha sabko dedicate karta hun...
Sunny ka song: Dil da mamla hai dilbar hone na sone hai is dil par khalbali dil ke andar oh mast mast kalandar mast mast mast kalandar


Rajbeer gets angry when sunny took Preeto' s name and in between the song he says to jogi who sat beside him mujhe kuch kaam hai and leaves..

Preeto did realize something wrong woh bhi bahana banati hi ishu di mujhe market jani hai..as she was about to get up and go sunny interrupts arey preeto ji aap kaha ja rahe hain kuch kaam hai toh baatayi hum kardenge

Preeto: koi baat nahi sunny ji aap sab kheliye
By the time she goes out Rajbeer already left..she then calls him..he lifts call..

Preeto: asks Rajbeer aap kaha chale gaye
mujhe market jana tha toh socha saath main chalte hain...

Rajbeer(he driving car): preeto mein thoda busy hun..

Preeto: bas thodi der ke liye chalte hain na milke

Rajbeer: preeto tum kisi aur ke saath chalijao mujhe nahi hoga..

Preeto: ok sunny ji puch rahe the unke saath chalijati hun..

Rajbeer: koi zaarrurat nahi sunny ke saath jana...tum wahi ruko main abhi aata hun...

Preeto: rehne dijiye aap busy hain na

Rajbeer: maine kaha na mai araha hun abhi...he then cuts the phone

Preeto: smiles...pagal hain bilkul...

Rajbeer returns back and picks her up..he drives car but doesn't speak anything..

Preeto: asks Rajbeer gussa ho...mm Sunny ji ke wajeh se

Rajbeer: uss joker ka naam hi mat lo khud ko Mika samajhrakha hai aur usse tum dur hi raho

Preeto: laughs...Rajbeer itna gussa..

Rajbeer: ha bahut gussa hun lekin pata hai mera dil ki dhadkan kya keh raha hai ?
Preeto: acha kya

Rajbeer: smiles and says to her I love u I love u

Sunlo zara..
Kehta hai mann
Tumse yeh dhadkan dhadkan
Tu meri hai meri hai

Preeto: Blushes..☺️

Jaane yeh kya jaado hai
Kya yeh samha harsuu hai
Tumse nazar jo mili hai
Chandini din mein khili hai

They reach the market...Preeto does shopping asusual bargaining with shopkeepers..and Rajbeer holding bags..and then as they were about to go Preeto finds Pani puri and asks Rajbeer chalo Panipuri khate hain..he says yaha no plz its not hygienic preeto..kuch nahi hoga ek baar khake dekho chodoge nahi...

Both reach home...Ishu sees and asks Preeto tum Rajbeer ke saath gaye the..

preeto: woh ishu di raaste mein mil gaye the yehi ghar ke paas...

All have Dinner and go to sleep..😊

Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yahooo...i am first 2 comment...

u introduced sunny...great...now land him up wth simmi na plzzz...

loved d jealousy part...rb's dialogues r just superrr cute...

& haye...ILU song...on a long drive...😍

first cvs & den u...aaj to rb ke hi sapne ayenge...😉

shoppng & panipuri...can imagine rajpreet...


continue soon...👏 👏 👏

Edited by sen_madhuban - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Awesome. Love all your dialogues. So well written. Rajbeer and Preeto talk wonderful. Keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
well done...i liked it much.
waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Awesome sneha you dawn very well 👍🏼
Love Rajbeer jealous just imagine his face oh he looks damn cute😍
Part 3 cont is very good yar ...waiting for nxt one

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