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Posted: 13 years ago

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sneha when is the next part coming? Eagerly waiting

mostly tomm dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part14
Day18:

Its the day Of Meeta and Pankaj wedding...
Meeta in her room getting ready...sisters were along with Meeta helping
her out..Meeta di wore red lehenga and she looked gorgeous..
Beeji comes to the room...
Preeto was putting bangles on Meeta di' s hands..
Preeto: bahut sundar lag rahe ho Meeta di..
Beeji: aaj meri meeta dulhan bangayi..
Meeta: smiles..
Ishu: ha Beeji bahut pyaari lagrahi hain Meeta di..
Beeji then puts Duppata on Meeta di' s head saying kisi ki nazar na lage..
Papaji comes and says that they have to start to Gurudwar now and
Rajbeer and Dhruv are coming to pick them up...as they come they start
to gurudwar..
Pankaj..Bebe..Mammaji..Mammiji..NA..Jassi..Simran..Meera..Sunny..Jogi
and Prithvi are already at Gurudwar..
As Meeta di arrived Pankaj glanced at her and couldnt take off his eyes
as she looked very beautiful..
Wedding ceremony of Pankeeta takes Place very well with all the
rituals..everyone present there feel very happy...Meeta and Pankaj take
blessings of Bebe and then from Beeji Papaji and all the elders present
there..
all congratulated them saying happy Married life..
after wedding was over..all come back to dhillon' s home...

as guys were with Pankaj the moment Pankaj removed his shoes when
entering into home...Sunny immediately took the shoes from the floor
hiding in his back before anyone could see it..
by the time preeto glanced at the floor shoes were not there..she tells
to the gals joote gayab hain lekin koi baat nahi hum dhondlenge..
Sunny slowly hides the shoes in the safe place in the hall itself
before anyone could notice it...
Meeta di and Pankaj were made to sit on the chairs..
Sunny: says out joote maine chupa diya hai thik 15mins ke baad joote
jiska paas hoga jeet unka hoga...
all the boys challenge the gals saying hum game ke liye ready
hain...jeet humara hi hoga...
Gals say harne ke liye tayar hojao kyunki hum jeetne wale hain
Boys: haan haan dekhte hain

Preeto Jassi Ishu Meera Simran Bani and Sonu start searching the hall..Rajbeer Dhruv Jogi and Prithvi also start searching and also keep
an eye on the gals by teasing them that they cant get the shoes...
while searching as Simran finds the shoes...Prithvi sees it and tries to
grab the shoes from her..but simran runs holding the joote..she now
reaches upstairs..Prithvi also runs after her and Preeto shouts Simran
kuch bhi hojaye joote prithvi ki haath mein ane maat dena..
Sunny shouts that 5mins baaki hai jaldi karo...they reach the upstairs
aise nahi kuch karna padega as hez near to simi and to get the shoes he
knowingly trips her but before she falls down he holds her in his arms..simi closes her eyes for a second...that moment Prithvi gets attracted to simi he keeps looking at her instead of snatching the shoes from her..meanwhile Preeto who also follows reaches to the place seeing them like that she opens her mouth wide open...bani also comes up through other side of stairs.. Preeto signals Bani to take the shoes from simi..Bani nods...Simi opens her eyes and looks at him confused and same time Rajbeer also reaches notices Simi and Prithvi..he finds something between both and says to preeto tumne kuch dekha..Preeto who was busy looking at bani who is going near to simi replies nahi toh tum aisa kyun puch rahe ho...Rajbeer replies bas aise hi kuch nahi...
Bani snatches the shoes from simi' s hand and runs down shouting hum jeet gaye...Prithvi and Simran break from the moment and smile at each other...
Rajbeer: oh no hum hargaye Prithvi
Prithvi: oh ya shit man
Rajbeer: its ok lets go...
Prithvi and Simran walk from there...
Preeto happily says to Rajbeer dekha hum ladkiyan isbaar bhi jeet gaye..after saying this she also walks...Rajbeer saying tum kaha ja
rahe ho Preeto..lifts her up in his arms takes her to the room aside...
Preeto: Rajbeer kya kar rahe ho..
Rajbeer:shh by closing her mouth stopping her from saying anything loud
pins her to the wall in the room..
he then removes his hand..
Prithvi whoz getting down the stairs hears some sound he turns back but
doesnt find anyone so he walks down the stairs...
Rajbeer to Preeto:
smiling looking deep into her eyes asks kya socha hai..
Preeto: sochna...kis baat ki
Rajbeer: humari shaadi ki baare mein
Preeto: smiles...Rajbeer itna jaldi kya hai..
Rajbeer: kyun mrs preeto rajbeer singh bana nahi hai kya..
both lost in the moment looking into each other eyes..

Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere bitaani
Tujh mein basi hain meri jaan haai
Jiya dhadak dhadak
Jiya dhadak dhadak Jaayen

Preeto blushes and by pushing him runs down...

all the gals down shout and hug as they won...Preeto also joins them..
Rajbeer also goes to dhruv and other guys..
gals start asking Pankaj paise do joote lo..
Pankaj smiles and gives them the money...

NA goes to Preeto and says that she wants to talk something important..
Preeto: ha boliye na Neelam Aunty
NA: replies with as always evil smile..abhi nahi Preeto kal baat karte
hain..enjoy the function...
Preeto: acha theek hai aunty mein kal call karti hoon..

Bidaai rasam takes place which was the most emotional moment for the
entire Dhillon Family...
Sunny Meera and Bebe go along with Pankaj and Meeta to Pankaj' s home...
Rajbeer to Preeto before leaving:
tum kaho toh aaj hi baat karlun
Preeto: kya
Rajbeer: humare shaadi ke baare mein Beeji aur Papaji se
Preeto: nahi abhi nahi phir kabhi..
Rajbeer smiles and by saying bye to all leaves along with Prithvi..
all go back to their homes...
Ishu also goes back to home with Dhruv Simran and NA..

Part15
Day19 and Day20:

Preeto calls to NA before starting to Boutique
NA lifts the call..
Preeto: Neelam aunty kal apne bataya tha kuch baat karni thi
NA: bahut khush ho na Preeto lekin meri baat dhyan se sun lo..
Preeto: she doesnt get y suddenly NA talking like that so immediately asks aap aise kyun baat kar rahe ho neelam aunty...
NA: tumne meri beti ka khushiyaan cheen li hai Preeto
Preeto: lekin mein kyun Simran ki..
before she could talk further NA angrily says tumhe rajbeer se alag hona padega..
Preeto: Rajbeer se...
NA: ha Rajbeer se kyunki Simran Rajbeer se pyaar karti hai..aur tum
undono ke beech mein agaye..
Preeto: hearing this she gets shocked..
NA then blackmails preeto that if she will not breakup with Rajbeer
then she will make Ishu' s life hell..
Preeto: tears flows down from her eyes...nahi aap aisa kuch mat kijiye
mujhe meri ishu di ki khushiyaan se badke kuch nahi hai..
NA: with evil smile thats good Preeto
Preeto: lekin rajbeer mujhse bahut pyaar karte hai aunty woh kabhi simran se pyaar nahi karpayenge..
NA: woh sab tum mujhpe chod do Preeto..maine jo kaha woh bas ache se
dhyan rakhna..
Preeto: angrily replies thik hai neelam aunty lekin aap bhi meri baat yaad rakhiya..mein yeh sab sirf ishu di ki khusi ke liye kar rahi hun..dhruv aur ishu di ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte hain..agar aap unke saath kuch bhi bura karenge toh mein...NA interupts dont worry Preeto ishu ki chinta bilkul mat karna..aur ha yeh baat sirf hum dono ke beech mein honi chahiye... they then end the call...
Beeji calls Preeto to have tiffin..
Preeto:mujhe bhuk nahi hai Beeji..
Beeji tries forcing her but she doesnt listen saying bye she leaves to Boutique..
Beeji: yeh achanak kya hogaya Preeto ko..
Simran does notice that Preeto looked bit off so she asks her but Preeto says shez 5n by hiding the truth...both work for the contract as they have to complete all the work soon..
Rajbeer gets busy with work at the Airbase so he doesnt get time to talk to Preeto..
night he calls her but she doesnt lift it knowingly as she decided to ignore him...

Next day morning he calls her again but she cuts the call..
Rajbeer: lagta hai kuch jyada hi busy hogayi hai..

during lunch time Rajbeer calls again but as she doesnt lift..he calls to simran and asks if Preeto has come to boutique...simran says yes...
Rajbeer: ok mein abhi atha hun saath mein lunch karte hain...
Simran then says this to Preeto that Rajbeer is coming now to have lunch with them...
Preeto gets worried and feels that she cant face rajbeer or tell him the truth..so making an excuse of headache she leaves from boutique before he comes..
When Rajbeer comes Simran says that Preeto has jus left home...
Rajbeer: chaligayi lekin hum lunch saath mein karne wale the na
Simran says him that shez suffering with headache...
Rajbeer: thinks to himself getting a doubt is Preeto ignoring me ? but
as hez not sure he thinks no there cant be anything like that...
Simran: asks kya hua?
Rajbeer: kuch nahi and says acha thik hai mein usse baad mein baat karta hun..
while rajbeer and simi were having lunch together Simi gets a call from NA...
Simi: ha mom boliye
NA: lunch hogaya beta
Simran says shez having now along with Rajbeer
hearing this NA feels happy but then asks kya Preeto waha hain
Simi says that preeto left to home as shez unwell..simi then asks NA if there is any work with preeto
NA: replies nahi beta bas aise hi puch rahi thi..
saying bye NA ends the call..
Rajbeer goes back to Airbase after having lunch...in between he thinks to call preeto and ask her how she is but decides not to disturb her by calling as she must be taking rest...

In The Evening at Dhillon' s home:
Sunny comes along with Meera...
he says that hez going to Pathankot today so came here to meet them all once before going back...
Sunny saying that he will invite for their wedding once date is fixed and they all should visit Pathankot and attend marriage..
Beeji and Papaji bless both Sunny and Meera and say that they will all
come for sure...
Sunny and Meera then leave saying bye to all...

at Night:
Preeto after having dinner calls Ishu di..after talking for sometime Preeto asks if everything is fine in home with NA and Dhruv..
Ishu: ha preeto mein yaha thik hun lekin tum achanak aise kyun puch rahe ho..
Preeto: nahi bas aise hai puchrahi thi ishu di..lekin aapko koi bhi takleef ho toh mujhe zarroor batana..
Ishu: smiles and says Preeto mein bahut khush hun..bilkul chinta mat karna..
while they were talking Rajbeer calls preeto but phone keeps coming busy..he tries after sometime her phone still busy..
Rajbeer when tries after 5mins again her phone rings but she doesnt lift his call once again..
Preeto: Rajbeer mai kaise batao aapse..she cries remembering all their
sweet moments...
and feels bad for ignoring him but there is no other way left for her as NA has said to be away from Rajbeer..

Rajbeer: aisi kya baat hogi..
he gets worried thinking y she is not talking to him from yesterday...

Tujhe sochta hoon main shaam-o-subah
Iss se zyada tujhe aur chahoon toh kya
Tere hi khyalon mein dooba raha
Iss se zyada tujhe aur chahoon toh kya
Bas saare gham mein jaana, sang hoon tere
Har ik mausam main jaana, sang hoon tere
Ab itne imtehaan bhi naa le mere

he decides to meet her tommorow morning...

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Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
All who have missed reading any one of the part from this SS then check page 1 i have updated the pageno' s list of all the updates in the first post itself..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome yaar. I always your descriptions they are so detailed. Well done and keep up the good work.
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Posted: 13 years ago


Good Job👏👏👏, hope preeto reveals the truth to rajbeer soon :)..thanks for writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 14 : I enjoyed reading it ..simi nd prithvi scene comes good thank god u showed some one to simi...and Rajpreet scene is good it's like kc episode
Part 15: This is near to last episodes continue in this way it's very interesting feels like watching the show
as usual waiting for next part😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sneha error.
Rajbeer: humari shaadi ki baare mein
Preeto: smiles...Rajbeer itna jaldi kya hai..
Rajbeer: kyun mrs rajbeer preeto singh bana nahi hai kya..
both lost in the moment looking into each other eyes..


It should be like this
Rajbeer: kyun Mrs. Preeto Rajbeer singh baana nahi hai kya.
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Sana
oops sorry hehe edited i should have read it once before posting it then mistake nahi hota ...like always rajbeer comes first in mind so wrote his name first...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
thankuuu dear...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love03



Good Job👏👏👏, hope preeto reveals the truth to rajbeer soon :)..thanks for writing.

yaaa she will reveal im writing it na hehe...😆
thanku for reading dear...😃

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