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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: xxAqeelahxx

i read all your parts ... this is how preeto should have been written ... you write really well ... and the songs you put in them are good also ... and the dialogues are great .. its not dragging ... flow of story is great

cv's dragged it tooo long ... though... with sunny ... im glad i caught up now i can read ur next part on time 😛


Cvs went wrong only in sunny track remaining they were awsomeee...😃
thanks a lott for reading it and appreciating...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part13:
Day 16:
it was the day of Haldi Rasam...Pankaj wore white kurta pyjama...Bebe and Meera Sunny apply haldi to pankaj and other side haldi rasam also started in dhillion' s home...
Ishu dressed in yellow saree comes along with Simi who also wore simple yellow kurta..all in dhillon' s home were dressed in yellow...they bring Meeta di downstairs..Haldi rasam was done in the hall...First Beeji applies Haldi to Meeta di followed by Ishu..Preeto..Bani..Sonu..Simran...
After haldi rasam was over Beeji asks simran when NA is coming..
Simran: Beeji Mom se baat huyi thi kal raat arahe hain ghar.. dad bahut busy hain so unko yaha ana nahi hoga lekin Mom shaadi pe zarroor ayenge...
Beeji: acha thik hai simran puttar..
Simran saying bye to all from there goes directly to boutique..and Ishu stays back for 3 days so that she can help in work...

Day17:
Mehandi and Sangeet
Rajbeer goes and picks up Prithvi..on the way Prithvi asks to stop the car at the bouquet shop...after buying bouquet they then reach dhillon' s home while Rajbeer was parking the car..Dhruv and Simi also come...
Prithvi sees Simran and goes to her..
Prithvi: Hey Simran how are u..?
Simran: hiii Prithvi im good...so kaise ho...bahut dino ke baad tum amritsar pe...
Prithvi: ya ana pada its nice to meet u all again...
waise tum bilkul nahi badle yaar...
Simran: smiles ha tum bhi toh bilkul nahi badle...
dhruv and rajbeer say lets go inside...
Rajbeer then introduces prithvi to Pankaj...
Prithvi gives the bouquet saying congrats..
and then dhruv and rajbeer introduce him to beeji and papaji who ask him to attend marriage tommorow..
Bani Simi and Sonu chit chat..Jogi and Jassi also come they greet pankaj..Jassi then goes to meet Meeta di who is at upstairs in her room...
Preeto..Ishu and Jassi ji help Meeta in getting ready...Preeto wore dark blue anarkali dress but she didnt get ready yet...
Mehandi and Sangeet ceremony was going to start all the guests have arrived..So beeji asks to bring Meeta down...Preeto says them she will come in few mins after getting ready...So Ishu Jassi ji bring Meeta down...Meeta looked beautiful in blue saree..Pankaj couldnot take off his eyes..
Meeta first goes and takes ashriwaad from Bebe..
Mehendi Function starts
Mammi ji asks meeta to select the mehandi design..
Ishu Jassi Meera and Sonu sit along with Meeta..
Mammi ji starts putting mehandi design on Meeta' s palm..
Sunny holding the handycam capturing video and pics of everyone present there..
simran and prithvi talk for sometime..
Simran: so howz life..? abh tak toh tumhe gf mil chuki hogi
Prithvi: kaha simran abhi tak koi nahi mila..dekhte hain aaj koi miljayega shayad shaadi ka mahal jo hai..
Simran: acha dont say me...
Prithvi: sach mai yaar simran aajtak mera pasand ki ladki koi nahi mili...
Simran: acha acha thik hai..i just hope tumhare type ka koi ladki jaldi miljaye tumhe..
Prithvi: thanku...aur Boutique kaisa chal raha hai..
Simran: ya good..
Dhruv Rajbeer and Jogi also join them who were with pankaj till now...

Preeto in her room:
she puts on little makeup..just a touch of eye shadow and mascara to accent her eyes...puts on the bangles that Rajbeer has given her..Meanwhile she gets a message...so checks her mobile..seeing its Rajbeer msg smiles...
Rajbeer: kitne time lagaoge niche ane mein
Preeto sends reply to him thodi bahut toh intezaar kar hi sakte ho..arahi hun..
she then brushes her hair looking into the mirror and puts on the earrings..
Finally Preeto comes down...he sees her walking down the stairs..he kept starring at her mesmerized by her beauty as she looked gorgeous like angel...

Tujhse mila toh jaagi duaayein
Aur nazar ne sajda kiya
Jannat zameen pe aayi utar ke
Khushiyon ne jaise chun sa liya

Rajbeer standing with Dhruv and Jogi...as Dhruv and Jogi were posing for pics..Preeto first goes to Rajbeer...
Preeto: kyun dekhte rehgaye na
Rajbeer: smiles..and looks at her..

Ho tere ishq mein dooba rahe
Din-raat yunhi sada
Mere khwaab se aankhein teri ik pal na hoye judaa
Mera naam tu haathon pe apne likhe baar haan
Aye kaash ke aisa bhi ik din laaye woh khuda
Tu hi mera mera mera...
Tu hi mera aaa... Tu hi mera aaa...
Tu hi mera mera mera...

Preeto: acha tumhare liye surprise hai
Rajbeer: acha kya ?
Preeto: thoda intezaar karlo saying this she walks looking at rajbeer and again hits Prithvi who was talking to Simran..
Preeto: oh sorry..
prithvi and preeto look and at a time say Tum...both surprised to see each other again..
Simran standing there along with Prithvi gets confused but as Dhruv called her for photo she excuses and goes to him..

Prithvi and Preeto:
Prithvi: Tum yaha
Preeto: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho
Prithvi: maine pehle pucha hai
Preeto: talks to herself musibat yaha bhi pahunchgaya...
then replies yeh mera ghar hai aur meri Meeta di ki function lekin tumhe yaha kisne bulaya hai
Prithvi: mein apne dost Rajbeer ke saath aya hun agar mujhe pata hota yeh tumhara ghar hai toh mein kabhi nahi ata
Preeto: toh abh kisne kaha rukne ke liye
meanwhile simran comes and asks tum dono pehle se jante ho ek dusre ko...
Preeto replies nahi kaun hain yeh
Simran starts introducing
Simran: yeh Prithvi hai...school classmate..bhai aur rajbeer ka bahut acha dost ..
and Prithvi yeh Preeto hai...we work together in boutique..
Prithvi: oh acha hii preeto ji
Preeto: hello Prithvi ji
both shake hands with disinterested smiles on their face...
Rajbeer joins them kya baate chal raha hai..
Prithvi: decorations acha hain yaar idea kiska hoga..
Simran: idea Rajbeer ka hain Prithvi..
Prithvi: kya baat hai Rajbeer..
Rajbeer: smiles and says thanks yaar
Preeto excusing goes to meeta di..
Sonu: arey preeto di aapne kitna der lagadi ane mein
Preeto: kya baat hai meeta di ache se mehendi lagvarahe ho...
Preeto asks Beeji to come and sit with them...
Sonu asks Beeji to sing song..
Ishu: ha Beeji gayiye na gaana
Beeji agrees and starts singing song...even Bani keeping the tray of cooldrinks comes and sits...Simran also comes and sits with them...
Beeji sings:

Mehndi Hai Rachnewaali, Haathon Mein Gehri Laali
kahe Sakhiyaan, Ab Kaliyaan
haathon Mein Khilnewaali Hain
tere Mann Ko, Jeevan Ko
nayi Khushiyaan Milnewaali Hai
o Hariyali Banno
le Jaana Tujhko Guiyyaan Aane Waale Hai Saiyyaan
thaamenge Aake Baiyyaan, Goonjegi Shehnaayi
angnaayi, Angnaayi

(all sitting clap sing along with beeji)
mehndi Hai Rachnewaali, Haathon Mein Gehri Laali
kahe Sakhiyaan, Ab Kaliyaan
haathon Mein Khilnewaali Hain
tere Mann Ko, Jeevan Ko
nayi Khushiyaan Milnewaali Hai

(sisters-Ishu Preeto Bani Sonu then start dancing together..
Simran Jassi ji and Meera sit with Meeta di..Bebe Papaji Mama ji Pankaj Sunny Dhruv Rajbeer Prithvi Jogi and everyone present there enjoy watching it)

gaaye Maiya Aur Mausi, Gaaye Behna Aur Bhabhi
ke Mehndi Khil Jaaye, Rang Laaye Hariyaali Banni
gaaye Phoofi Aur Chaachi, Gaaye Naani Aur Daadi
ke Mehndi Mann Bhaaye, Saj Jaaye Hariyaali Banni
mehndi Roop Sanwaare, O Mehndi Rang Nikhaare, Ho
hariyaali Banni Ke Aanchal Mein Utrenge Taarein
mehndi Hai Rachnewaali, Haathon Mein Gehri Laali
kahe Sakhiyaan, Ab Kaliyaan
haathon Mein Khilnewaali Hain
tere Mann Ko, Jeevan Ko
nayi Khushiyaan Milnewaali Hai

Mammiji completes putting mehandi..Meeta di feels very happy seeing it looked beautiful..
Preeto asks abh meri baari Mammi ji mujhe bhi lagani hai mehandi
Mammji: haan kyun nahi
she starts putting mehandi to preeto' s palms..Preeto asks to leave some space for her name to fit in..she says to Mammiji that she wants to write her name..Mammiji smiles and says ok...
Sonu starts asking aur mujhe mehandi..
Ishu says she will do it for sonu..sonu feels happy...
meanwhile beeji asks Bani to go and give cooldrinks to all present there and then after sometime gulab jamuns also...
Beeji and Papaji greet all the guests..
Simi goes to dhruv..rajbeer..prithvi..jogi who are standing and talking..
Simran: Prithvi tum toh school days mein bahut acha dance karte the..
Rajbeer: rite simi waise bhi aaj yeh nachne wala hai yaha
Prithvi: kya yaar dance ka chode huye bahut din hogaye..tumlog toh mere peeche padgaye..
Dhruv: aaj koi bahana nahi chalega prithvi tumhe toh nachna padega..
Rajbeer slowly escapes from the discussion there and Preeto also comes after putting mehandi to both her hands..both stand in the corner and talk..Bani comes with the tray of gulab jamuns and asks to have..Rajbeer takes one cup of gulab jamun saying thanku..
Preeto: mujhe bhi khana hai gulab jamun
Bani: arey di aapne toh mehandi lagavayi hai kaise khaoge baad mein kha lena saying this she leaves from there...
Preeto: subah se thik se kuch nahi khaya uper se gulab jamun bhi haath se chali gayi
Rajbeer: he having gulab jamun says toh kisne kaha sabse pehle jake mehandi lagavane ki..
Preeto: Rajbeer plz aap khilao na
Rajbeer: kya...pagal ho...koi dekhlega preeto
Preeto: yaha kisne kaha..kitchen mein rahunga aap chupke se waha ajana
Rajbeer: acha tum ruko waha
she waits in the kitchen...he goes and gets one more cup of gulab jamun asking bani...then he goes to kitchen..
they make sure that no one sees them together..
Rajbeer feeds her gulab jamun with a spoon and she haves it..
Preeto: smiles and says aap kitne ache hain rajbeer
Rajbeer: kyun khila raha hoon isliye..
Meanwhile Beeji calls Preeto..
Preeto: haaye rabba beeji she runs from the kitchen saying to him terrace after half n hour yaad hain na surprise..
Rajbeer: smiles ok..
he joins Dhruv and jogi who were standing near to the place were pankaj sat along with Bebe and Mamma ji and Papa ji..
Jogi: kaha rehgaya tha tu
Rajbeer: jus went to wash my hands
Jogi: oh acha thik hai
jogi and dhruv give a look to eachother with smile...
Preeto comes to them kya Dhruv jiju Jogi ji sirf baate kar rahe ho jadoo dikhaye na mehandi aur sangeet hain nachna gana honi chahiye...she finds sunny with handycam arey sunny ji ladke walo ki taraf se aye ho aapko toh aaj nachna padega ..
Sunny: ha preeto ji kyun nahi...
Preeto: toh der kis baat ki...
Pankaj: he hears and says ha sunny praji shuru karna..
Jogi ji takes the handycam from sunny...
sunny starts singing and dancing...
Le jaayenge le jaayenge, dilwaale dulhaniya le jaayenge
Haan, le jaayenge le jaayenge, dilwaale dulhaniya le jaayenge
Le jaayenge le jaayenge, dilwaale dulhaniya le jaayenge
(he dances Looking at Meera who sat with Meeta di..in between Bani pulls Meera to dance along with sunny...)
Arre reh jaayenge reh jaayenge, gharwaale dekhte reh jaayenge
Reh jaayenge reh jaayenge, gharwaale dekhte reh jaayenge
Arre le jaayenge le jaayenge, dilwaale dulhaniya le jaayenge

as Sunny and Meera dance was over Dhruv and Ishu dance for Ishq sufiyana song..in between Dhrishu' s dance Preeto goes to terrace after removing her mehandi..Rajbeer also goes to her)

(Dhruv grabs her Hand..Ishu blushing and shying..both dance together...all enjoy watching them together...)

Rab ki qawali Hai ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali Hai ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali Hai ishq koi
Subah ki laali Hai ishq..
Girta sa jharna Hai ishq koi
Uthta sa kalmaa Hai ishq koi
Saanson mein liptaa
Hai ishq koi
Aankhon mein dikhta
Hai ishq..
Mere dil ko'
Tu jaan se juda kar de
Yoon bas tu..Mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu Meri chaal tu
Bas kar de aashiqana
Tere waaste..
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Rajpreet At Terrace:
Preeto shows her Mehandi to him...saying surprise...
he holds her both hands and asks kya mehandi surprise hai..
Preeto: oho Rajbeer thik se dekhiya na..
Rajbeer : sees again he finds name in center of her left palm...he says out Rajpreet smiles and looks at her feeling very happy...
preeto tumne likha hai..
Preeto: haa hum dono ka naam acha hai na surprise...
Rajbeer: by bringing her hand close and bending his head gives a kiss
both look into each other eyes with smiles on their face...

Tu hai ab jo baahon mein, qarar hai
Rab ka shukrana
Saanson mein hai nasha, khumar hai
Rab ka shukrana
Tu hi ab mera deen hai, imaan hai
Rab ka shukrana
Mera kalma hai tu, azaan hai
Rab ka shukrana
Rab ka, shukrana

Preeto then says dekha meri mehandi ka rang kitna lal hai...
pata hai Rajbeer kehte hain ki mehandi ka rang jitna zyaada lal hota hain, utna zyaada unki pati..she pauses and blushing says meri matlab utna jyada pyaar karne wala milega saying this she was about to leave..he stops her by holding her wrist...coming close to her he hugs her from back and whispers in her ears..i love u...she blushes and runs from there to downstairs where everyone were enjoying watching Jogi and Jassi dancing for a song..

After sometime Pankaj and Meeta were made to sit together..

Preeto and Jassi sing and dance for the song bindiya chamakegi..

Bindiya chamkegi, choodi khankegi
Teri neend ude te ud jaaye
Kajra behkega, gajra mehkega
Maahi rus daaye te rus jaaye
Bindiya chamkegi..

Maine maana hua tu diwaana, zulaam tere saath hua
Main kahan le jaaoo apne laung ka lashkaara
Is lashkaare se, aake dwaare se
Chal mud daaye te mud jaaye
Bindiya chamkegi..

Prithvi then dances along with Simi by grabbing her hand...

Roop hai tera sona, soni teri paayal
Hoye, roop hai tera sona sona, soni teri paayal
Chhan chhana chhan aise chhanke, kar de sabko ghaayal
Keh raha aankhon ka kaajal, ishq mein jeena marna, yay

--ALL--everyone joins- Rajbeer Preeto...Dhruv Ishu..Jogi Jassi...Sunny Meera...
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava maahiya
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava, yea

Gals-
Roop hai mera sona, soni meri paayal
Roop hai mera sona sona, soni meri paayal
Chhan chhana chhan aise chhanke, kar de sabko ghaayal

-Boys-
Hey, keh raha aankhon ka kaajal, ishq mein jeena marna
Everybody!

--ALL--
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava maahiya
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava

--Gals--
Maahiya ve aaja maahi, maahiya ve aaja
Maahiya ve aaja maahi, maahiya ve aaja

--Boys--
Aaja gori nachle, ay shava
Nachle ve nachle, ay shava
Arre, aaja gori nachle, ay shava
Ae, nachle ve nachle, ay shava

Dekha tenu pehli pehli baar ve
Hone laga dil beqaraar ve
Rabba mainu kee ho gaya
Dil jaaniye, haai mainu kee ho gaya

--Gals--
Sunke teri baatein sone yaar ve
Maahi mainu tere naal pyaar ve
Haai main mar jaawa
Dil jaaniye, haai main mar jaawa

in between Prithvi drags Pankaj and Meeta to dance along with them...
--ALL--
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava maahiya
Ve shava shava bhangra, ve shava shava bhangra

As after sangeet ended everyone had dinner together...
Simi then leaves early saying NA will be coming back home...
as she goes back home NA arrives in sometime...both hugg..
Simran: kaise ho mom kaise raha goa trip
NA: mein thik hun and had fun...
kaisa raha aaj function..
Simran: bahut enjoy kiya mom
NA: Grtt...apne bataya nahi Rajbeer kaisa hai aur apni pyaar ke baare bataya hai ki nahi..
Simran: she hugs and says Rajbeer sirf mere dost hain Mom..sirf acha dost aur kuch nahi..
NA: lekin tum pyaar karte ho na beta abhi tak bataya kyun nahi Rajbeer se..
Simran: mom Rajbeer Preeto se pyaar karta hai mujhse nahi..yeh baat mujhe der se pata chala i was wrong...hez just my best friend mom..
NA: aisa nahi hosakta uss Preeto ko toh mein..
Simran: Mom plz isme preeto ki kya galti hain...i just dont want to talk about it anymore...so plz iss baat ko yahi chod dijiye aur mein sach mein bahut khush hoon very happy for Rajbeer she says this smiling...
NA: also smiles ok beta..
dhruv kab araha hai..
Simran: bhai ko thoda late hoga..aur Ishu bhabi kal tak wahi rukenge...
aap freshup hojaye mom bahut thak gaye honge..
NA: says ok and leaves to her room..

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Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks, nicely written, it all reminded me of the fun times during ishu/dhruvs wedding..I hope this Prithvi doesn't start falling for preeto or something haha...great job 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sneha your update is awesome yaar. I love your detailed writings and the songs you choose are the best. Hats off to you girl.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww while reading this i also felt like dancing ..Bilkul shaadi ka maahol bana diya hai and great songs selection ..Sneha - your writing reminded me of all old episodes very much.
Mehndi mein Rajpreet 😍 was sooo cute
Loved the episode...Prithvi bhi preeto ko pasand karega kya ? ha ha
glad that this time nobody interrupted Gulab jamun ..
Overall great going and can't wait for the next part...
Kudos dear ...take a big BOW
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Originally posted by: love03


thanks, nicely written, it all reminded me of the fun times during ishu/dhruvs wedding..I hope this Prithvi doesn't start falling for preeto or something haha...great job 👏

😆 dont worry only Rajpreet becoz its my FF hehe...Prithvi is for someone...😉😛
thanks dear..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bobby1810

Sneha your update is awesome yaar. I love your detailed writings and the songs you choose are the best. Hats off to you girl.

thanks a lottt Gurminder...🀗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ankitaluv

Aww while reading this i also felt like dancing ..Bilkul shaadi ka maahol bana diya hai and great songs selection ..Sneha - your writing reminded me of all old episodes very much.

Mehndi mein Rajpreet 😍 was sooo cute
Loved the episode...Prithvi bhi preeto ko pasand karega kya ? ha ha
glad that this time nobody interrupted Gulab jamun ..
Overall great going and can't wait for the next part...
Kudos dear ...take a big BOW

thankuu dear...🀗
i cant forget old epsiodes of sssp Saina so adding it those were the bestt epsiodes with many sweet moments of Rajpreet...😃
Preeto doesnt like prithvi as of now but see she will turn sweet very soon...😆 and Prithvi is meant for someone else...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice,
while reading I could imagine ths scenes ;-(
😭😭😭😭😭😭
Miss it a lot

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